The Legacy of a Loser by citsua
THE GAME
You are a nobody. Beauty, fitness, intelligence... well you have none of them. But could you still accomplish something? Get a job, go to the gym, get a haircut, and get a girl! Use your wits to seduce them all, and maybe your child will be blessed with better genes... Build your legacy, even if you are to be remembered as a forever loser.



Ratings
| Overall | 618th | 3.397⭐ | 41🧑⚖️ |
| Fun | 613th | 3.192⭐ | 41🧑⚖️ |
| Innovation | 621th | 3.103⭐ | 41🧑⚖️ |
| Theme | 448th | 3.447⭐ | 40🧑⚖️ |
| Graphics | 653th | 3.372⭐ | 41🧑⚖️ |
| Humor | 297th | 3.244⭐ | 41🧑⚖️ |
| Mood | 882th | 2.897⭐ | 41🧑⚖️ |
| Given | 46🗳️ | 23🗨️ |
Thanks for the feedback! You can your job back after losing it, you just have to wait 5 months. I had forgotten to write it in the tutorial, so thanks for reminding me!
After the 40 months, there is only an option to restart the game, it would be better if I can continue my generation with improved gene.
@hexcolyte not sure if I understood you correctly, but you actually can improve your genes! If a girl likes you enough, she will get pregnant, and after 9 months a child will be born, inheriting both your characteristics.
You however cannot continue your lineage once you lose.
It teaches some valuable life lessons: prioritise your goals, call her back every three months (especially if she's pregnant), and always play rock paper scissors.
Some ways to improve:
Add more phone/park scenarios. They repeat a lot.
Add more jobs, and I agree that it would be good to see other jobs before quitting yours. (Or maybe there aren't any. What a tough job market.)

But despite all this, he was not able to sire a child. Let this be a lesson to you all: do not spend your days at the club, for you will acquire a great many numbers. And the woman of your affection will remain out of reach, hidden in the masses that accost you in the park.
Really great look and the conversations were hilarious and entertaining!
@custardcosmos we hope that you will continue to play our game! We'll try to make some updates to add dialogs and to adjust some of the UI to make it easier to play and understand
@notapixelstudio It's a great compliment to see that you liked our game despite it not being your genre. And pleased to see you learned something ;)
I started hitting the gym. However at the same time I had burnout from working too much. I decided that it was best for my health to quit the job until I would graduate from school. At least I now had the energy to get in shape.
After quitting the job, I had some free time so I decided to visit the park for the first time. There I met Rebecca, who appeared to be avid reader. I usually mess up with the girls, but this time things went well and we managed to have a reasonable conversation. I got her number which was promising. She was pretty fit chick and overall nearly perfect. I decided that I would get on the same level with her.
I graduated from school and went back to my old job. I didn't receive any promotions or salary rise, but I guess I was lucky to still have a job. At least I had money for the gym to get fit.
I messed things up as I lost Rebecca's number somehow. Hopefully I went to park to see her again. She happened to be jogging by and was quite tired and hungry. I had her favorite snack on me, which surprised her positively. We both laughed at the incident of me losing her number. I felt we had become close. After this we spent lot of time together and Rebecca ended up getting pregnant.
This is where my story ends however as the game run out of time..
Game was a nice experience. Random generation of the characters was nice surprise. There could have been some randomly generated clothes on the characters as well. :blush:
Vector graphics were right choice for this one, I think. Color palette is nice and positive. Clouds on the background give somewhat dreamy feeling. Background could have changed theme when you visit various places, visualizing park, workplace etc..
I never had enough money for a car or other expensive things. Also the club was closed for me. It might be for the rich ones as well? :slight_smile: I felt there could be more jobs around, or promotions based on your intelligence. Maybe some temporary jobs, which could provide more salary?
I found it problematic that I constantly lost the phone number of girls for no reason. It wasn't thematically communicated why this happened, or I missed something.
Overall nice entry for the jam. Good work!
Most of the things you're wondering about were explained in the tutorial (visible on the game page). You can only call girls once every three months, and you need a car to go to the club.
You're right though, we wanted to put those informations in-game but we didn't have enough time.
You actually unlock quite a few different jobs when training your stats (teacher, athlete, model, engineer...). And I would have loved to have more visual variety too, and as we plan to keep working on this game for a little while, it'll probably come in the future :).
Thank you so much for your detailed feedback!