The Story of Potion the Great and Almighty by bonesinger
A visual novel created with Webstory Engine, since I'm really rusty on programming.
The story is full of nonsense, crass humor, silly quotes, gratuitous references and [b]30 endings[/b] or so.
You are a potion. A magic potion! And you discover that you don't just have to sit there waiting to be drunk, you can actually act yourself! Now, what exactly is a liquid inside a bottle to do? You tell it!
The story is full of nonsense, crass humor, silly quotes, gratuitous references and [b]30 endings[/b] or so.
You are a potion. A magic potion! And you discover that you don't just have to sit there waiting to be drunk, you can actually act yourself! Now, what exactly is a liquid inside a bottle to do? You tell it!
Your sense of absurd humour is good, but I think the writing could flow a little better (a little bit of proofreading helps a lot!). Having your characters on screen emote a bit more can also do wonders in making the story easier to follow and breathe a little more life into them.