{"author_link":"\/author\/nihilaleph\/","author_name":"nihilaleph","author_uid":"49665","comments":[{"author_name":"ObscenelyTrue","author_uid":"13886","time":"Aug 29, 2016 @ 8:53pm","epoch":1472503680,"text":"Sure the graphics are not amazing but it's great to be able to develop a story with multiple directions and multiple endings (for me, the unfortunate Ending 1 and the alive Endings 6 &amp; 7) despite the time constraint. Thank you for this well done journey."},{"author_name":"nihilaleph","author_uid":"49665","time":"Sep 6, 2016 @ 12:28am","epoch":1473121380,"text":"@ObscenelyTrue Sorry for the late reply! Last week I was really sick &gt;_&lt; Thank you for playing! I'm glad you enjoyed it!"},{"author_name":"rodobodolfo","author_uid":"44770","time":"Sep 6, 2016 @ 7:49am","epoch":1473147840,"text":"The way it has to scroll down after every choice is really tedious. With that being said, I loved everything else about it. The story was interesting though I only played through to one ending. I liked that I built my own story that I could go back to read from beginning to end. Great idea! I wish it had some music though."},{"author_name":"Geckoo1337","author_uid":"35835","time":"Sep 6, 2016 @ 2:09pm","epoch":1473170640,"text":"Great entry. It reminds me some novels which I loved when I was young - the book where you are the hero. It could better with some background music ++"},{"author_name":"SamuelSousa","author_uid":"112281","time":"Sep 6, 2016 @ 5:35pm","epoch":1473183000,"text":"Good writting! \r<br\/>\r<br\/>Visually suits the theme of being on a ships monitor. The scroll after every choice made is nice but once the text builds up it can really take a while.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>I felt the need for background music.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Good entry though!"},{"author_name":"g12345","author_uid":"63136","time":"Sep 6, 2016 @ 10:27pm","epoch":1473200520,"text":"Well, I don't mind the scroll that much... It's just that well, you need to somehow to extend the gameplay time, right?\r<br\/>\r<br\/>It does make me not really reading the text and select randomly.  There was no indication which text was new so it's probably not important.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>And I agree, nice writting!\r<br\/>\r<br\/>And I did found several endings so it's not that bad. :P"},{"author_name":"nihilaleph","author_uid":"49665","time":"Sep 6, 2016 @ 11:04pm","epoch":1473202740,"text":"@rodobodolfo @SamuelSousa @g12345 I thought strange when you were saying about the scrolling being tedious and all, so I checked it and apparently the scroll resets to the beginning after a choice! When I originally tested I only played it on Chrome, what a mistake! Did you play on Firefox? The actual behavior should be the auto scrolls start from where you are and go to the new choices... I'll be looking on to it!\r<br\/>\r<br\/>@Geckoo1337 Oh yes, in fact the Ink scripting language was developed to turn one of those adventure books into a game! I've always wanted to read one of those but never had the chance T_T But I'm glad my story evoked good memories~\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Yes, I really wanted some BGM! But my composition skill is very limited... But now I added a recommended BGM, I hope the playthrough will be better~\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Thank you all for playing and for the feedback! Cheers~"},{"author_name":"Alphish","author_uid":"39564","time":"Sep 7, 2016 @ 8:03pm","epoch":1473278280,"text":"Ah, a text adventure. Slightly time consuming, but when done well, it's not that much of a problem, and that's the case here. ^^\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Generally, I enjoyed the writing here, and the story worked pretty well (as well as the meaningful choices). One thing I find understandable in Compo timeframe, but still noticeable, is that some paths were cut short; e.g. I don't think there's much you can do outside the shield (except for dying from radiation).\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Also, I'd really like to have some sort of restart button after completing the game. Its lack makes exploring alternate endings a bit more of a pain than necessary... ^^'"},{"author_name":"Waynetron","author_uid":"8591","time":"Sep 8, 2016 @ 8:48am","epoch":1473324180,"text":"Receive this error message on the embedded version: 404 Not Found https:\/\/storage.googleapis.com\/itchio\/upload2\/game\/81913\/263143\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Works on itch.io though.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>I really like the format of the text. The way it all reads as a single log file.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>But it does become annoying when the amount of text added is larger than my screen height."},{"author_name":"jsmars","author_uid":"3933","time":"Sep 8, 2016 @ 11:43am","epoch":1473334680,"text":"Can't start the game, getting this error:\r<br\/>404 Not Found https:\/\/storage.googleapis.com\/itchio\/upload2\/game\/81913\/263143"},{"author_name":"darthbox1","author_uid":"107874","time":"Sep 8, 2016 @ 9:07pm","epoch":1473368520,"text":"I was pleasantly surprised this works on my phone! I got a nice ending and will revisit to see the others. The chosen font is really easy on the eyes and the story flows nicely. Really cool stuff, well done!"},{"author_name":"SamuelSousa","author_uid":"112281","time":"Sep 12, 2016 @ 2:30pm","epoch":1473690300,"text":"@nihilaleph Confirm - played on firefox"},{"author_name":"nihilaleph","author_uid":"49665","time":"Sep 15, 2016 @ 11:44pm","epoch":1473982740,"text":"Sorry for the late reply! Thank you all for playing and the feedback!\r<br\/>\r<br\/>@Alphish I'm glad that it was worth your time~! =D I was going to have some more information about the planet in case the player decided to stay outside the shield, but I didn't have time to write everything I wanted ^^; (But ultimately the player would die). Oh yes, I wanted to add a restart button, but I'm not sure if there is a way using Ink, I'll definitely try again next time! Sorry for the inconvenient!\r<br\/>\r<br\/>@Waynetron Sorry about the size ^^; I was thinking about having smaller font size, but didn't know if it would be a problem... And maybe I got overexcited with my writing and produced too long texts xp\r<br\/>\r<br\/>@jsmars It should be working now! If not you can always play on itch.io ;)\r<br\/>\r<br\/>@darthbox1 Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it ^^\r<br\/>\r<br\/>@SamuelSousa Thank you for the reply! I think it should be better now!"},{"author_name":"NIGIC","author_uid":"24803","time":"Sep 17, 2016 @ 5:56pm","epoch":1474134660,"text":"The font size is fine. Makes things easy to read quickly. One thing I'd suggest would be to add breaks in the text, with just a &quot;Continue&quot; option, making sure it doesn't flow beyond the screen.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>What's presented of the world and story is pretty good. The pacing feels a bit rushed, and lacks focus, though. The scenes don't connect much to one another, and the story keeps jumping around with no breathing time. \r<br\/>\r<br\/>I guess that was a necessary sacrifice to get the full plot in within the deadlines, and I do appreciate that we actually got a full story from start to finish.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Was a nice experience. Good job!"}],"images":["ld36\/49665-053b6ed45a26a66e714cc216b6eb7fb2.jpg"],"links":[{"url":"https:\/\/nihilaleph.itch.io\/brigit-fall","text":"Itch.io"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"945","g_author":"49665","g_event":"LD36","g_eventkey":"35","g_subevent":"COMPO","g_urlkey":"921","g_title":"Brigit Fall","g_status":"UCHK1","g_place":"99999","g_commentcount":"14","g_site2_node_id":"0","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":[],"node":null,"orig_images":["http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/570486\/49665-shot0-1472432641.PNG-eq-900-500.jpg"],"text":"When \"jumping\", your calculation must be really precise, other wise you can end in a very inconvenient place! In \"Brigit Fall\", YOU, yes YOU, were in chase of some criminal called Branigan, but a miscalculation made you crash into an unknown planet. Can YOU do what it takes escape this mysterious place?\r\n\r\nRecommended BGM (SC: Protoss OST): https:\/\/youtu.be\/EVf1y_I0Ok0\r\nRecommended BGM (Analogue OST): https:\/\/youtu.be\/T_GSrWmv2_A?list=PLFgX1EWUym06Q4guoeJ-W9tcQrbdbXU5E\r\n\r\nInstructions:\r\n1- Follow your heart\r\n2- Click which action you want to do\r\n\r\nTools:\r\nEditor\/Engine: Inky \/ Ink <https:\/\/github.com\/inkle\/inky>\r\nManagement: Trello \/ Toggl\r\n\r\nFeatures:\r\n- Totally customizable character! (Just imagine how you want!)\r\n- 9 different endings! (5 \"Unique\" \"Death\" endings and 4 kinda unique \"Alive\" endings!)\r\n- Futuristic UI!\r\n- A story full of emotion, fights, treason, and more!\r\n- Combat system 100% deterministic! (The result will always be the same!)\r\n\r\nKnown Issues:\r\n- Firefox resets the auto scroll to the top of the page (CRUSHED!)\r\n\r\n\/************************************************************************\r\nHello hello everyone!\r\n\r\nThank you for checking out my entry for LD36! This time I made a text adventure! I've been wanting to do one for some time, but never really made one. When they announced the theme Ancient Technology, I wanting to create an adventure\/exploration game, with an air of mystery to the objects found, but I knew I wouldn't be able to do that graphically, I'm a programmer and my graphics skill are hardly my best. But as I also play a lot of table top RPGs, I decided to make a text game that could evoke more of the player imagination.\r\n\r\nThis game is a very simple one, and although the quality of writing doesn't keep up until the end, I hope you can have fun reading\/playing this little journey. This project had many ups and downs, but I will discuss this later in my Post Mortem, which I should write after one or two weeks, after I gathered some feedback.\r\n\r\nAs always, please leave a comment so I can check your game too!\r\n\r\nCongratulations to all!\r\n*************************************************************************\/\r\n\r\nAnnouncements:\r\n* (08\/28) I don't know how to make the embedded browser in itch.io stretch to the whole page. I will work on that. Also if I find that the font size and spacing isn't very comfortable, I'll change it ASAP!\r\n* (09\/06) Added two recommended BGM, added Firefox bug\r\n* (09\/06) Firefox bug crushed\r\n* (09\/08) Embedded URL was wrong, fixed","title":"Brigit Fall"}