Crima by amfibian

[raw]
made by amfibian for Ludum Dare 47 (JAM)

Our first game on LD, we hope you will like it ❤ Songs: bluebird - Beach House, Zhy - palm of my hand https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/47/crima FIND THE WAY My record is 1:30, try to win me

Ratings

Overall 1504th 2.86⭐ 27🧑‍⚖️
Fun 1621th 2.26⭐ 27🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 1668th 1.804⭐ 25🧑‍⚖️
Theme 1664th 1.938⭐ 26🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 1056th 3.28⭐ 27🧑‍⚖️
Audio 619th 3.385⭐ 28🧑‍⚖️
Humor 1231th 1.773⭐ 24🧑‍⚖️
Mood 1006th 3.2⭐ 27🧑‍⚖️
Given 4🗳️ 8🗨️

Feedback

Misterm
05. Oct 2020 · 21:32 UTC
The link https://demonius-coder.itch.io/crima shows and 404 error.
🎤 amfibian
05. Oct 2020 · 21:59 UTC
The game is uploaded, enjoy
pee-thief
05. Oct 2020 · 22:50 UTC
Great music and mood
w0nk4
05. Oct 2020 · 22:52 UTC
The theme is amazing, gameplay is a bit challenging, due to the jump and fall animations being so quick. Also I would like the camera to scroll with the character a bit more closely. Apart from that this is amazing. I will definitely keep playing this for a while and try to beat it.
Patsui
05. Oct 2020 · 22:54 UTC
+Great music

+Cool player character with nice animations

+Snappy movement

-Jump could be a little less snappy

-camera could lead the way instead of dragging behind

Nice first entry!
Johnsensei
05. Oct 2020 · 22:54 UTC
Nice Unity project. Was that song an original recorded for the jam? Platformers in Unity can be tricky getting the controls right. I think you all did well with the character not clinging to walls like a lot of Unity platformers. But I found the jumping a little hard to control. I kept getting killed on what I assumed were simple obstacles like rocks.
Jonathan Elliott
05. Oct 2020 · 22:55 UTC
Looks great...yes I died a lot...sometimes I had a hard time telling what would kill me. It looked great, and was fun.
Raz3LL
05. Oct 2020 · 22:55 UTC
Great game mate ! I love the music. The jump is a bit too gigh and fast for me, but still great job ! :)
CursedEmbassy
05. Oct 2020 · 22:56 UTC
came here to say nice music lol good job!
Oinktato
05. Oct 2020 · 22:58 UTC
I really love the music for this, and the art style is unique and fun. The controls could be tuned, but that's not too important. I can't get past the rock on the lower ground, and there doesn't seem to be any context hints to show me how to proceed. All in all, I wish there were more of this to play. Great first game!
PurpledArtFrog
05. Oct 2020 · 22:58 UTC
What a nice entry - congrats - very "stable" feel to the controls, but as others have mentioned ... the jumping is a bit tricky

:purple_heart: :dart: :frog:
sneakysushi
05. Oct 2020 · 22:58 UTC
Love the character design and music. My only complaint is that the camera lags too far behind the player :(
potatopancakes
05. Oct 2020 · 22:58 UTC
The atmosphere of the game is really great. I really like the music and artwork.
Bradalli
05. Oct 2020 · 23:01 UTC
Wow, what a great first jam game guys! :D I like the art, especially the player character. The animtion is so smooth :O

The hard difficulty isn't a bad thing but perhaps add some checkpoints and make the jump a little less heavy so that the game is a bit more forgiving to the player.
05. Oct 2020 · 23:04 UTC
very cool entry and very nice game! maybe the character could have stayed on the le left side of the screen.
But it's pretty cool anyway. love the music!
Rhythm
05. Oct 2020 · 23:04 UTC
Nice music!
AllBetsAreOff
05. Oct 2020 · 23:05 UTC
There's a good deal of content, and the mood is good. The jump is not super fun to use, and I eventually lost my way and wasn't sure where to go. For a first game, this is excellent.
BellringerQuinn
05. Oct 2020 · 23:06 UTC
Amazing art and sound. The jump is way too quick and the gravity is way too strong. You should make it so that the camera keeps the player a bit closer to the middle because sometimes I would die from something I hadn't seen yet. Great job!
ZMVL
05. Oct 2020 · 23:07 UTC
Loved the visuals and music, but found it quite hard to jump over the spikes. In my humble opinion, smoother jumps would be much responsive and the gameplay will benefit from it. Also found it a bit frustrating that music starts over when you die, making it harder to feel the relaxing atmosphere :)
Unicornfrog
05. Oct 2020 · 23:07 UTC
Nice, but I couldn't finish the stage. =/
Lazenman
05. Oct 2020 · 23:08 UTC
I didn't record time but the vocals of the song had been playing for a bit so I doubt I beat your time lol. But if this is the first game you made it's really good, the art was pretty and the character's animation looked good, the level design was alright, jumping was a little weird but I made do, and the music track you picked was chill. Keep it up!
jamesor
06. Oct 2020 · 00:29 UTC
Nice graphics and the audio matches the game well. A little work needed on the user controls, the jump doesn't feel quite right. It might be that the gravity pulls you down too quickly. I'd also like to see more look ahead. The character should probably stay in the middle of the screen because when he gets so far to the right it's hard to react to obstacles with no notice. Everything behind the player is just wasted space because you don't look at it once you pass it so no reason not to move the player back. Unfortunately, I couldn't get very far which is a shame, because it looks really nice and I was looking forward to seeing the rest of the levels. Otherwise, nice job. This game could shape up to be a lot of fun with a few minor tweaks. I hope you continue to work on it.
🎤 amfibian
06. Oct 2020 · 00:40 UTC
You are awesome guys, thanks a lot