A D Roll'Space by Raktou

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made by Raktou for LD 42 (JAM)

Fixed:

Added arrows in a certain part to facilite the location of the path to follow.

Outflow:

First LDJam & first game ever, OMG that was sooo hard, I can't belive I made it! Hope you enjoy, guys! 😁

Game Idea:

The game consist on you as the ball made it to the end, passing through obstacles and trying not to fall! haha

Software

Blender

How to play

A - Go left

D - Go right

Space - Jump

Red floors and walls make you go back to the start point.

The game is easy to understand. 🔴

Reclaim

I've tried to do this game in a diferent way, but I'm too begginer and had too many problems, this is my first ever game and I did my best to make it funny.

Dowload Game: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1dnQ8LbtIvFcm5nipczguVVIUJrY8WQkW

Source (Archive .Blend): https://www.4shared.com/s/fRS5m-zfpgm

Prints:

https://gyazo.com/d395368a65f03d85a2e937a0c81e31bb

https://gyazo.com/efbc55298d273d19c5f3255ecfd174d4

https://gyazo.com/b03e7ab551f0c91ad02d299bc5b9ded7

https://gyazo.com/dfb046acd730b074e6b073a17ef2c75b

https://gyazo.com/234c40fc37dad4919f9e74395f98a206

https://gyazo.com/b8828cd808ea0522db85c2f3c3b20431

Thanks for read all of this and for play my game!(I hope so hahah😆)

Ratings

Overall 1217th 2.595⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Fun 1004th 2.786⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 1185th 2.4⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Theme 1257th 2.053⭐ 21🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 1145th 2.275⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Audio 771th 2.1⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Mood 1085th 2.289⭐ 21🧑‍⚖️
Given 18🗳️ 15🗨️

Feedback

guilhermesouza
15. Aug 2018 · 19:15 UTC
Hey, can you upload your game in another server? (like mediafire, github..)
catbutt
15. Aug 2018 · 19:42 UTC
Hey, I'd be happy to review your game. Try dropbox and/or google drive. most people wont download from 4shared.
Derek Volker
15. Aug 2018 · 20:23 UTC
Just as a tip, you guys should really putted the game in a more friendly server like github, dropbox, google drive, itch.io or mega. A HTML5 version as well attracts many more players.

That said the game has in interesting mechanic, but i couldnt figure out how to go beyond the huge straight part. The lack of visibility of what is beyond made me impossible to guess what i had to do. However, the controls work pretty smoothly, the acceleration, jumping and going forward and back are nice.
🎤 Raktou
16. Aug 2018 · 06:01 UTC
@guilhermesouza @catbutt @derek-volker Thanks you all. I changed the link to google drive now, better? Sorry for that mistake, but like I said, it's my very first game, I'm learning hahaha
🎤 Raktou
16. Aug 2018 · 06:19 UTC
And @derek-volker I was thinking about that path missing, sorry for that. There's a moment you have to run fast to right on a long platform and on the final have a ramp, there's where you missed the way? If yes, try to go a little to the left.

The camera view was a big problem to me, I tryed to make the game on third person, I lost almost 2 days on that, then I gave up and made a "2D" view. If I had more experience, I could made a way better game with the idea. 💔

Thanks for your feedback!
Divinenephron
18. Aug 2018 · 21:47 UTC
Good job making your first game in 3D. There was clever use of the bouncing mechanic. I got stuck on the long segment with a hook on the end like other people did. I think like another person suggested, this could be made more solvable by making sure players can see where they're going.
🎤 Raktou
18. Aug 2018 · 22:42 UTC
@divinenephron Thanks man! As soon as I read your comment, I edited the game to facilitate location of the path to be followed. Here come's Alpha 5 hahaha
Logicon211
19. Aug 2018 · 00:01 UTC
Was fun to make the first few jumps. Especially the ones where you're going real fast. The loop jump didn't work for me cause I got stuck going up it the first time. Not sure what this game has to do with the theme. But good job either way!
🎤 Raktou
19. Aug 2018 · 00:34 UTC
@logicon211 Thanks man! If you miss the platform, you die, and the final end has parts where it gets clearer. At least that's how I thought about linking my game to the theme hahaha
Astralore
19. Aug 2018 · 01:09 UTC
This was cute and fun! It asks for an audio rating, but as far as I can tell, there's no audio? I love all the floating text, though! :smiley_cat:
🎤 Raktou
19. Aug 2018 · 01:12 UTC
Thanks @astralore ! haha in fact, it only has audio when the ball hits the ground, rolls or when it is on the elevator haha

PS: Oh no! I forget to add the audio on the FIXED version!
PS2: Fixed the FIXED version HAHAHAHA thanks for the warning!
johnnwfs
19. Aug 2018 · 14:28 UTC
I got to the point the game displayed "now you are ready" but missed a jump - when I realized I had to start from the very beginning I got disheartened. It was neat up to that point though, so no point drops! Just wanted to suggest that there be a check point in any future update so I can avoid the "training". Good job - I like building up tons of speed for one jump and flying through the air for a long time - all those arrows helped give a good sense of movement! Good job.
Shozou
19. Aug 2018 · 15:50 UTC
Hey! The game is rather fun, but it seriously lacks checkpoints. It's really hard to get far when even the smallest mistake will cost you a lot of time due to having to beat the level from the start all over again. The sound on rolling the ball could use some variation or some change in the looping - it can get really annoying the longer you ride. Some tell for how much momentum you have would be nice too. I found myself reacting too late and being unable to turn my momentum around.

Still, for the first game, this was a solid try! With some polish, it could be really good.
🎤 Raktou
21. Aug 2018 · 03:15 UTC
OH MAN! Thanks both of you @johnnwfs and @shozou ! Your feedbacks will not be in vain! hahaha

I will discover how to make checkpoints and the audio change with speed thing! ahhaa
Nalah
21. Aug 2018 · 11:07 UTC
- it needs checkpoints
- the handling is really heavy
- I don't really see the theme

Other than that nice job I wanted to finish it =)
🎤 Raktou
24. Aug 2018 · 06:27 UTC
Thanks, @nalah !
Koala Squad
26. Aug 2018 · 16:38 UTC
I have one word for you: CHECKPOINTS. Other than the complete lack of such, great job! The mechanics worked pretty well, and the graphics were quite good! The audio was alright, although it really didn't fit the theme.

Cheers!
- The Koala Squad
Mastersmith98
26. Aug 2018 · 22:32 UTC
Congrats on your first entry!
🎤 Raktou
30. Aug 2018 · 17:18 UTC
Thanks @koala-squad and @mastersmith98 !!!
ursagames
04. Sep 2018 · 13:29 UTC
This was pretty challenging, but a lot of fun! Thanks for sharing your game with my stream awhile back. Your game was played around 2:56 into this vod: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/299925225
🎤 Raktou
04. Sep 2018 · 14:02 UTC
Thanks @ursagames ! It was my pleasure!