Picking apples by Síria Games

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made by Síria Games for Ludum Dare 51 (JAM)

My first game developed, it's basically you collect apples in 1 min, but there are 5 things that will pay attention, the game was not completed but it's my first and it was really worth it!! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------imagem<em>2022-10-03</em>184747365.png -----------------------------------imagem<em>2022-10-17</em>140222284.png -------------------------------------imagem<em>2022-10-17</em>140259233.png------------------------------------imagem<em>2022-10-17</em>140628029.png------------------------------------imagem<em>2022-10-17</em>140650866.png

Ratings

Overall 1185th 2.688⭐ 18🧑‍⚖️
Fun 1026th 2.844⭐ 18🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 1061th 2.7⭐ 17🧑‍⚖️
Theme 1190th 2.4⭐ 17🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 978th 2.906⭐ 18🧑‍⚖️
Audio 685th 2.857⭐ 16🧑‍⚖️
Humor 604th 2.8⭐ 17🧑‍⚖️
Mood 1020th 2.875⭐ 18🧑‍⚖️
Given 34🗳️ 11🗨️

Feedback

ElephantLung
05. Oct 2022 · 02:06 UTC
Fun lil game, a bit janky with the jumping but pretty good work for your first!
🎤 Síria Games
05. Oct 2022 · 22:44 UTC
@elephantlung
Thank you very much, yes the jump animation was not executed and ended up with this error
UnidayStudio
18. Oct 2022 · 18:53 UTC
Hey, @siria-games , nice game! I'll give the feedback in portuguese, because I know that's your main language, ok?

Opa! Guilherme da Uniday aqui e eu não poderia deixar de ver e prestigiar seu game, meu caro! Vi lá no discord e fiquei muito feliz em saber que você conseguiu desenvolver seu game e que os meus tutoriais te ajudaram de alguma forma a realizar esse objetivo épico! Vou ser sincero com você: Participar de uma game jam, principalmente da Ludum Dare, que é uma das maioires jams de todas, é algo incrível e que faz muita diferença em sua jornada da criação de Games, mesmo que você não perceba isso agora. Pois vai colocar sua mente no lugar certo para fazer jogos de maneira ágil e eficaz.

A propósito, ficou muito legal seu game, meus parabéns!

E lembre-se: você não precisa parar ele por aí... é sempre bom continuar desenvolvendo e trazendo updates pós jam! :)
🎤 Síria Games
18. Oct 2022 · 23:46 UTC
@unidaystudio Opa Guilherme, eu sei inglês sim rsrs... Muito obrigado pelo seu feedback, sim cara foi por sua causa que eu entrei nesse mundo e consegui fazer o que fiz, irei traser muitos update ainda, mas muito obrogado msm por ter dado atenção pra mim :v: ! :)
SparklingSushi
19. Oct 2022 · 20:34 UTC
Hey mate! Congratz of finishing the project :)
Good luck in the next ld!
🎤 Síria Games
20. Oct 2022 · 00:18 UTC
@sparklingsushi
thank you so much
Quoc
20. Oct 2022 · 18:24 UTC
Nice entry, was fun to play!
🎤 Síria Games
20. Oct 2022 · 18:29 UTC
@quoc thx
Hacktier
20. Oct 2022 · 21:10 UTC
Nice Work!
Noirox
20. Oct 2022 · 22:44 UTC
Hey, I liked your entry! I feel like you had a clear vision for the game and I think you can be very proud of how it turned out. Obviously there is still some stuff missing and lacking but fro mwhat I can tell, I think giving you only a few things to explore will help ypu out the most. Firstly, I would advise you to work on mechanics first and then on graphics. The game's graphics are already up to the standard set for a game jam and investing too much time there will keep you from developing the core mechanics.

Secondly, I think easier camera controls, especially including a vertical axis, which would also help with the jump feeling better, could already make a big difference, along with maybe slightly more deliberate implementation of the theme.

Overall: Good work and I hope to see more from you next Ludum Dare!
Hawkin
21. Oct 2022 · 00:46 UTC
You've got the basics down! Keep it up!
epeachyband
21. Oct 2022 · 08:43 UTC
Not bad for your first game. Even if it doesn't fit the theme. Good luck in next jams!
b3b0
21. Oct 2022 · 17:57 UTC
Awesome work for a first game! There is certainly some jank, but it's actually pretty fun to play as is!
chispaLBC
21. Oct 2022 · 18:47 UTC
your first game is a lot better than mine was so, congratulations. The camera movement and walking animation were super smooth too. Nice work!
🎤 Síria Games
21. Oct 2022 · 20:20 UTC
@noirox
Thanks for your feedback! Really what you said makes perfect sense, it's my first jam so I'll improve and use your tips!
🎤 Síria Games
21. Oct 2022 · 20:21 UTC
@epeachyband Yes can't follow the theme unfortunately
🎤 Síria Games
21. Oct 2022 · 20:21 UTC
@b3b0
Thank you very much !
🎤 Síria Games
21. Oct 2022 · 20:22 UTC
@chispalbc Thank you very much :)
AmunOnra
22. Oct 2022 · 10:23 UTC
For your first game you did a decent job. Keep it up :)