FIND THE LOOP by MiraKazumi
EDIT: FIXED BUG WITH NOT WORKING LVL- you can play it all now! sorry for random character stops- just walk again or jump
"FIND THE LOOP" is an easy platform game where you can play with gravitation.
:zap: Take the hero for a ride through the dungeons while overcoming various platforms! :zap:

CONTROLS
W,S,A,D,spacebar,⟵,⬆,⬇,⟶

CREDITS:
art: Pola "Mira Kazumi " Hajduga
programming & audio: Piotr Kąkol
from authors Hi! "FIND THE LOOP" and this gamejam is our first step in gamedev. Thank u for playing!!!
| Youtube | https://pkako.itch.io/find-the-loop |
| Original URL | https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/47/find-the-loop |
Ratings
| Overall | 1553th | 2.767⭐ | 32🧑⚖️ |
| Fun | 1546th | 2.467⭐ | 32🧑⚖️ |
| Innovation | 1389th | 2.717⭐ | 32🧑⚖️ |
| Theme | 1542th | 2.617⭐ | 32🧑⚖️ |
| Graphics | 690th | 3.683⭐ | 32🧑⚖️ |
| Audio | 939th | 2.85⭐ | 32🧑⚖️ |
| Given | 16🗳️ | 33🗨️ |
Controls: a little glitchy, still fun
Movement mechanics: same feedback as controls, slightly frustrating
Lighting and mood: NOICE
Overall, it didn't follow the theme too well but I am very impressed if all this art was made during the jam. Mostly try to focus more on mechanics next time.
Cheers!
The controls felt kind of buggy, which made a lot of the jumps a bit of trial and error. It would also have been nice to see where the gravity gets flipped in the level, so the player can make the decision how the level is traversed. The way it is now had you kind of stumbeling forward to the next available platform, which made the interaction with your core mechanic more unreliable.
The graphics were very nice, I liked the medieval steam punk aesthetics and music. The lighting in the levels made the game very moody. Good job :)
I felt like some of the levels were a bit too dark; I had problems figuring out what I was doing in the first level. Still, I understand that it also contributes a lot to the mood. Maybe try to be more careful where you place dark areas so the player doesn't lose track.
However, the atmosphere is really great! The art is well done and sells the mood.
For a first-time entry I feel this is a good start! Work a bit on the controls and the bugs and this could be a really nice game.
@hank-ather thank u!
@maliyshock @captainproton42 @szatku @just-dante thanks for important comments! we will take our game on higher lvl next time and fix those bugs and graphic mistakes!
wow this is an impressive first try !
Very ambitious though which I guess is an obligatory learning step when starting in game dev
The art style I do like a lot, perharps the dark areas should not be total pitch black but some sort of transparent dark grey otherwise it does feel like you had a specific idea for the assets and background and I think you got that right !
As for the gameplay, controls feel a little sluggish, and I feel like solving a few problems with friction and onfloor detection would help a lot (ex: getting stopped mid air for touching the side of a platform / some jumps not triggering at all).
The gravity is a nice touch but this sort of mechanic needs a looooot of tweaking and is a hard thing to get right normally, so even more when you only have 72 hours ! But hey you tried it and actually made it work enough to be playable and that is in itself very impressive !
Congratulation on finishing your first game jam and keep up the good work !
Feel free to check out my entry and give me your opinions !
Cheers
Damien
@ninjacatz we saw these sprites and will fix it! and thank u for mentioning bout jump-will take notes :heavy_check_mark:
@guaranteedtrainwreck @eden-shazar thank u for constructive feedback! next time we would avoid black areas and test the jump more.
Anyway, great work and I'm sure you had a ton of fun, which is the entire point of all this!
@tommy thank u foir suggestions and we had a lot of fun and stress (before finish) with this little game! but we want to do it again :dog:
Good that you're getting into gamedev this way; you do indeed get a lot of good testers who actually give feedback here. I hope it encourages you to keep improving!
By the way, if the ratings will not very high, you should see that as a challenge to get better and keep going, and improve them in 6 months ;)