Troubles on Colony 39 by Stadoblech

Story game which takes place on Colony 39. No shooting, no collecting anything... just chill and enjoy story
game link (browser game): https://stadoblech.itch.io/troubles-on-colony-39
Ratings
| Overall | 738th | 2.526⭐ | 21🧑⚖️ |
| Fun | 738th | 2.263⭐ | 21🧑⚖️ |
| Innovation | 654th | 2.526⭐ | 21🧑⚖️ |
| Theme | 364th | 3.474⭐ | 21🧑⚖️ |
| Graphics | 595th | 2.842⭐ | 21🧑⚖️ |
| Audio | 497th | 1.938⭐ | 18🧑⚖️ |
| Humor | 192th | 3.211⭐ | 21🧑⚖️ |
| Mood | 670th | 2.579⭐ | 21🧑⚖️ |
| Given | 0🗳️ | 0🗨️ |
Only downfalls were grammar and audio. Some footsteps sounds would have been nice or some music that plays for each character could have added to the humour aspect.
But overall, great game!
It's well done but my tips are include move animations for the player an pass the dialogues with a key.
Good job for doing this in 72h :)
1. animations for the player
2. a button to skip through dialog
3. some type of ambient music track
4. walking footsteps
The story was quite funny and I did enjoy the experience. So yeah Good job and congrats on submitting a game for the Jam!
The elements were simple, and yet you used them effectively to tell the story. The art was quite charming. Some additional sound-effects could have improved the mood even more.
In general, the writing was fun, even if it had a few errors. It was a fun surprise when the rocket suddenly spoke to me! A few more interactive objects could make room for some more funny text.
>A change in routine.
>Daisy production is up,
>but morale is down.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wbi09HIq8YA
It's all about truth. And jokes are funny.
The game would definitely benefit from background music.
Well done!