Toy not trash! by Awanami

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made by Awanami for Ludum Dare 58 (JAM)

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Ulziton
Oct 06th · 21:07 UTC
I just obsessed with visual, you did an amazing job!
🎤 Awanami
Oct 06th · 21:10 UTC
@ulziton, Thank you for good words bro||sis
cardsnapper
Oct 06th · 21:39 UTC
Awesome style, short and sweet!

I should warn you though that the first time I played the game there was an error that caused the WEBGL build to completely shut down and forced a restart :sob:
🎤 Awanami
Oct 06th · 21:52 UTC
@cardsnapper, Thanks for the care:3 I uploaded new build and it made error
phanopera
Oct 06th · 22:03 UTC
Very cool visuals! But got the error... Played again. And won))
🎤 Awanami
Oct 06th · 22:06 UTC
@phanopera, Thank you for good words. I uploaded new build and it made error
Ira Baciu
Oct 06th · 22:48 UTC
The art style is so great, I am so lucky you could make it
🎤 Awanami
Oct 06th · 22:51 UTC
@ira-baciu, Thank you for your support
Andy Wang
Oct 07th · 05:20 UTC
The art style is impeccable !! so cute , love ur hand draw self-portrait in the comment section.
peggy404
Oct 07th · 05:27 UTC
Really really into the art style, feel like watching a movie!!! the narrative is cathy, very easy to control the game. It'll be better if there's a little intro of mechanism... can't understand why I lose or win
Tayaksha
Oct 07th · 09:13 UTC
The visual style is awesome, the comic at the beginning is funny, like for the JoJo reference! I didn’t figure out how to win right away, but I did manage to beat it a couple of times!! You did great, the game is short, but the style really sticks with you :3
🎤 Awanami
Oct 07th · 10:06 UTC
@andy-wang, thx, my only one artist likes to be praised
🎤 Awanami
Oct 07th · 10:08 UTC
@peggy404, I heard you. maybe in future i'll made intro of mechanism
🎤 Awanami
Oct 07th · 10:09 UTC
@tayaksha, Thank you for good words. Maybe in future i’ll made intro of mechanism

*edited

Red packets should be avoided.
artillepsy
Oct 07th · 10:24 UTC
Liked the humor there, the art style - it really looks cool. Some critique:

1. Didn't understand what those hands on HUD were for, I saw some of them got a bit dirty-ish? I feel it wasn't finished, but it's alright, i still had some portion of fun, thank you guys and good luck in the future!
🎤 Awanami
Oct 07th · 10:27 UTC
@artillepsy, Thx for good words. Hand's is Hp when you toch red pocket yor health hand gets hurt
Melomaner
Oct 07th · 11:06 UTC
A small but pleasant game — I liked the art and the story, though the gameplay felt a bit weak =)
🎤 Awanami
Oct 07th · 11:50 UTC
@melomaner, Thank you for good words
yiwai
Oct 07th · 14:50 UTC
Nice little game:) Feel like it needs a bit of a how-to. I won on my first try without figuring it out, haha. But it was fun:D
HNKXOBKA
Oct 07th · 15:45 UTC
An interesting interpretation of the theme🤔, the graphics are superb and the overall mood🎄 is good, but the rest needs some work.
I would advise adding more impact when you take garbage bags🤓, like sounds or something else...
Well, if this is the first project, very good😎!
🎤 Awanami
Oct 07th · 15:49 UTC
@hnkxobka, Thank you. I've been waiting for these words.
🎤 Awanami
Oct 07th · 15:55 UTC
@yiwai, If it was fun i think all right, but i know what gameplay is not strong side of this game
l6ria
Oct 07th · 17:44 UTC
i like the art style and the best was reference of jojo pose.
DarSor
Oct 07th · 18:23 UTC
cool art!:O nice job
🎤 Awanami
Oct 07th · 18:45 UTC
@6ria, @darsor My only one artist did a great job
Rise12600
Oct 07th · 19:11 UTC
good style, theming and art.. The direction was very strong. the game play needs a little more
over all a very good first game
🎤 Awanami
Oct 07th · 19:17 UTC
@rise12600, Thank you, we try hard.
Linky439
Oct 07th · 20:23 UTC
Great art! Unfortunately I wish there was more to the game, as you just need to click on non-red bags to finish it without being able to see the figures, or to have multiple stages, etc.

But that's a good start nonetheless! The idea is good, keep it up!
🎤 Awanami
Oct 07th · 20:37 UTC
@linky439, i waste too much time for ~normal spawning and autoscale and I didn't have time for mini games then you toch pocket
Faust_Mi
Oct 07th · 20:38 UTC
Awesome art style! Gaming experience - short and good!

Good job! Thanks for the gaming experience!
tardis2snej
Oct 07th · 21:50 UTC
The art is sooo beautiful, professional level! Not so much of gameplay unfortunately (though the idea is good), and I couldn't understand the logic behind winning or losing
🎤 Awanami
Oct 07th · 21:58 UTC
@tardis2snej, i send your comment to my only one artist. Thank you for the praise.
🎤 Awanami
Oct 07th · 21:59 UTC
@faust-mi, Thank you! For good words!
Braulio_JG
Oct 07th · 22:34 UTC
As others said, althought the theme is clearly represented, the gameplay is not the strong side of this game, but the graphics, they are supreme! You deserve 5 stars in Graphics 🤩
Prussichger
Oct 08th · 02:34 UTC
Very simple, вut the visuals and message of the game are nice! I remember my parents threw away an entire My Little Pony castle once and now I miss it X"^)
Custodi
Oct 08th · 05:53 UTC
Cool graphics, I stuck a little on narrative screen, i would reduce time delay between fragments.
Ciphereo
Oct 08th · 06:28 UTC
cool art!!!i like it!
Slurp
Oct 08th · 06:43 UTC
很酷的风格,但是很难去理解游戏机制
ArenAvgust
Oct 08th · 08:15 UTC
Very simple but i love it!
LDJam user 280509
Oct 08th · 09:43 UTC
Cool concept. I thought it was a 3-match game but comes out as Russian roulette LOL
OldDog
Oct 08th · 10:02 UTC
The visuals and story are absolutely perfect! It’s just a pity the gameplay is a bit short. I’m really looking forward to seeing more of the story — especially if it includes more about the wife. A game with great potential!
🎤 Awanami
Oct 08th · 10:58 UTC
@prussichger, Be strong, I understand you.
🎤 Awanami
Oct 08th · 11:00 UTC
@custodi, Thank you, and i heard you about time on narrative scene
🎤 Awanami
Oct 08th · 11:00 UTC
@ciphereo, I'll send your words to my only one artist
🎤 Awanami
Oct 08th · 11:07 UTC
@slurp, 谢谢!
🎤 Awanami
Oct 08th · 11:08 UTC
@arenavgust, Thank you for good words!
🎤 Awanami
Oct 08th · 11:10 UTC
@xlores-liang, This game can be better but I didn't have enough time cause i made simple proc-gen for pokets
🎤 Awanami
Oct 08th · 11:12 UTC
@olddog, Thank you, your words will be my fuel to try hard more
🎤 Awanami
Oct 08th · 11:14 UTC
@braulio-jg, I know about problems with gameplay, I didn't have time to make mini games when opening packages. And my only one artist the best i know:3
NonDev
Oct 08th · 13:27 UTC
Very neat intro. Who knew figures could break up a marriage so quickly?
🎤 Awanami
Oct 08th · 13:47 UTC
@nondev, If the wife is a b**ch, then yes of course
danicoredj
Oct 08th · 19:09 UTC
i win in 2 sec
OttoBroccoli
Oct 08th · 19:49 UTC
Wow, the draft style worked great for the atmosphere, but your drawing skill is great, you must be a comic artist?
N90W
Oct 08th · 22:56 UTC
@ottobroccoli I've never worked with comics before, but I'm really glad my style fits the game's concept. Due to the tight deadline, I was in a rush and drew in a sketchy style. This is my first experience in the games industry. I usually draw pictures with a lot of detail. Thank you for the kind words! ❤️
Zoldanka
Oct 09th · 19:58 UTC
The cover art is SPECTACULAR, I adore the way you drew the characters and their expressions
I also love the way you drew the intro scene like a comic, I've never seen that before anywhere else (although the text was a tad bit hard to make out)
About the rest now, it took me some time to understand how the game worked and how I was winning or losing. I'd also appreciate it if there was more to the gameplay, as there wasn't much to actually do
The visuals are the strong suit of the game, the rest could use some work, but they look fantastic and feel very unique, especially for a game, so great work on that:)
I read this is your first time working on a game, I hope it will be the start of a bigger journey, since I feel like you could bring a breath of fresh air!
🎤 Awanami
Oct 09th · 20:26 UTC
@zoldanka, Thank you, I was really looking forward to such a big comment with analysis. I was planning to add mini games then you open pockets, but i didn't have time to made it on JAM. Also i'm planing to add tutorial but i'm also didn't have time for cause i'm add simple proc-gen. And my only one artist the best, i know:3
LDJam user 246128
Oct 10th · 11:33 UTC
Noooooo not the figurines. Can't imagine what would I do had it happen to me and my figurines.

Great visuals and overall style!
🎤 Awanami
Oct 10th · 12:38 UTC
@t90 Cling to them and don't give them to anyone.
6Knowledge
Oct 12th · 10:18 UTC
Considering how short the story was from start to end, I don't why the button to skip skips the **entire** thing when it could've just skipped to the next panel. Sneaky lil pose at the end for those that did watch the whole thing :thumbsup:. Not much to say on the gameplay, a bit simplistic but nothing negative to say about it.
🎤 Awanami
Oct 12th · 14:06 UTC
@6knowledge, Thank you for good words
dasMaichen
Oct 12th · 17:27 UTC
Very nice graphics! <3
LDJam user 280189
Oct 14th · 18:42 UTC
The art style is really beautiful, I love it. Great work!

Wasn't quite sure how the gameplay worked at first but I got it eventually.
Llevelin
Oct 19th · 20:41 UTC
I feel sorry for this guy. His wife is a terrible person.
But thanks for playing anyway!