Feedback on my Music??

Hey guys! I made some music for a game I am working on and would like some feedback.

It is on soundcloud and bandcamp

SoundCloud:

Bandcamp:

http://oobie99.bandcamp.com/track/so-many-squares

I am not asking you to buy it (it is not even that good!), just to download and or listen to it and give me feedback.

Thanks!
-Oobie

Comments

16. Jul 2014 · 07:11 UTC
hi oobie,
Woo Sang Hwang
17. Jul 2014 · 18:01 UTC
I would say the music is quite solid as it is right now.

Since the music is so light, I’m assuming this is just a mild bgm for the game.

What I would recommend at this point, is to make sure all instruments follow the beat.

It seems like you made piano play a bit off from guitar.

If this is just regular music that is just fine too, but for game music, I would say keep a solid rhythm.