The Twisting Heavens by CreamyBacon2

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made by CreamyBacon2 for Ludum Dare 47 (JAM)

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Ratings

Overall 1456th 2.947⭐ 21🧑‍⚖️
Fun 1449th 2.684⭐ 21🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 1268th 2.868⭐ 21🧑‍⚖️
Theme 1173th 3.225⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 439th 3.95⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Humor 176th 3.763⭐ 21🧑‍⚖️
Mood 601th 3.579⭐ 21🧑‍⚖️
Given 9🗳️ 19🗨️

Feedback

zanzavar
06. Oct 2020 · 16:59 UTC
Nice try guys! It was fun that you implemented inside the dialogue the lack of time :sweat_smile: The aesthetic seems interesting and I liked the dash and the topdown/sideways view.
MiniBetrayal
08. Oct 2020 · 06:51 UTC
Great aesthetic and i like the soundtrack, shame you didnt have time enough for actual gameplay. Hilarious 4th-wall break too!
KOHCEPBA
08. Oct 2020 · 07:02 UTC
Aesthetics are great, the theme is 100% fit, and the mood... Sad that it is not finished.
Marcadia
08. Oct 2020 · 07:41 UTC
Dash is actually nice, would have been great to get a slice of gameplay with this + shadows.
Lid
08. Oct 2020 · 07:52 UTC
Hey there! So the game is cute and the dialogue was funny, but I feel like you put your time in the wrong place if you aimed at a proof of concept! Next time you could focus on the gameplay (a little puzzle to solve would have been nice) rather than the music or even the graphics. If you have a great mechanic you don't need much else!
Still I appreciate your effort, I'll check it out once you have something more substantial to show!
Squidzilla
08. Oct 2020 · 12:45 UTC
YOU ARE CRAZY!! :D haha nice one, I felt that. The drawings are beautiful! Music has a good mood. Retracing is a lovely concept, I've seen a one game that made it work pretty well https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/47/paradx-security they made it so you help your former self defeat an alien, but not allowed to get to close to your former self or you implode. Cool you submitted your work, hope you nail it next time! :)
Delender1100
09. Oct 2020 · 03:43 UTC
Kinda sucks that you couldn't make this into an actual game but still a great idea!
TheMentalSheep
09. Oct 2020 · 04:45 UTC
me and my friend played this at the same time and laughed so hard during the beginning , the game felt really nice to play and we enjoyed what you could finish!!
ubershmekel
09. Oct 2020 · 06:53 UTC
Too bad this is all there is! The art style is beautiful, and the storytelling was funny and interesting. Even the effects were pretty good. Too bad there isn't a game there yet to play. Please keep working on sharpening the game building skills here. Maybe find another programmer, or another coach to make sure you're on track with building a game.
Toccio94
09. Oct 2020 · 09:18 UTC
You managed to use your "lateness" in something funny, nice work!
Spotline
09. Oct 2020 · 14:21 UTC
Haha nice intro ! The character's design is really cool, too bad you didn't have time for more !
nefeli
10. Oct 2020 · 17:47 UTC
Here I am saying that I want to see the whole game! The graphics were really good. I'm rooting for the game to be finished!
piscythe
11. Oct 2020 · 01:15 UTC
This game looks pretty nice and feels good, but I don't understand what exactly you intend to do with the mechanic. How can the shadows interact with the world? What kinds of puzzles would this allow for? I'm curious to know more about what the full product might look like.
Smarto Club
11. Oct 2020 · 14:24 UTC
The art style and character design is great, would be great to see this fleshed out more!