You really made a effort on the texts!
Would have been nice to have some more features as just gowing right or left or press a button, but I really like text adventures!

Nice, I love a good Twine game.

Nice use of Twine! :) well written too

Boop.
Nicely conceived short story. I really like your writing.

I was surprised, good job!
And no, you don't need a mouse to play, runs fine on iOS ;)

Great bit of creative writing.

Twine is super cool! One of these days I need to jam in it. Impressive writing - is there an ending? I couldn't seem to find one.

This was a really well-done text adventure. I think it's the writing that did it! I wish there was more branching paths that didn't quite so obviously meet up again. Also, it's a bit of a shame that there's no real ending. well done!

Heh! Not much to say about this without spoiling it for everyone else. I feel foolish, but in a nice way. The writing is good (though I caught a typo: "roon" should be "room").

Not much to it in terms of gameplay, but it's an entertaining story, and wouldn't work nearly as well in a non-interactive format.

Beautifully written. I really enjoyed it!
I can't even think on how to improve the experience. I think it's perfect as it is. Maybe some background music would be nice?
Great job!