{"author_link":"\/users\/hadi-jiwani","author_name":"Hadi Jiwani","author_uid":1242282,"comments":[{"id":631428,"author_name":"cjol","author_uid":"cjol","epoch":1619471206,"text":"Nice idea!","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":638589,"author_name":"Muhammadza","author_uid":"muhammadza","epoch":1619504402,"text":"Nice platform to build on more exciting levels of mysteries..... Nice Work","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":639230,"author_name":"Hadi Jiwani","author_uid":"hadi-jiwani","epoch":1619508646,"text":"a great game \nfinding scrolls hidden in these dungeons gives a great charm to it","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":643981,"author_name":"arcanelemon","author_uid":"arcanelemon","epoch":1619528319,"text":"Cool game! love the incorporation of the theme. Only suggestion i would make is that its a little dark. Overall nice work!","format":"md","likes":2,"spam":"N"},{"id":655210,"author_name":"DoctorTM","author_uid":"doctortm","epoch":1619567350,"text":"Nice jam. The jumping feels a bit weird though.","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":655578,"author_name":"Hadi Jiwani","author_uid":"hadi-jiwani","epoch":1619569396,"text":"yes i thought i would improve it but had no time :)","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":658848,"author_name":"Meenakshi","author_uid":"meenakshi","epoch":1619592805,"text":"Nice one.. Really got the feeling of being lost. >.<\n","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":664868,"author_name":"LDJam user 0","author_uid":"0","epoch":1619632176,"text":"Nice idea, but I gave up after a few times :(\n\nThe controls were lagging a bit and I kept falling off or through the floor into a black space with no blocks anywhere - nothing happening, and no way to restart the game except for reloading the website or randomly accusing anyone and then getting the \"play again\" button. \n\n![Screenshot from 2021-04-28 19-41-22.png](\/\/\/raw\/e32\/e\/z\/41504.png)\n\nIn many places, I couldn't even see if there is anything else a few rows below me and just had to try and fall down blindly because I couldn't see as far down as I could have jumped up again.\n\nI found the first red block\/scroll but after that it was only running\/jumping around until I fell down into some black area without a floor again.\n\n![Screenshot from 2021-04-28 19-38-02.png](\/\/\/raw\/e32\/e\/z\/41501.png)\n\nI don't really understand how I'm supposed to solve it if I can't see where I'm going so I have to try blindly, but there's also no way to get back up again once I've fallen down into a place with no blocks.\n","format":"md","likes":0,"spam":"N"},{"id":670441,"author_name":"Hadi Jiwani","author_uid":"hadi-jiwani","epoch":1619676941,"text":"sad to hear some lags :( i think Have Made the entire level in a box form so the floor can not finish you canot escape the level not sure about your lag","format":"md","likes":0,"spam":"N"},{"id":678066,"author_name":"Crazybot","author_uid":"crazybot","epoch":1619769613,"text":"I played the game and tried to finish it but every time after I found the first clue the \"Accuse someone\" menu popped up, so I unfortunately never had time to get to the second clue!\n\nI also saw that the colors for the menu changed and the scroll wasn't cut out perfectly\n![firefox_PEc5GYI1UR.png](\/\/\/raw\/46c\/f1\/z\/41bd1.png)\n\n![firefox_0jMe2Yxw4p.png](\/\/\/raw\/46c\/f1\/z\/41bd2.png)\n\nI did enjoy the idea and honestly would have loved to finish it!","format":"md","likes":0,"spam":"N"},{"id":678506,"author_name":"Shone","author_uid":"shone","epoch":1619777423,"text":"Controls were a bit buggy and I kept getting stuck on the walls. Nice idea though, creative!","format":"md","likes":0,"spam":"N"},{"id":691558,"author_name":"evn","author_uid":"evn","epoch":1620099702,"text":"Fun! I encountered a bug that it would sometimes force me to guess the culprit after only one clue. (The next time I jumped with space.) Also was a little confusing to navigate but I imagine that's the point lol. Maybe you could add a minimap or something just so we can have a better understanding of where we are?","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":691559,"author_name":"LRVStudios","author_uid":"lrvstudios","epoch":1620099713,"text":"Nice idea on exploring theme. Good work!","format":"md","likes":0,"spam":"N"},{"id":691570,"author_name":"DivFord","author_uid":"divford","epoch":1620100222,"text":"An intriguing idea, but the \"mystery\" fell flat for me. I played through twice to get a good idea of how it worked. I initially thought I would be doing a logic grid kind of puzzle (https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Logic_puzzle), but I just had to pick up the scrolls then make a 50\/50 guess.\n\nThe concept of combining a mystery game with a platformer is interesting. That said, the platformer needs work. The camera is far too zoomed in, given your jump height.\n\nOverall, I liked the concept here, and I hope you take the time to develop it further.","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":691706,"author_name":"Villanelle","author_uid":"villanelle","epoch":1620106560,"text":"I like mystery games and this story caught my attention. Unfortunately it is a game so short that the plot has no time at all to develop into something more intriguing. My suggestions are the same as many previous commentaries: the camera is so close to the character you barely can see your surroundings. The jump is too high, and the map is too dark. Could use a little more work in the graphics. The concept idea for your game is great, with some changes it would become something very interesting. Congrats!","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":692086,"author_name":"Hadi Jiwani","author_uid":"hadi-jiwani","epoch":1620127903,"text":"i sure will and a great thanks to your feedback @divford @villanelle ","format":"md","likes":0,"spam":"N"},{"id":700716,"author_name":"hijomo","author_uid":"hijomo","epoch":1620769344,"text":"I enjoyed your game. The amount of the level visible in the camera felt too cramped. The killer was eggha\u2026 sh\u2026. \u201cI think he died writing this note.\u201d","format":"md","likes":0,"spam":"N"},{"id":700730,"author_name":"Hadi Jiwani","author_uid":"hadi-jiwani","epoch":1620770679,"text":"yes @hijomo this is definitely a thing I will need to fix but I can't edit it since it won't be fair","format":"md","likes":0,"spam":"N"},{"id":700868,"author_name":"VixenMink","author_uid":"vixenmink","epoch":1620784385,"text":"I really like what you have going on here.  Our team wanted to do a mystery as well and we strayed from it on the basis that you need a lot of time to really get the audience into something very intricate and story driven.  This game definitely has the basis for it but with more time, I feel you could push the idea even further","format":"md","likes":1,"spam":"N"},{"id":700958,"author_name":"pitivie","author_uid":"pitivie","epoch":1620796897,"text":"It was fun !! Thankfully, the map is not hugh and exploration is interesting. Nice game :D  ","format":"md","likes":0,"spam":"N"},{"id":701968,"author_name":"OadT","author_uid":"oadt","epoch":1620908127,"text":"Unusual combination of genres, but I guess it works :smiley: At first the Acuse Someone menu showed up occasionally when I pressed space, luckily this issue was fixed after reload. I would have wished there would be a bit more deduction necessary and the 50:50 chance at the end could be a bit depressing. Nice entry! 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