Mystical Intrusion by yojammerjammer

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made by yojammerjammer for LD 42 (JAM)

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​You, the main character of Protagonistville have decided to move into your grandfather's cottage by McLean swamp. Of course, what is a good mysterious cottage without some magical houseguests?

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Ratings

Overall 586th 3.393⭐ 30🧑‍⚖️
Fun 472th 3.346⭐ 28🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 648th 3.115⭐ 28🧑‍⚖️
Theme 394th 3.731⭐ 28🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 262th 3.944⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Humor 106th 3.712⭐ 28🧑‍⚖️
Mood 184th 3.654⭐ 28🧑‍⚖️
Given 27🗳️ 22🗨️

Feedback

diwo
12. Aug 2018 · 08:13 UTC
Hyped by your game !
PopDaddyGames
14. Aug 2018 · 03:16 UTC
'Protagonistville'-- that's a really awesome name for a town.. haha! :)
🎤 yojammerjammer
14. Aug 2018 · 06:32 UTC
SORRY EVERYONE FOR THE LATE UPLOAD. THERE IS STILL A MAJOR BUG THAT ISN'T FIXED.
Raziyya
15. Aug 2018 · 11:02 UTC
Really enjoyed playing your game. Made me laugh a lot!
bentglasstube
17. Aug 2018 · 06:44 UTC
Really impressed with the amount of dialog written for a ludum dare game. The story was adorable and I enjoyed the art style all around. I am not a huge fan of interactive novels, but this was fun and short enough for me to stick with to completion. It seems there were multiple endings, too, which is neat.
Rayne
17. Aug 2018 · 06:59 UTC
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I got this error message.
I really liked the idea and it was refreshing to see a Renpy game here. I'll wait for the post-jam version!
unfinished
17. Aug 2018 · 07:57 UTC
awesome :).. the bugs were no game stopper for me. all what is bothering me, is that i drove this poor goblin away :[ .. is there an ending with him around? if one day you make this game any longer, add some action parts like in undertale or pony island, and viola masterpiece.
Anubhav Kashyap
17. Aug 2018 · 10:52 UTC
I checked out your game as I had said I would....... and it was AMAZING!! I wasn't able to finish it, though. I had to run out all the three times I played :laughing:. Also, the humour was nice. Overall, great job!

P.S- I did not seem to get any bugs (in the Android version).
meatpudding
17. Aug 2018 · 15:18 UTC
I love the illustrations.
CristiHKJ
22. Aug 2018 · 07:39 UTC
Great game! Very cool and interesting! :D
darefus
22. Aug 2018 · 08:31 UTC
Love the scenario. Plus the execution is super cute and not overworked at all. Loved meeting all the new little friends in my home. I like that you allowed the player to create a playful mood out of the whole thing instead of what I would've assumed to be a harsh/negative one.
Gaming Night
22. Aug 2018 · 08:45 UTC
Nice art style :) I really like what you did here !!
Demn
22. Aug 2018 · 15:13 UTC
This was a really lovely game ! I really felt moved by some of the themes you discussed in the game, and I feel this is a very intimate and good take on the theme !

The whole story is pretty great. I finished the game with 50 stress ! I really sympathized with all the creatures living in the house (especially fairies :D ), and the super cute design was pretty good!

Only complains would be that the sound can get a bit too much repetitive. It fits your story but gets a bit redundant after some playthrough !

Also I feel like the game took an easy turn in the narrative : being nice and comprehensive makes you win, the opposite make you lose since it raises stress level. I didn't try to make a playthrough and raise stress level, but I feel like this is the "bad ending", I'm maybe wrong so please point this me out if ever :D !

Anyway, I felt like this "easy turn" might be a cheap solution to writing, and I would have liked a bit more choices and more hesitation about creatures. Pretty sure you ran out of time but this would have been great !

This was a really lovely game, thanks you for sharing this <3 !
TheCrittersCove
22. Aug 2018 · 22:24 UTC
The story is so cute! This visual novel is really well thought out and written. The length of the story is really impressive for a LD entry. In the beginning there was something off with the dialogue. Where it implied I had already met other mystical creatures when I came across my first. Otherwise, everything went smoothly in the story.

The visuals are really lovely too. Only thing that irks me is that the stress bar looks so out of place. Maybe if it was the same style as the rest, but filled in with color? The audio is very suitable, but a little repetitive.

Overall one of my favorite entries this LD. I wish I'd see more visual novels on here.
MerpADer
22. Aug 2018 · 23:19 UTC
Was really interesting story but not much connection to theme. liked the music and graphics. sometimes the text doesn't align well with the decisions I made before I talk to a person, but overall good game.
Auwren
26. Aug 2018 · 02:20 UTC
Artist for the game here! Thanks for all of the support and feedback, this was my first game jam :)
Diaxcor
26. Aug 2018 · 19:30 UTC
i really loved the artist *___* good job (y)
Logicon211
26. Aug 2018 · 23:27 UTC
I wish I could hug that unicorn.
nihilaleph
27. Aug 2018 · 00:02 UTC
Wow, a lot of work was put on this! Great art style, long story with a many branching and endings~ I was able to live together with everybody :smile_cat: Also made the stress 100 just to see what happens :laughing:

Cheers!
Rahim_Pxr
27. Aug 2018 · 00:43 UTC
Nice game, I hope to see more updates and improvments sooner.
If you don't bother take a look at our game when we focused on Graphics and visuals and see the results that we got:
https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/42/spacelab-42
AnlaXix
27. Aug 2018 · 18:33 UTC
Great job !
Renier
27. Aug 2018 · 19:48 UTC
Enjoyed it ! was funny and nicely done, a solid effort
Shakedimus
01. Sep 2018 · 11:09 UTC
I liked it, it was funny, well writen and had a nice theme. But I had some gripes with it, personnaly I don't really like the art style and the music got annoying very fast. Overalll nice work, I'm pretty impressed you made this in a jam.