My Story by Ausstein
| Link | https://ausstein.itch.io/an-ai-story |
| Original URL | https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/50/my-story |
Ratings
| Overall | 972th | 3.306⭐ | 38🧑⚖️ |
| Fun | 1233th | 2.786⭐ | 37🧑⚖️ |
| Innovation | 485th | 3.515⭐ | 36🧑⚖️ |
| Theme | 457th | 3.853⭐ | 36🧑⚖️ |
| Graphics | 1217th | 2.647⭐ | 36🧑⚖️ |
| Humor | 407th | 3.441⭐ | 36🧑⚖️ |
| Mood | 612th | 3.545⭐ | 35🧑⚖️ |
| Given | 12🗳️ | 59🗨️ |

Nice and cute idea, I quite like it!
Also great narrative and sound !
Maybe the pong part can be more innovative & fun to play ( multi balls, bonus, crazy challenge, etc.. ) cause I just let win the AI as it was getting really long after a while.. But in a way she beat me on the psychological level :)
Congrats, overall i loved it !
ps: I had a little bug on the second part , the viewport was too small and i coudnt read it correctly. ( played on windows chrome )
Ehh I mean for the amount that I trained the AI it is remarkable that it only made two typos ;)
Unfortunately I could not really find time on the weekend so I did the whole project on Monday after work, just so I don't loose my 6 (now 7) LD streak. This is actually a 12h Game not a 3day game so I did not have time for anything fancy :D
I should have made the Ballspeed increase quicker but I did not really have time to play test that..
Good work!
https://www.twitch.tv/videos/1447965941?t=00h36m14s
- I'm OK with the fact that I just literally play pong (no more no less) and trivial pursuit (with really few questions) on a ludum Dare, in 2022.
- It's allright to not have time and just try to do something clever and really simple (I see what you did there, a little message about AI taking over the world by learning from mistake until it win) like you did. But... I've just played regular pong... for 5 min... :/
You have an appetence for narrative stuff (I saw this in your pasts games like "Deep sea mining" or "Whileloops".
I think you have potential in that. Hope you'll have more time the next Ludum Dare to bring us a game with true narrative content like I'm sure your capable of :)
But... God you made me play pong x)
ps: In browser mode, the trivia questions part is... messed-up. You have to go to fullscreen :

Yeah in the end Sam just says thank you for playing the game. As I have mentioned before I only had half a day for this one so Time ran out for that sort of stuff
This was more supposed to be a story with some short interactive parts, that apparently got a little too long. I just did not want to loose my consecutive LD streak. Thanks for the honest review! I apreciate it :)
The paddle has too much inertia, it's hard to stop where you want.
I played this on a potato so pong was actually difficult for me with the low framerate.
According to the comments this might even have improved my experience with the game.
My favorite moment was when the pong game started. It seemed to me that the game was text only up until this point.
Then suddenly you play this AI.. my mind was blown!
I think this also has to do with the visual style.
The simple minimalistic text and the pong UI fit together perfectly making the transition seemless.
I really enjoyed this.
This is a nice little narrative infused with a classic game. Thank you for reminding me to keep up to date with DeepMind.