WHELM by Ethan Nachreiner

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made by Ethan Nachreiner for LD 42 (COMPO)

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Top-down shooter where the bullets will overwhelm you.

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The year is 25XX. The world is dead. I have reached the headquarters of the Biodroids. They must die.

Controls | Keyboard | Gamepad | -------- | -------- | ------- | Move | WASD | Left stick Shoot | LMB | Right trigger Dodge | RMB | Left bumper Clear | Space | Right bumper Pause | Escape | Start

Made using GameMaker: Studio.

Watch me make the game: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z9PYP9ylt3I

Updates:

2.4: - Added a helpful message that appears on the first floor - Added an extra reward for reaching the tenth floor

2.3: - Fixed game crashing bug - Added border effect when near death

2.2: - Updated the EXE name and icon - Added the version to the menu

COMPO: - Made a special "COMPO" version of the game that includes all of the bugs fixes from previous versions, but none of the "new content" (door sounds, dodge in move direction, auto collection, and screen shake option). - There isn't much of a reason to download this unless you want to rate the game as fairly as possible!

2.1: - Added door sounds

2.0: - Multiple bug fixes - You now dodge in the last direction you moved - Your bullets are automatically collected after clearing a room - Adjusted camera sizes

View all updates: https://rieneige.itch.io/whelm

(Minor seizure warning: The background can be a bit flashy.)

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Tip 1: Reach the 10th floor to unlock a checkpoint! Tip 2: Remember to clear the screen to gain more time!

Ratings

Overall 232th 3.578โญ 34๐Ÿง‘โ€โš–๏ธ
Fun 194th 3.545โญ 35๐Ÿง‘โ€โš–๏ธ
Innovation 421th 3.091โญ 35๐Ÿง‘โ€โš–๏ธ
Theme 444th 3.364โญ 35๐Ÿง‘โ€โš–๏ธ
Graphics 278th 3.439โญ 35๐Ÿง‘โ€โš–๏ธ
Audio 305th 3.015โญ 35๐Ÿง‘โ€โš–๏ธ
Mood 268th 3.129โญ 33๐Ÿง‘โ€โš–๏ธ
Given 29๐Ÿ—ณ๏ธ 34๐Ÿ—จ๏ธ

Feedback

ngUpsiLoN
13. Aug 2018 ยท 00:11 UTC
OH MY GOD GLITCHES EVERYWHEEEEERE!!!
I LOVE THAT <3

More seriously I really like the concept of dodging your own bullets^^
But sometimes too much feedbacks is too much tho xD
DoubleBiceps
13. Aug 2018 ยท 00:18 UTC
Remember me hotline miami. So nervous ! I love it !
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
13. Aug 2018 ยท 00:23 UTC
@doublebiceps That was certainly an inspiration! ๐Ÿ˜‰ I'm glad you liked it!
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
13. Aug 2018 ยท 00:24 UTC
@ngupsilon Thanks for the comment! ๐Ÿ˜„ Was the screenshake too much (I'm a bit too used to it...)? I could turn it down in the next update? (I'll keep the original though so people can fairly review what I made in the 48 hours.)
ngUpsiLoN
13. Aug 2018 ยท 00:27 UTC
@ethan-nachreiner Yay the screen shake was a little too much, it makes sometimes the game quite hard to read in my opinion^^
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
13. Aug 2018 ยท 00:31 UTC
@ngupsilon I made the screen shake higher than normal so players wouldn't kill themselves too easily (by shooting too much), but I'm bad at judging screen shake... I'll tone it down in the next update! ๐Ÿ˜„
ThePelranthean
13. Aug 2018 ยท 01:00 UTC
This game is a bit overwhelming at first, but eventually I learned to enjoy managing a whole bunch of bullets up in the air. You can add more by firing and take away some by dodging.

You just have to watch out for enemies beneath your haze of bullet fire and manage you location properly and this game should be a breeze... at least it would be if I didn't suck at twin stick shooters. Oh well.

As I went from floor to floor, it would have been nice to see more variety of environment - but who am I kidding. My levels didn't have any decoration at all, so well done on at least making yours look nice and in theme. The music was also simple, but on point with your theme. Well done on that.

One thing that confused me a little bit was the camera movement. Sometimes it would zoom waaayyyyyyy in and I wouldn't see what was going on. Other times it would zoom all the way out and I could see everything (I'll just stand in this corner while my bullets kill the enemies next door). Not seeing the back-end I don't know what caused this, but it was a bit interesting.

Overall, well done on this game. It's not too complicated, benefited from what polish you could bring to bear, and ended up being enjoyable to play (which is generally the purpose of games).
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
13. Aug 2018 ยท 01:39 UTC
@thepelranthean Thank you so much for your feedback! ๐Ÿ˜„ It means a lot! The camera size is based on the room you're in, so a big room will cause the camera to zoom out. Since small rooms were too easy I made the camera zoom in (causing your bullets to come back faster). But maybe I made it zoom in a bit too much... ๐Ÿ˜…. I'll adjust the camera for the next update!
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
13. Aug 2018 ยท 03:11 UTC
@ngupsilon @thepelranthean
I've turned down the screenshake and adjusted the camera sizes! Also, if you had any audio issues they should (?) now be fixed! ๐Ÿ˜„
Erendelous
13. Aug 2018 ยท 07:17 UTC
Wow, that game is totally amazing! Maybe there should be some hardcore soundtrack and camera shake should be turned down a little bit (in my opinion) but everything else is very nice! One of my favourite games for now at this Ludum Dare)
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
13. Aug 2018 ยท 07:25 UTC
@erendelous Thank you so much for the feedback! The soundtrack was one of the things I kinda made last minute, so I agree that there definitely should've been parts where the song gets more "hardcore". And I might turn down the screenshake again... but I'm not sure. Again, thanks so much! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Stillnotsure
13. Aug 2018 ยท 08:07 UTC
This is great man! The gun feels really powerful and the "clear" technique is satisfying to pull off just in time. It's a cool take on the theme too. The glitchy visuals won't be for everyone but I personally love them, super unique and you applied it to everything, not just the menu.

One criticism is about the timer combined with the locked doors. I think these two things COULD work together with a bit of tweaking but as the AI likes to hide or get stuck in corners sometimes I lost quite often just trying to find the 1 remaining thing to kill. Apart from that I really enjoyed it, probably the best I've played from the comp so far
Naemis
13. Aug 2018 ยท 08:11 UTC
As the title says... it is overWHELMING... fun game, a bit confusing to get the hang of but it kept my attention going so I'll give you that :D Nice little game you got here, good job!
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
13. Aug 2018 ยท 08:13 UTC
@stillnotsure I literally just updated the game to fix the way that the doors determined how many enemies you have left to kill ๐Ÿ˜‚. Are you playing version 1.3? If not, then feel free to try it out! I'm super glad you liked it! Here's some behind the scenes...
Originally I was going to make it so that you made money by killing enemies, and your combo would multiply the money you got from the enemies. You would then use that money to buy weapons and upgrades. Obviously the game had to be scaled back, so I implemented the timer system (which is why it can occasionally feel a bit off).
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
13. Aug 2018 ยท 08:17 UTC
@naemis Thanks for the feedback! ๐Ÿ˜„ I'm glad it was able to captivate you! The trick to getting far into the game is clearly the screen at appropriate times, and shooting more often than you think! ๐Ÿ™‚
Kaboosh
13. Aug 2018 ยท 08:18 UTC
I really like your take on the theme and i think it's really cool that you can dodge and pickup the bullets, the gun felt great aswell so great job!
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
13. Aug 2018 ยท 08:21 UTC
@kaboosh Thanks for the kind words! ๐Ÿ˜„
RavenFlame
13. Aug 2018 ยท 08:29 UTC
Total madness and panic. Great game, tricky to strike a balance between shooting and dodging.
Predominant
13. Aug 2018 ยท 08:37 UTC
The audio was super loud, had to play with sound off. Its very fun to try and avoid all the bad dudes and the bullets! Great work, and great game!
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
13. Aug 2018 ยท 08:38 UTC
@ravenflame Thanks for the feedback and nice words! ๐Ÿ˜„ I'm glad you found it tricky in a good way!
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
13. Aug 2018 ยท 08:40 UTC
@predominant Thanks for the feedback! If you don't mind me asking, which sound effect(s) specifically was too loud? (And thanks for the compliments! ๐Ÿ˜„)
MissAlpha
13. Aug 2018 ยท 14:50 UTC
interesting gameplay, fun and creative
mike_inPrinciple
13. Aug 2018 ยท 16:47 UTC
Enjoyed playing it for a while, however, I did have a lot of trouble understanding my own health. I couldn't track when I was going to die at all, so all deaths were surprisingly sudden for me, sometimes inexplicable, even.

Also, I think the camera shaking and lerping back all the time was excessive. It made me slightly nauseous.

Switching to full screen made my system go kaput. I lost one of the screens and had no idea how to convince Windows to give me it back. I had to reboot.


Lastly, I was not able to try out the controller? Not sure why, it simply wasn't recognised.

With all this said, I think it's a very good use of the theme. One of the best I've seen so far. Nice work.
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
13. Aug 2018 ยท 17:32 UTC
@missalpha Thanks for playing! I appreciate it! ๐Ÿ˜„

@mike-inprinciple Thank you so much for your feedback! The instructions say that you can die when you have no combo (enemies and bullets kill you), but it doesn't point out that explosions can instantly kill you (but you have to be really close). I have a multi-monitor setup as well and fullscreen seems to work for me... so I'm not quite sure. The controller also works for me, but I think I have an idea of what the problem could've been. The controller only works if it's plugged in as "player 1", and to select things in the menu you have to use the right trigger. Again, thank you so much for the comment!
mike_inPrinciple
13. Aug 2018 ยท 17:42 UTC
@ethan-nachreiner I do have 4 plugged in, and I made sure I sued slot 1. I tried all 4, to no avail. I tried enabling the "Controller" option as well, and it locked my mouse, but not sure what happened then. Controllers still unresponsive. As for the graphics issue, I have an interesting setup, where one of my screens is an old 32 inch HD ready TV. It does cause problems even with AAA games, sometimes, but the issue I experienced with your game was pretty... drastic. :)
Allan Kong
13. Aug 2018 ยท 17:55 UTC
This game reminds me so much of hotline Miami, The shooting is so juicy and winning each level feels so satisfying.
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
13. Aug 2018 ยท 18:04 UTC
@mike-inprinciple Thanks for getting back to me! My setup's a bit weird too... they're both at drastically different resolutions. But I haven't tried playing it on a TV, so I'm not sure. But thank you so much for describing the situation with the controllers! I've found an issue with the way I programmed it (it worked when I was testing it, I swear ๐Ÿ˜…). I'll be sure to fix it as soon as I can!
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
13. Aug 2018 ยท 18:05 UTC
@allan-kong Thanks for the comment! I appreciate it! ๐Ÿ˜„
BigBossErndog
13. Aug 2018 ยท 18:17 UTC
At first I was like wow, is this hotline miami? XD But nice game. The controls were clean, the theme is well implemented. The more you shoot the more projectiles there are on screen, hence running out of space. I feel like the visual effects, whilst pretty, were quite overdone and this lowered my enjoyment of the game. I really like the swlodown feature as a projectile approaches.
BigBossErndog
13. Aug 2018 ยท 18:17 UTC
Edit: This was a double post, sorry XD
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
13. Aug 2018 ยท 18:36 UTC
@bigbosserndog Thank you so much for the feedback! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ I'm just about to release v1.4, which will let you reduce the screen shake (and some other effects)! Hopefully that will improve your experience! ๐Ÿ™‚
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
13. Aug 2018 ยท 18:44 UTC
@mike-inprinciple @bigbosserndog @predominant
I've added the option for players to reduce the screen shake, and tried rebalancing the audio! Hopefully this will make the game more bearable if you had nausea inducing issues before (sorry ๐Ÿ˜…).
GuardHei
14. Aug 2018 ยท 07:16 UTC
@ethan-nachreiner v1.2 mac version cannot work. (my os is 10.12)
Mister_Kweh
14. Aug 2018 ยท 08:03 UTC
Loved the game! I kept thinking I was dying for no reason until I noticed the timer. Good Job!
Linky439
14. Aug 2018 ยท 12:28 UTC
Is that what chaos look like? x)

Great game! A bit hard to understand what's going on at some points, but overall, it's fun! And god damn it, what a slaughter! xD

I don't know if you fix that since the original LD version, but there were a lot of instances when no sound effects were played during the mayhem. Is it due to the bullet-time effect?

Anyway, great job on this game, it looks great (but definitively not suited for epileptics), controls well enough (even if as a QWERTY keyboard user, WASD ain't really easy to use :p) and is overall fun. Congrats!
Jupiter_Hadley
14. Aug 2018 ยท 16:39 UTC
Interesting game! I included it in my compilation video series of the Ludum Dare 42 compilation video series, if youโ€™d like to take a look. :) https://youtu.be/Bq9IqSUYX8Y
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
14. Aug 2018 ยท 19:38 UTC
@jupiter-hadley Thank you so much for including my game in your video! Sorry if the instructions were a bit confusing! ๐Ÿ˜„

@linky439 Thanks for playing! The audio issues are due to me messing up the audio priorities, which I fixed in version 1.2 (I think). There's a COMPO version available to download, which has all the bug fixes and none of the "new content". ๐Ÿ™‚

@mister-kweh Thanks for playing! Yeah, I should probably make the time mechanics a bit more obvious. ๐Ÿ™‚

@guardhei I just tested it, and you're right (my bad)! I'll be sure you make an updated version of the Mac version soon! ๐Ÿ˜„
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
14. Aug 2018 ยท 20:29 UTC
I've made an updated version of the game (2.4) that includes a special message that appears on the first floor (reminds players to press space to add more time)! I added this because of the video @jupiter-hadley made, and I hope this improves the overall user experience! ๐Ÿ˜„
AwiX
15. Aug 2018 ยท 07:57 UTC
A good game idea, the music should be improved. The graphics are good.
Try our game too, maybe you'll like it)
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
15. Aug 2018 ยท 08:03 UTC
@awix Thanks so much for the feedback! ๐Ÿ˜„ Yeah... the music was a bit of a last minute kinda thing (you can check out the timelapse and see ๐Ÿ˜…). I'll be sure to check out your game!
velvetlobster
16. Aug 2018 ยท 06:04 UTC
Some adjustments in the camera and intensity could make this a nice intense game experience
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
16. Aug 2018 ยท 20:19 UTC
@velvetlobster Thank you so much for the feedback! ๐Ÿ˜„
The game has an option in the menu to lower the amount of "shake" (screen shake and camera shake), if you haven't tried setting the shake to low then that might improve the experience! ๐Ÿ™‚ Thanks for playing my game!
FlashViper
17. Aug 2018 ยท 16:11 UTC
I felt like I could just spam bullets to solve most of the game's problems. Granted, I only made it to the second level... Maybe you could make enemies more visible?
๐ŸŽค Ethan Nachreiner
18. Aug 2018 ยท 22:04 UTC
@flashviper Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, spamming bullets is definitely an extremely powerful strategy. I focused on making your bullets the thing that stands out the most (because they're the primary obstacle, despite their small hitbox). Although I could make the blood darker for the next version. Again, thanks for the feedback! ๐Ÿ™‚