{"author_link":"\/author\/ebbasuke\/","author_name":"Ebbasuke","author_uid":"50603","comments":[{"author_name":"Jod","author_uid":"20442","time":"Dec 14, 2015 @ 2:34pm","epoch":1450103340,"text":"Solid writing. The story flows well!\r<br\/>\r<br\/>What would've helped set the mood would be some custom fonts (http:\/\/twinery.org\/wiki\/frequently_asked_questions#how_do_i_import_a_google_web_font) Google has tons of them and they're really easy to import. Perhaps changing the background and font colours. If I can help with that, let me know, I fidgetted a bit with that for my own Twine submission (whether it helped or not, I'll leave up to the reviewers :)).\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Cool stuff, keep it up!"},{"author_name":"fullmontis","author_uid":"21736","time":"Dec 15, 2015 @ 5:06pm","epoch":1450198860,"text":"The endings are quite chilling. I really enjoyed the story."},{"author_name":"Andrew Deem","author_uid":"25356","time":"Dec 17, 2015 @ 6:37pm","epoch":1450377120,"text":"Two out of the three endings gave me good chills. Very creepy! I like it. :) I think adding some nice visuals with the story (pixel art even) would add a TON to it. Still, you set up a good mood and story. Good job!"},{"author_name":"Christina Nordlander","author_uid":"20504","time":"Dec 18, 2015 @ 10:07pm","epoch":1450476120,"text":"I love horror, and this is really well written. The only minor nitpick I have to make is that there's a bit too much space devoted to talking about Ella; on the one hand, we get a good sense of her character, but on the other hand, it feels a bit disproportionate in such a short story. But like I said, that's minor.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Also, in some places, it feels like the links don't make it very clear what action the protagonist will take. That made it a bit hard to go for a different route when replaying.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>But those very small problems aside, this is a good, understated body-horror story with a very nice amount of branching. I enjoyed playing!"},{"author_name":"h.attila","author_uid":"8403","time":"Dec 23, 2015 @ 10:25pm","epoch":1450909200,"text":"It's an interesting take on the theme but I found it ultimately too linear and short."},{"author_name":"miwuc","author_uid":"6177","time":"Dec 27, 2015 @ 6:34pm","epoch":1451240940,"text":"Nice take on the theme, a lot more original than trees! I thought it was well written, but could use a bit more action. I liked the ending with the mirror. The other ones had a nice thing going on but I found them a bit underwhelming. Keep that vibe but develop it more!"},{"author_name":"kabel","author_uid":"53077","time":"Dec 28, 2015 @ 6:55pm","epoch":1451328600,"text":"Great creepypastas. A slightly longer story with more choices would have been better, but this was nice either way."}],"images":["ld34\/50603-6b635121d79a099452136208c10ef153.jpg","ld34\/50603-dd7a6b0a74d45812df3e88052797013b.jpg"],"links":[{"url":"http:\/\/www.philome.la\/Ebbasuke\/growing","text":"Web"},{"url":"https:\/\/drive.google.com\/file\/d\/0B_c9U3rsTROOd29pZ0ZDR3N3R1E\/view?usp=sharing","text":"Windows"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"5172","g_author":"50603","g_event":"LD34","g_eventkey":"31","g_subevent":"JAM","g_urlkey":"5230","g_title":"Growing (a Lump)","g_status":"UCHK1","g_place":"99999","g_commentcount":"7","g_site2_node_id":"0","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":[],"node":null,"orig_images":["http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/511439\/50603-shot0-1450045109.png-eq-900-500.jpg","http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/511439\/50603-shot1-1450045109.png-eq-900-500.jpg"],"text":"Growing (a Lump) is a short and creepy text adventure game made in Twine2. I wanted to practice storytelling, so I chose to have no images nor sound in my game.\r\n\r\nThe game is hosted at http:\/\/www.philome.la\/Ebbasuke\/growing\r\nYou can also download it as an html file. I think you could copy it to Twine and see how it has been made, but I haven't tried it.\r\n\r\n- Ebbasuke","title":"Growing (a Lump)"}