Stork by Sam Butterworth

made by Sam Butterworth for Ludum Dare 53 (JAM)

This is my first Game Jam! And also my first time using twine so go easy on me! I had some issues publishing the game here (it wouldn't let me re-submit the file) But the link to the game down below should work :v:

Stork is a short multiple choice game based on the prompt “Delivery” Created with Twine and using Blender3D to create low-poly artwork

I go by @sambutterworthillustrator on instagram so feel free to check that out!

Link to game	https://sambutterworth.itch.io/stork
Original URL	https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/53/stork

Ratings

Overall	618^th	3.556⭐	20🧑‍⚖️
Fun	884^th	3.083⭐	20🧑‍⚖️
Innovation	572^th	3.361⭐	20🧑‍⚖️
Theme	754^th	3.75⭐	20🧑‍⚖️
Graphics	147^th	4.361⭐	20🧑‍⚖️
Humor	201^th	3.778⭐	20🧑‍⚖️
Mood	268^th	3.889⭐	20🧑‍⚖️
Given		5🗳️	9🗨️

Feedback

Alex Chertilin

01. May 2023 · 20:45 UTC

Uh oh!
If you're seeing this error, it means I can't find your index.html file.

This usually means you created your .zip file by zipping the entire folder, and index.html is somewhere like MyGame/index.html. If you recreate your .zip with index.html file in the root, this error should go away.

See the embedding guide for more details. ludumdare.com/resources/guides/embedding/

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🎤 Sam Butterworth

01. May 2023 · 20:55 UTC

Click the link under the description to play. 👍

flanne

01. May 2023 · 21:20 UTC

Very pretty color palette and graphics. It was a fun read :)

🎤 Sam Butterworth

01. May 2023 · 21:22 UTC

Thank you so much that really means a lot!

saffeine

01. May 2023 · 21:23 UTC

the dialogue is very fun and I love how the stork looks, nice work!

Emily-TTG

01. May 2023 · 21:24 UTC

Really incredible for your first game jam game! The story was engaging, writing was funny and it didn't drag on for too long - even a bit of extra interactivity with the fight at the end. If I had a gripe it would be the lack of dynamism - particles or little animations would really have made it come to life a little bit more. Great job!

Fiinrii

01. May 2023 · 21:24 UTC

I liked the art and the ending where you get fired.

LDJam user 336851

01. May 2023 · 21:26 UTC

Really funny and also moody in just the right balance,

perryseity

01. May 2023 · 22:57 UTC

I love the art and color scheme, and the quirky vibe of the story! It rules!

nox282

01. May 2023 · 23:23 UTC

I like the art, and it was well written!

🎤 Sam Butterworth

02. May 2023 · 11:10 UTC

Thanks everyone! Love reading peoples thoughts on the game. 👍

Mysticaldev

02. May 2023 · 18:49 UTC

I got the good ending the first time :smile:. Graphics look great and it was fun to read the story.

LDJam user 261245

16. May 2023 · 11:32 UTC

refreshing to see a text adventure type of game. sure this isn't the right genre for quick and fun gameplay but you have really good writing and even better graphics. with music and sounds fitting the atmosphere this wouldn't feel like a jam game at all! keep up the good work!

WetBurritoSupreme

18. May 2023 · 00:24 UTC

Great job with a narrative game in the jam, the mood and art really sold it!

AceArcher

18. May 2023 · 04:45 UTC

It's a great concept! I love the art and the mood it brings. There were a few times where it felt like my choices didn't matter (like choosing to check the cargo and instead just being told nah, it's probably fine and not actually checking), but overall it's an engaging narrative.