Me and my friends are in. Here are my suggestions:

Oh God, we did it, it ain't the best game, it's short, but at least we finished it, this was my first Ludum Dare, I really liked, looking forward for more! For my first Jam I don't think it is thaaaat bad.

You can check it out here:

https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/47/delayed-delivery

Feedback is appreciated!

We are only 5 reviews short of 20, please play and rate it, it's not that good, but we worked very hard on it! Thank you

https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/47/delayed-delivery