Growing (a Lump) by Ebbasuke
Growing (a Lump) is a short and creepy text adventure game made in Twine2. I wanted to practice storytelling, so I chose to have no images nor sound in my game.
The game is hosted at http://www.philome.la/Ebbasuke/growing
You can also download it as an html file. I think you could copy it to Twine and see how it has been made, but I haven't tried it.
- Ebbasuke
The game is hosted at http://www.philome.la/Ebbasuke/growing
You can also download it as an html file. I think you could copy it to Twine and see how it has been made, but I haven't tried it.
- Ebbasuke
What would've helped set the mood would be some custom fonts (http://twinery.org/wiki/frequently_asked_questions#how_do_i_import_a_google_web_font) Google has tons of them and they're really easy to import. Perhaps changing the background and font colours. If I can help with that, let me know, I fidgetted a bit with that for my own Twine submission (whether it helped or not, I'll leave up to the reviewers :)).
Cool stuff, keep it up!
Also, in some places, it feels like the links don't make it very clear what action the protagonist will take. That made it a bit hard to go for a different route when replaying.
But those very small problems aside, this is a good, understated body-horror story with a very nice amount of branching. I enjoyed playing!