There are no Monsters outside by RiaDelva

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made by RiaDelva for LD33 (JAM)
For my first game ever I made a little twine-story-game-thingy.
Enjoy :)

Ratings

Coolness 75% 2
Overall(Jam) 3.03 694
Fun(Jam) 2.79 726
Humor(Jam) 2.64 618
Innovation(Jam) 2.72 753
Mood(Jam) 2.97 634
Theme(Jam) 3.61 398

Feedback

Rocketship
25. Aug 2015 · 11:43 UTC
Some good writing there, didn't feel like a chore to read this. Well done!
pta2002
25. Aug 2015 · 17:37 UTC
Pretty nice. I enjoyed the story.
JackDegree
25. Aug 2015 · 19:57 UTC
I always love me a nice Twine game :), and yours is a really good first! Make more games!
conrad123
25. Aug 2015 · 20:42 UTC
There are some ways where the story goes on forever.
MechaTofuPirate
25. Aug 2015 · 21:54 UTC
Really cool first twine game. Nice work
van noctar
25. Aug 2015 · 21:59 UTC
Good story :)
🎤 RiaDelva
25. Aug 2015 · 22:00 UTC
@conrad123 That's intentional :)
Rulrite
26. Aug 2015 · 04:27 UTC
You did a great job with this one, especially seeing as it's your first game! I just had to play through it multiple times to see the different paths. The happy ending left me sort of puzzled, but in a good way!
NoWandStudios
30. Aug 2015 · 10:25 UTC
Cool story! Reminds me at "Horns" of Joe Hill
Strike
30. Aug 2015 · 11:25 UTC
Something very different from all other entries. Interestingly, it fits the them perfectly.
madmaw
30. Aug 2015 · 11:27 UTC
Really nice short story. I enjoyed reading it and was a little disappointed when it ended actually. Nice work.
xvw
30. Aug 2015 · 19:24 UTC
An unusual entry here!
Really nice! :)
KevinWorkman
30. Aug 2015 · 23:18 UTC
This was enjoyable. Would have been cool to see some pictures!
Crowbeak
02. Sep 2015 · 03:55 UTC
This could do with proofreading, but I love the thing about maybe your period is a week early again, right off the bat. ^_^ Instantly sets the character as female, and I am all for pushing guys' comfort levels on stuff like that. The note to self injections are also a nice realistic touch. Enjoyable overall.
congusbongus
04. Sep 2015 · 11:22 UTC
At first I thought it was a clone of that period trine, but then horns! hahaha! Good stuff
kaitokidi
13. Sep 2015 · 17:06 UTC
so nice ^^
crucknuk
13. Sep 2015 · 17:08 UTC
Interesting approach of the theme. I always enjoyed novel games. Nice little story you got there and good work.
WubAlliance
14. Sep 2015 · 13:18 UTC
What a bizarre yet entertaining entry! Very fun, nice take on the theme. Good job!