Ludum Dare by She Wrote
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Ratings
| Overall | 379th | 3.313⭐ | 42🧑⚖️ |
| Fun | 542th | 2.688⭐ | 42🧑⚖️ |
| Innovation | 200th | 3.563⭐ | 42🧑⚖️ |
| Theme | 136th | 3.975⭐ | 42🧑⚖️ |
| Graphics | 281th | 3.5⭐ | 41🧑⚖️ |
| Audio | 310th | 3.167⭐ | 41🧑⚖️ |
| Humor | 277th | 2.844⭐ | 34🧑⚖️ |
| Mood | 81th | 3.808⭐ | 41🧑⚖️ |
| Given | 49🗳️ | 67🗨️ |
With that being said, I didn't really....get it. The game isn't much of a game really, and it was extremely difficult for me to even understand what was going on if I'm being honest.
The gameplay department definitely leaves a lot to be desired, in the nicest way possible. I think something that would help out a lot with this is to have some kind of direction, some sort of que, just something to guide the player on what is happening.
On the flipside, you have built an interesting story!
I do also think the take on the theme and the overall style is well executed considering what you were going for! Its a very unique art style, I cant say I have seen someone use this type of hand-drawn aesthetic like this.
But! The simple gameplay and the aesthetics fit the theme of the game perfectly in my opinion and it really made me sad. This emotional impact is rare and I appriciate it very much. Great job!
Still, the gameplay is strange - sometimes I can hold a memory just buy mooving the mouse and sometimes I have to click - it's disorientating, and I can't even reach some items. Music is too nosy to my ears. But if you work more on the game you can make a wonderful pace, I'm sure!
PS: I'm tweeting about the games I play from this jam. Here is this one: https://twitter.com/TheAntonSem/status/1511761412804255753
I would have liked there to be a kind of closing screen to this. It's a bit unintuitive to just hit escape at the end, especially since it doesn't close the game before that. Also, while it fit the game, the loop on the music was just a little too short to be listening to it for several minutes. That can be a tough task, so keep practicing with it and you'll get faster at it!
Overall, it's a super original interpretation of the theme, and you managed to create an interesting story with few informations, that's really nice.
(I did'nt rate your game in humor, because I did'nt see anything humoristc in it)
Good job :D
Your art an sound are good.