TL;DR: Check out my game here: https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/42/sunnyland

Please rate my first ever Ludum Dare Submission to help me have a better understanding about my game-making skills.* I worked alone on this game so please cut me some slack. I'm only 15, so don't expect much.* I had school, and after-school work. It is playable on any platform, except mobile platforms. It's a WebGL game so you can try it out as fast as possible. The game is short and web-based, so it is convenient to play. Anyway, I'm proud that I could complete it in time. It is my first year in actual casual game-making, so please help me improve in my skills. Here are some screenshots:

Please help me out as I need the most realistic feedback possible.

Check my game out here: https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/42/sunnyland