The 10 (other) Seconds Journey by PaperBlurt
Made by PaperBlurt - http://twitter.com/paperblurt
This is my first time attending Ludum Dare.
Went around all weekend pondering upon the theme, and finally I think I got something good together.
Made in: Twine
Graphics/Style: PaperBlurt
About "The 10 (other) Seconds Journey":
I thought about the theme and felt that I wanted to do something different with the theme, at the same time as I want the ones playing it maybe laugh or stop and think for a second. I hope I've achieved that.
I always try to incorporate parts from my own life into what I create..
Enjoy and don't forget to rate!
UPDATE 28/8:
Just realised that my game actual is permadeath, I just wanted to add a bit of challenge in the game. But permadeath stays during the compo at least.. then we'll see!
UPDATE 30/8:
Wrote a Post Mortem that you can read here: http://www.ludumdare.com/compo/2013/08/30/post-mortem-the-10-other-seconds-journey-2/
This is my first time attending Ludum Dare.
Went around all weekend pondering upon the theme, and finally I think I got something good together.
Made in: Twine
Graphics/Style: PaperBlurt
About "The 10 (other) Seconds Journey":
I thought about the theme and felt that I wanted to do something different with the theme, at the same time as I want the ones playing it maybe laugh or stop and think for a second. I hope I've achieved that.
I always try to incorporate parts from my own life into what I create..
Enjoy and don't forget to rate!
UPDATE 28/8:
Just realised that my game actual is permadeath, I just wanted to add a bit of challenge in the game. But permadeath stays during the compo at least.. then we'll see!
UPDATE 30/8:
Wrote a Post Mortem that you can read here: http://www.ludumdare.com/compo/2013/08/30/post-mortem-the-10-other-seconds-journey-2/
| Web | http://10seconds.paperblurt.com/ |
| Source | http://10seconds.paperblurt.com/paperblurt_10seconds-source.txt |
| Original URL | https://ludumdare.com/compo/ludum-dare-27/?action=preview&uid=26530 |
Ratings
| Coolness | 100% | 1 |
| Overall | 2.71 | 878 |
| Audio | 1.37 | 951 |
| Fun | 2.38 | 962 |
| Graphics | 1.84 | 1119 |
| Humor | 2.71 | 306 |
| Innovation | 2.78 | 694 |
| Mood | 2.72 | 559 |
| Theme | 2.57 | 1003 |
Good idea, good looking theme but I feel that sounds to accompany the text are missing, specially with those short lines.
Thanks for playing the game, and kinda enjoying it. You mean I should add in sounds too?
I found it amazingly thoughtful. :)
this stands on the line between quirky and I have no idea whats going on.
My hat off to you!
Some of the story snippets were pretty good (the war zone bit was probably my favourite), and I like the story/story pun, but as a whole, this seemed a bit too incomprehensible for me. I've got nothing against absurdity and symbolism, but here, it all seemed too vague to add up to much.
Hard one to rate: I enjoyed playing it, but I can't quite put my finger on what I was doing.
Like your comment and I understand it. This is not for everyone, but I haven tried to make a game that excludes anyone either.
Glad for your feedback..
Appreciate it!
Some music really could've added to the eerie atmosphere.
I specially like how it works with your imagination.