Mystical Intrusion by yojammerjammer

You, the main character of Protagonistville have decided to move into your grandfather's cottage by McLean swamp. Of course, what is a good mysterious cottage without some magical houseguests?

Ratings
| Overall | 586th | 3.393⭐ | 30🧑⚖️ |
| Fun | 472th | 3.346⭐ | 28🧑⚖️ |
| Innovation | 648th | 3.115⭐ | 28🧑⚖️ |
| Theme | 394th | 3.731⭐ | 28🧑⚖️ |
| Graphics | 262th | 3.944⭐ | 29🧑⚖️ |
| Humor | 106th | 3.712⭐ | 28🧑⚖️ |
| Mood | 184th | 3.654⭐ | 28🧑⚖️ |
| Given | 27🗳️ | 22🗨️ |
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I really liked the idea and it was refreshing to see a Renpy game here. I'll wait for the post-jam version!
P.S- I did not seem to get any bugs (in the Android version).
The whole story is pretty great. I finished the game with 50 stress ! I really sympathized with all the creatures living in the house (especially fairies :D ), and the super cute design was pretty good!
Only complains would be that the sound can get a bit too much repetitive. It fits your story but gets a bit redundant after some playthrough !
Also I feel like the game took an easy turn in the narrative : being nice and comprehensive makes you win, the opposite make you lose since it raises stress level. I didn't try to make a playthrough and raise stress level, but I feel like this is the "bad ending", I'm maybe wrong so please point this me out if ever :D !
Anyway, I felt like this "easy turn" might be a cheap solution to writing, and I would have liked a bit more choices and more hesitation about creatures. Pretty sure you ran out of time but this would have been great !
This was a really lovely game, thanks you for sharing this <3 !
The visuals are really lovely too. Only thing that irks me is that the stress bar looks so out of place. Maybe if it was the same style as the rest, but filled in with color? The audio is very suitable, but a little repetitive.
Overall one of my favorite entries this LD. I wish I'd see more visual novels on here.
Cheers!
If you don't bother take a look at our game when we focused on Graphics and visuals and see the results that we got:
https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/42/spacelab-42