{"author_link":"\/author\/paperblurt\/","author_name":"PaperBlurt","author_uid":"26530","comments":[{"author_name":"ananasblau","author_uid":"3562","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 7:26am","epoch":1377501660,"text":"Took me a few runs to get through to the last floor and had none to spare. But then I got it right :)\rGood idea, good looking theme but I feel that sounds to accompany the text are missing, specially with those short lines."},{"author_name":"PaperBlurt","author_uid":"26530","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 8:19am","epoch":1377504840,"text":"Hi man.\r\rThanks for playing the game, and kinda enjoying it. You mean I should add in sounds too?"},{"author_name":"RobotParking","author_uid":"26005","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 3:03pm","epoch":1377529080,"text":"Delightfully bewildering."},{"author_name":"madk","author_uid":"1540","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 3:25pm","epoch":1377530400,"text":""Jew Bet". Heh. You're a bad person."},{"author_name":"withoutpillow","author_uid":"27525","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 3:54pm","epoch":1377532140,"text":"creative take on the theme, i like it!"},{"author_name":"BradleySmith","author_uid":"14944","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 4:45pm","epoch":1377535200,"text":"Quite deep, but in a good way."},{"author_name":"Spelchan","author_uid":"15656","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 5:10pm","epoch":1377536700,"text":"Surprisingly fun text adventure. I might have just restarted the game from the current chapter instead of restarting the game as replaying multiple chapters is a bit annoying."},{"author_name":"Latcarf","author_uid":"19457","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 5:14pm","epoch":1377536940,"text":"That's, hum, odd. And a bit boring, to be frank. You should at least add some music to it."},{"author_name":"Mesene","author_uid":"6870","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 5:16pm","epoch":1377537060,"text":"I felt like science dog :S"},{"author_name":"dmastergames","author_uid":"27437","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 5:16pm","epoch":1377537060,"text":"Was amusing. Worth Playing. Good Job."},{"author_name":"pbdiode","author_uid":"7263","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 5:27pm","epoch":1377537720,"text":"Interesting! Great use of twine!"},{"author_name":"Puzzlem00n","author_uid":"11003","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 11:54pm","epoch":1377560940,"text":"Huh. Fun. It has those little hints of feeling deep. It's good."},{"author_name":"everblind","author_uid":"26609","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 6:18pm","epoch":1377627180,"text":"Good entry :) Congrats"},{"author_name":"doonay21","author_uid":"18952","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 6:19pm","epoch":1377627240,"text":"Nice work!"},{"author_name":"Lokarunith","author_uid":"25012","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 7:29pm","epoch":1377631440,"text":"It was very nice and fun to play, some music would help to settle the mood."},{"author_name":"Mr. Jif","author_uid":"19204","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 7:50pm","epoch":1377632700,"text":"Very interesting little text adventure"},{"author_name":"PaperBlurt","author_uid":"26530","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 8:17pm","epoch":1377634320,"text":"Hmm.. Seems like music would've added that little extra.."},{"author_name":"tripleVisionGames","author_uid":"12495","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 8:27pm","epoch":1377634920,"text":"Great mood. Quite strangely poetic, bit frustrating starting again each time though."},{"author_name":"devi ever","author_uid":"22858","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 5:58am","epoch":1377669180,"text":"At first I was like.... uh... ok... I guess... and then I was like... Heck yeah!\r\rI found it amazingly thoughtful. :)"},{"author_name":"garygreen","author_uid":"13914","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 7:20pm","epoch":1377717300,"text":"That was off-the-wall, and I thought it was great. :-)"},{"author_name":"TammiLion","author_uid":"23930","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 7:20pm","epoch":1377717300,"text":"Wow! I made it in one play through and didn't understand to much of the jokes as I am dutch XD Hilarious :P"},{"author_name":"Pinktreeleaf","author_uid":"27800","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 7:23pm","epoch":1377717480,"text":"WTF\rthis stands on the line between quirky and I have no idea whats going on."},{"author_name":"Fluffy Tigers in the Sky","author_uid":"26553","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 7:52pm","epoch":1377719220,"text":"Interesting"},{"author_name":"Toshiro","author_uid":"25304","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 8:53pm","epoch":1377722880,"text":"Liked a lot !"},{"author_name":"Cryovat","author_uid":"19066","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 9:10pm","epoch":1377723900,"text":"...wh... what. Rock Hudson? Titanic.. My head hurts. This is hillarious, but so, so confusing... And my sides hurt too. And my eyes are full of tears. :D\r\rMy hat off to you!"},{"author_name":"udo","author_uid":"6821","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 9:17pm","epoch":1377724320,"text":"Wow, that was surreal. Thanks for making this, as weird as it made me feel at times ;)"},{"author_name":"flamecow","author_uid":"27477","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 9:36pm","epoch":1377725460,"text":"An interesting and amusing idea. Not bad!"},{"author_name":"Gabriel","author_uid":"11099","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 10:40pm","epoch":1377729300,"text":"Lovely! It really does get you to think about life and choices... The burning people part is incredibly visceral. Congratulations! I admit I got curious about your personal story. :)"},{"author_name":"theholychicken","author_uid":"25095","time":"Aug 29, 2013 @ 12:12am","epoch":1377734820,"text":"Ahaha.. Enjoyed this one, feels like an interactive poem. Nice work!"},{"author_name":"matthewvermaak","author_uid":"26368","time":"Aug 29, 2013 @ 2:14am","epoch":1377742140,"text":"Great writing. Took a few times, but I got there! Good job :0)"},{"author_name":"Liz England","author_uid":"22429","time":"Aug 29, 2013 @ 8:11pm","epoch":1377806760,"text":"I enjoyed this. I love all the fast switching I have to do mentally each time I get to a new (second) story. Kind of like quickfire trivia, where I felt I had to answer fast but the questions were always totally from left field."},{"author_name":"Christina Nordlander","author_uid":"20504","time":"Aug 29, 2013 @ 9:25pm","epoch":1377811200,"text":"You've done some very cool stuff in Twine here (speaking as someone who has Twine but is very far from having learnt all the tricks). Nice use of colours, visuals, timers, etc.\r\rSome of the story snippets were pretty good (the war zone bit was probably my favourite), and I like the story\/story pun, but as a whole, this seemed a bit too incomprehensible for me. I've got nothing against absurdity and symbolism, but here, it all seemed too vague to add up to much.\r\rHard one to rate: I enjoyed playing it, but I can't quite put my finger on what I was doing."},{"author_name":"Eddy93","author_uid":"19469","time":"Aug 29, 2013 @ 11:52pm","epoch":1377820020,"text":"Very original concept"},{"author_name":"PaperBlurt","author_uid":"26530","time":"Aug 30, 2013 @ 5:21am","epoch":1377839760,"text":"Hi @Christina.\r\rLike your comment and I understand it. This is not for everyone, but I haven tried to make a game that excludes anyone either.\r\rGlad for your feedback.."},{"author_name":"GSM Productions","author_uid":"16481","time":"Aug 30, 2013 @ 10:33am","epoch":1377858480,"text":"Funny twine game, if a little disconcerting :D Managed to beat it on my second run though, felt pretty good. And all in all a very nice experience, really different!"},{"author_name":"Hayawi","author_uid":"20256","time":"Aug 30, 2013 @ 11:43am","epoch":1377862680,"text":"I liked the idea, but I felt that some desicions were sort of random, while others actually did have meaning. Made it on my second try :P (I just had to punch that guy in the face)"},{"author_name":"panurge","author_uid":"21166","time":"Aug 30, 2013 @ 3:55pm","epoch":1377877800,"text":"Fun, quirky and thought-provoking. I breezed it on my second playthrough. :)"},{"author_name":"PaperBlurt","author_uid":"26530","time":"Aug 30, 2013 @ 4:11pm","epoch":1377878760,"text":"I really like that so many actually finish the game. Permadeath can be a bummer! \r\rAppreciate it!"},{"author_name":"BenWhi","author_uid":"19954","time":"Aug 30, 2013 @ 5:48pm","epoch":1377884580,"text":"I enjoyed playing this. Made me (happily) frustrated and I almost quit, but managed to win. Fun text game!"},{"author_name":"kristof","author_uid":"11354","time":"Aug 30, 2013 @ 10:38pm","epoch":1377901980,"text":"Interesting approach."},{"author_name":"Dry Tree","author_uid":"5357","time":"Aug 31, 2013 @ 8:09am","epoch":1377936240,"text":"Well written, could have used some sound or music. Each level felt unrelated and the choices felt random - instead I would have liked your story to create a world and for my choices to relate to what I'm learning about your world as I play."},{"author_name":"lazyeels","author_uid":"17400","time":"Aug 31, 2013 @ 2:31pm","epoch":1377959160,"text":"Interesting idea and one of the first twine games i've played ever."},{"author_name":"Alexander Ponomariov","author_uid":"10483","time":"Aug 31, 2013 @ 3:46pm","epoch":1377963660,"text":"Crazy pink quest) I like it!"},{"author_name":"The Evil Cult","author_uid":"8607","time":"Aug 31, 2013 @ 4:47pm","epoch":1377967320,"text":"A bit confusing and most of my stuff was just guessing\/luck really. Nonetheless still enjoyable."},{"author_name":"farmergnome","author_uid":"10234","time":"Sep 1, 2013 @ 12:02am","epoch":1377993420,"text":"Awesome entry, loved the take on the theme!"},{"author_name":"Linus Lindberg","author_uid":"20066","time":"Sep 1, 2013 @ 6:32pm","epoch":1378060020,"text":"Very interesting. I like it!\rSome music really could've added to the eerie atmosphere."},{"author_name":"Diogo Muller","author_uid":"23705","time":"Sep 2, 2013 @ 4:51pm","epoch":1378140360,"text":"Funny game, great humor and creative interpretation on the theme. Great!"},{"author_name":"blackotus","author_uid":"19282","time":"Sep 4, 2013 @ 5:16pm","epoch":1378314660,"text":"Very unique.\rI specially like how it works with your imagination."},{"author_name":"OldPeculier","author_uid":"25979","time":"Sep 4, 2013 @ 8:57pm","epoch":1378327920,"text":"I don't get it."},{"author_name":"Jhelle","author_uid":"2232","time":"Sep 4, 2013 @ 9:01pm","epoch":1378328160,"text":"I don't really know how to interpret and\/or rate this. It's interesting but also so so very weird ."},{"author_name":"rissatto","author_uid":"19302","time":"Sep 5, 2013 @ 4:17pm","epoch":1378397520,"text":"Really nice game!"},{"author_name":"infernet89","author_uid":"14271","time":"Sep 5, 2013 @ 6:44pm","epoch":1378406340,"text":"Oh, a text-based game! Nice narration, but i don't like trial&errors system in this kind of game, sorry."},{"author_name":"foumart","author_uid":"14368","time":"Sep 6, 2013 @ 4:29pm","epoch":1378484640,"text":"ohh, got "wrong" around past half.. but it was interesting to try again and then... sooner or later :)"},{"author_name":"Super Hamster","author_uid":"22460","time":"Sep 11, 2013 @ 4:12pm","epoch":1378915620,"text":"Interesting idea"},{"author_name":"porglezomp","author_uid":"21051","time":"Sep 14, 2013 @ 9:19pm","epoch":1379193240,"text":"Very frustrating when I get sent back from near the end, I wish you'd put some checkpoints."},{"author_name":"GeorgeBroussard","author_uid":"8631","time":"Sep 16, 2013 @ 6:55am","epoch":1379314200,"text":"Interesting. I failed the first couple of floors, then finished all of them in one go, generally just not being a dick :) As I got closer to the end I was like "pick right, pick right!" because the fear of failure took over."}],"images":["ld27\/26530-8585c733f819105d0d2faea0af8e66ab.jpg","ld27\/26530-628d172548beeb7b7bf74e0de2650703.jpg","ld27\/26530-736a7bd4365626be5e89772b52cc3257.jpg"],"links":[{"url":"http:\/\/10seconds.paperblurt.com\/","text":"Web"},{"url":"http:\/\/10seconds.paperblurt.com\/paperblurt_10seconds-source.txt","text":"Source"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"23230","g_author":"26530","g_event":"LD27","g_eventkey":"18","g_subevent":"COMPO","g_urlkey":"23260","g_title":"The 10 (other) Seconds Journey","g_status":"UCHK1","g_place":"878","g_commentcount":"56","g_site2_node_id":"0","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":[],"node":null,"orig_images":["http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/273708\/26530-shot0.png-eq-900-500.jpg","http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/273708\/26530-shot1.png-eq-900-500.jpg","http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/273708\/26530-shot2.png-eq-900-500.jpg"],"text":"Made by PaperBlurt - http:\/\/twitter.com\/paperblurt\r\n\r\nThis is my first time attending Ludum Dare.\r\n\r\nWent around all weekend pondering upon the theme, and finally I think I got something good together.\r\n\r\nMade in: Twine\r\nGraphics\/Style: PaperBlurt\r\n\r\nAbout \"The 10 (other) Seconds Journey\":\r\n\r\nI thought about the theme and felt that I wanted to do something different with the theme, at the same time as I want the ones playing it maybe laugh or stop and think for a second. I hope I've achieved that.\r\n\r\nI always try to incorporate parts from my own life into what I create..\r\n\r\nEnjoy and don't forget to rate!\r\n\r\nUPDATE 28\/8:\r\n\r\nJust realised that my game actual is permadeath, I just wanted to add a bit of challenge in the game. But permadeath stays during the compo at least.. then we'll see!\r\n\r\nUPDATE 30\/8:\r\n\r\nWrote a Post Mortem that you can read here: http:\/\/www.ludumdare.com\/compo\/2013\/08\/30\/post-mortem-the-10-other-seconds-journey-2\/","title":"The 10 (other) Seconds Journey"}