Before I Forget by LDJam user 320805
A short narrative game about memory loss in a medieval fantasy setting.
Only the mouse is required. Click to skip and advance text.
There are two endings. The main one is easy to find, but don't close the game too soon afterwards... :)



| Link | https://wrong-timeline.itch.io/before-i-forget |
| Original URL | https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/54/before-i-forget |
Ratings
| Overall | 12th | 4.429⭐ | 23🧑⚖️ |
| Fun | 116th | 4⭐ | 23🧑⚖️ |
| Innovation | 20th | 4.429⭐ | 23🧑⚖️ |
| Theme | 20th | 4.595⭐ | 23🧑⚖️ |
| Graphics | 149th | 4.286⭐ | 23🧑⚖️ |
| Audio | 49th | 4.167⭐ | 23🧑⚖️ |
| Mood | 8th | 4.548⭐ | 23🧑⚖️ |
| Given | 21🗳️ | 21🗨️ |
Reeeally nice addition to the visual novel base, gameplay is so tightly connected to the whole idea and main character it's insane.
Good job to all the team for delivering such a beauty :)
Can't really say anything bad about the game, maybe just that after a while I started just tapping all memories to see the whole assortment, before putting them in the grid. So maybe just show all them from the beginning to the right, for player's convenience?
!>The bad ending?
but I found
!>Rosa
which seemed like a good ending to me?!
Either way this was an amazing experience. I wasn't sure about the piece laying mechanic when it first popped up, but it worked really well with the narrative.
I did have one bug when I was trying to place pieces where they could clearly fit, but it wouldn't accept them. Using a singl block I was able to determine that two squares were showing as empty but were in fact blocked.
Loved the art and sound, and the writing is well done.
Good stuff :8ball:
Your game is awesome, i love it! :heart:
Interesting take of the theme, truly emotional :smile:
Thank you once again for... Euh... for... Excuse me, why am i here ? :hushed:
It was unclear how much impact my choice of memories to leave behind really had on the story, but for a single playthrough game I'm not sure that's important; I think how well the mechanic ties into the story and theme more than makes up for it.
Strong experience and well polished, a perfectly executed jam game IMO. Well done!

Little nitpicks:
When Rosa appeared, her sprite with huge eyes looked a bit too creepy, maybe you could work on it a bit? When she smiled and closed her eyes everything looked great.
I had a problem fitting "My name" at one point, the space was clear but the detail didn't want to highlight itself:

Overall, I liked the idea of the game, the mechanic of the memories and the feelings it invokes in the player. Background looked really cool. Pictures on the memory blocks were great as well. The sprites of the characters - I think could be improved, but of course I am not expecting AAA graphics from a game jam game, and I think the old man sprite was really well done.