Dreamless by Lamossus

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made by Lamossus for Ludum Dare 47 (COMPO)

You are stuck in a loop of your own boring life. Every day the same. Every night the same. No motivation. No interest. No dreams.

English isn't my first language, if you notice any typos or grammatical errors I would really appreciate if you could point them out.

Ratings

Overall 451th 3.16⭐ 27🧑‍⚖️
Fun 606th 2.2⭐ 27🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 435th 3⭐ 27🧑‍⚖️
Theme 220th 3.8⭐ 27🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 334th 3.34⭐ 27🧑‍⚖️
Mood 162th 3.52⭐ 27🧑‍⚖️
Given 19🗳️ 25🗨️

Feedback

JeremyOduber
05. Oct 2020 · 15:16 UTC
Heavy stuff. Rather relatable, actually. I found the art style to be very effective.
ZwodahS
06. Oct 2020 · 07:11 UTC
An interesting take on the theme.
I am not sure if the "I finally have a dream" crashed the game or the game was suppose to quit there.
I keep coding hoping for something new, but I couldn't find any.

Good job on the submission
🎤 Lamossus
06. Oct 2020 · 07:56 UTC
@zwodahs the game is supposed to close, you finished it. One playthrough isn't enough to see all of the interactions though, so if you are interested you could replay the game and interact with different things
Mykola
06. Oct 2020 · 19:06 UTC
Very good take on the theme. It started rather depressive, but I liked how it gets slightly better every time. Unexpectedly deep, very well done!
Rainbows are Fun
07. Oct 2020 · 06:31 UTC
A very powerful ending, I love it
Raivk
08. Oct 2020 · 09:19 UTC
Indeed that's a powerful ending, nice game :)
Bot12313
09. Oct 2020 · 11:29 UTC
Cool game! But I really miss the sounds.
orlandobatista
10. Oct 2020 · 03:18 UTC
As someone already mentioned, it was unexpectedly deep, but everything is well put together. An interesting approach of the theme as well. Some simple sound effects could add a lot into it. Overall, it was a good entry. :slight_smile:
zacharieg
10. Oct 2020 · 14:22 UTC
Good game ! Not so fun but I enjoy it anyway, try to improve the life of this guy was satisfying, keep it up !
xinux
10. Oct 2020 · 14:23 UTC
Polished graphics, nice message, unexpected ending (thought it crashed). Some moody music would elevate it a lot.
Wabble
12. Oct 2020 · 01:09 UTC
Welcome to the rat race
Rikitaner
13. Oct 2020 · 09:58 UTC
Very nice story and good message at the end! I enjoyed playing and waiting to see what will come next! With a bit more polish and some music and sound effects, this could be a really good little game!
gamescodedogs
22. Oct 2020 · 13:08 UTC
Have we a chance to see HTML5 version?