Dying Plant by Shubh

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made by Shubh for Ludum Dare 46 (JAM)

This game is about a young boy named joe helping a plant which is dying to survive, your objective is to provide the things that plant need to it.This is a endless game made for ludam dare 46, this game is hosted on itch.io

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Ratings

Overall 2530th 2.271⭐ 37🧑‍⚖️
Fun 2537th 1.833⭐ 38🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 2534th 1.929⭐ 37🧑‍⚖️
Theme 1508th 3.529⭐ 37🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 2243th 2.419⭐ 39🧑‍⚖️
Audio 1564th 2.129⭐ 37🧑‍⚖️
Humor 1979th 1.935⭐ 33🧑‍⚖️
Mood 2355th 2.167⭐ 35🧑‍⚖️
Given 28🗳️ 40🗨️

Feedback

🎤 Shubh
19. Apr 2020 · 16:46 UTC
I finally did it
Joaquim_2009
20. Apr 2020 · 10:08 UTC
I do not no what i can do
Game_Coder28
20. Apr 2020 · 10:22 UTC
Good game, its a nice idea but can easily get a bit boring after a couple of minutes, the gap between each thing it wants is to long and maybe you could have a deadline for what it needs, so the game gets harder the longer you play it for, overall, ok game, but could do with some level of difficulty
Retti01
20. Apr 2020 · 10:26 UTC
Nice idea. Needs littlebit more content. I like it over all.
🎤 Shubh
20. Apr 2020 · 11:30 UTC
Thank you all of you for your feedback, I am new to Ludam Dare thus I paniced and dint think much about difficulty. Sorry.
Millhow
20. Apr 2020 · 12:35 UTC
Cool idea ! You fit perfectly with the theme!
Indeed it would have been good to integrate an end and to visualize the life of the plant.
But that doesn't change the fact that the music is nice and that it's a game that deserves to be continued :)
Good job :)
Hope you had fun to create your game !
🎤 Shubh
20. Apr 2020 · 19:34 UTC
Thank u for ur feedback, i may continue it
🎤 Shubh
20. Apr 2020 · 19:42 UTC
Joquim you can read the story of the game which comes after the menu. You should Drag and Drop
Llamallove
22. Apr 2020 · 06:55 UTC
It fit very well with the theme. the controls and goal are my main dislikes about the game, but overall good job!
🎤 Shubh
22. Apr 2020 · 06:57 UTC
Thank u for the feedback and rating my game.
Ilimanic
22. Apr 2020 · 07:47 UTC
Good idea, but the implementation is bad, I advise you to finalize the game, and draw new graphics.
🎤 Shubh
22. Apr 2020 · 08:20 UTC
Thank you for ur feedback
SageWare
22. Apr 2020 · 11:07 UTC
This is a good start to a game. The controls were a bit confusing at first but I eventually got the hang of it. Some of the UI was cut off. The music was nice and I liked the game's concept. I hope you continue working on it.
🎤 Shubh
22. Apr 2020 · 17:39 UTC
Thanks fot playing my game and giving us feed back and we eill surrly continue this game.
D4rkWeasel
23. Apr 2020 · 06:50 UTC
Congratulations for finishing your first Ludum Dare game! It's already a good start. I don't really know, if you can actually loose the game. I tried to wait for some time, but the game still continued :D But the core gameplay (except for losing, maybe) works, so nice work! Your next Ludum Dare game will get even better, if you continue practicing ;)
🎤 Shubh
23. Apr 2020 · 08:18 UTC
Thank u for ut feedback
WhoMakeWorse
23. Apr 2020 · 08:59 UTC
Good game, i like a lot the graphics, well done !!
Convg
23. Apr 2020 · 09:23 UTC
Cool game. The graphics are simple but nice, The gameplay is good but may be better if you have to give stuff to the plant more often. Overall I liked this game. Good job.
🎤 Shubh
23. Apr 2020 · 12:41 UTC
Thank you @convg @whomakeworse for your feedback and i will try to improve
jk5000
23. Apr 2020 · 13:02 UTC
I do not understand this game. I try to give plant all the things, and noting happens. It sometimes looks like the plant wants something, but if I give it what it wants or I give it something else, do not seems to do anything at all.
🎤 Shubh
23. Apr 2020 · 13:05 UTC
@jk5000 I am sorry for that actually whrn thr jam was ending i found a big bug in the script. The bug was beyond my head even i tried in utube hence at thr end i deleted the script.
Pilarius
23. Apr 2020 · 13:07 UTC
@shubh You completed your first game jam, that is awesome!

I think the game could profit from some player feedback and consequences on actions. At the moment I think there is no difference if I interact with the plan or not.
One general tip for future jams: Try to include a HTML5 version of your game. A lot of players including me does not like to download games. Having a WebGL Build makes it possible to play the game in your browser. With unity it is relative easy to do so.

Its always exciting to see new developers, keep it up :)
🎤 Shubh
23. Apr 2020 · 13:10 UTC
Thank you @pilarius for yout feedback and yes i will follow you tip but i actually trued it but i always get this error. Ic20 build failed.
Pilarius
23. Apr 2020 · 13:16 UTC
@shubh Well that's unfortunate. Some times external packages like text mesh pro can throw errors or the used unity version when building. The Unity Forum is a good place to find solutions to such problems
🎤 Shubh
23. Apr 2020 · 13:17 UTC
Thank you @pilarius
🎤 Shubh
23. Apr 2020 · 13:18 UTC
I have textmesh pro. I must get rid of it. Fourums is a good idea @pilarius
zimennik
23. Apr 2020 · 13:57 UTC
Well. This is a game. Not the best, but it is clear that the developer tried.
Music is present. Graphics too.
On wide screens, part of the game is cropped.

Anyway, better than my first game =)
🎤 Shubh
23. Apr 2020 · 13:59 UTC
@zimennik thank u for ur feedback
Szkocka
23. Apr 2020 · 14:05 UTC
I have to say, could use some polish, but you didn`t gave up, finished the game and posted it. That`s what matters
🎤 Shubh
23. Apr 2020 · 14:08 UTC
Thank you @szkocka
LungTakumi
23. Apr 2020 · 14:16 UTC
I tried, still don't know how to play. Maybe you can write some instruction.
Pusheeneiro
23. Apr 2020 · 14:41 UTC
Nice game as the first entry and you did it alone. GG
🎤 Shubh
23. Apr 2020 · 15:39 UTC
Thank you for your feed back and support @pusheeneiro
Raphiell
23. Apr 2020 · 23:21 UTC
Congrats on finishing a game for your first ludum dare! As others have said, it's a good start, and I liked the art! Some more direction on what to do would be nice.

Well done!
🎤 Shubh
24. Apr 2020 · 06:17 UTC
Thank you fir ur feedback and support @raphiell
natpat
26. Apr 2020 · 20:00 UTC
Good take on the theme, and a promising start. The music was chirpy and fit the game - would have been good if it was slightly longer! A score, and maybe a fail state if the player gets it wrong too long would be good first steps to improving.
🎤 Shubh
27. Apr 2020 · 04:36 UTC
Thank you for your feed back @natpat
Velucyraptor
27. Apr 2020 · 18:35 UTC
This was a little confusing. I couldn't tell whether what I was doing was having any impact but the music was quite fun. Spot on for theme!
Team-on
29. Apr 2020 · 11:29 UTC
Simple gameplay and nice art
🎤 Shubh
29. Apr 2020 · 14:53 UTC
Thank you for your feedback and support @team-on