Update on my Game

So I decided I would participate in Ludum Dare 32 about 40 days ago and I am participating. This is my second Ludum Dare (I also did LD 30) and I will be updating every now and then on Twitter, my Twitter is @TwittleCreator, and I really think you should look at my creations so just head over there to see what I am doing. Here is a render from the opening scene of my game… (it is not a final render, just the base models and textures, by the time I release the game it will be different)

Game Screenshot

Any suggestions? I will consider any and all suggestions or ideas. I will also try to make a post on the Ludum Dare website every 5 or so hours.