{"author_link":"\/users\/outbreak","author_name":"outbreak","author_uid":"1004954","comments":[{"author_name":"incobalt","author_uid":"1001938","time":"2018-04-23T22:34:08Z","epoch":1524522848,"modified":1524522848,"text":"I couldn't play your game! None of the keyboard controls responded. I did manage to hear the music and start the game, but I got to the grid (after the instructions zoomed by too fast to read them) and then no amount of clicking or button pressing did anything.","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"Mathiouza","author_uid":"1002200","time":"2018-04-23T22:35:34Z","epoch":1524522934,"modified":1524522934,"text":"Soooo ... How can I say that ? ^^ I thought at the first time that the weapon on the ground was a wall, or an obstacle ^^' Maybe I am tired, but you should make it clearer I think ^^ And, badly, the gameplay is too poor to make the game interesting to play : just stand up in front of an enemy and shoot\/reload while anyone is dead. Also, the tutorial is skipped too quickly, I was just beginning to read the text that it desappears :\/ (it can be the gamejolt player which is buggy, it was already the case with an other game). So maybe I missed some points, and if it is the case, I am sorry.\n\nYou made a music though, and I really appreciate that ! A lot of jammer think that no music is ok, but no, that is not \"ok\" x))\n\nCool game (which can be improved, you know it), that fits the theme well :) Keep coding :) (and you made a stream, that is cool I think ^^)","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"fashionbatman","author_uid":"1002986","time":"2018-04-23T22:37:22Z","epoch":1524523042,"modified":1524523042,"text":"This is a good concept. I think this would benefit from being able to see the whole game area at once, so you could really do some turn based strategy. Great job though!","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"gonutz","author_uid":"1004280","time":"2018-04-23T22:42:09Z","epoch":1524523329,"modified":1524523329,"text":"The manual is only up for a second, no time to read it. Please change that, I would consider this not an issue to do after the jam, it really makes it hard to play the game well.\n\nAnother thing: why does it take so long after a turn until I can move again? You should not have to wait for everyone to take their turn, only the visible enemies should delay your own turn so you can see them act.\n\nAlso I was able to loot a kill that another player made, then I killed that player but moving onto that loot left the loot box intact. Should I not have picked it up?\n\nOverall quite a buggy entry it seems, I did not see my bullets after shooting, probably because I was in the direct neighbor cell. I did not know whether I shot at all and if I hit anything.\n\nThe music is good, a bit repitative, you could have made a longer song to loop.\n\nThe sound effects fit well. Shooting and healing sound like it :-)\n\nThe graphics are very minimal but they are enough to get across what is happening.\n\nAs you mention yourself, a health indicator would be helpful, as well as to know if my gun is loaded and how many bullets I have left.\n\nOverall an OK entry, do not let my mostly negative critique discourage you. You did a great job creating a game in 48 hours. That is a great accomplishment and you have my respect for that. Also cool that you streamed your game dev. Keep up the good work, I look forward to your next creations :-)","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"Derek Wilson","author_uid":"1052590","time":"2018-04-24T05:16:38Z","epoch":1524546998,"modified":1524546998,"text":"I really have to echo many of gonutz's comments.\nThe pace was pretty slow, for the first several moves I had no idea what I was doing. Im not sure if the timeout between moves is artificial or not but the wait time felt pretty long.\nLuckily I found a gun. Everyone around me seemed to be weaponless ;)\nI thought perhaps I would shot in the direction I was facing but I'm not sure that's how it worked.\nThe music loop could be a bit longer, I had to turn down my speakers.\nA cool concept and you got it done in time which are both things you should be proud of.","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"GameDevMumin","author_uid":"1012265","time":"2018-04-24T18:59:47Z","epoch":1524596387,"modified":1524596387,"text":"Interesting idea with range of view and posibility to increase it. I think AI turn should take less time :D I was confused at the begining but realised whats going on :D Music is a bit irritating but cool concept and you can develop it to something good with better grapics and explanation of rules :D ","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"dlowe","author_uid":"1001533","time":"2018-04-26T00:27:31Z","epoch":1524702451,"modified":1524702451,"text":"I won! Thanks for the game :)","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"theslate","author_uid":"1014750","time":"2018-04-26T01:31:04Z","epoch":1524706264,"modified":1524706264,"text":"I didn't see anything for like a minute. With the AI taking a long time, it was pretty boring. Then I died. Good job finishing it!","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"Hilvon","author_uid":"1009192","time":"2018-04-26T22:19:37Z","epoch":1524781177,"modified":1524781177,"text":"The vision range is challenging. And asymmetrical (left-right you can see 3 tiles away, but up-down only 2 tiles away). So it makes for a pretty frustrating when you move to a medback only to see it snatched by an enemy...\n\nAlso the ammo status could be telegraphed a tad better. Cause finding yourself bravely engaging the enemy only to realize that your weapon wasn't loaded... for quite some time now is also frustrating.\n\nAlnd finally - why can't I pick up excess guns? Even if I don't need the upgrade anymore - I want to deny the enemy from getting them. Cause it doesnt feel good to leave a shotgun behing only to be shot in the back with it two turn later...\n\nBut all this frustration... I guess that's just Battle Royale in a nutshell...","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"mrwillowb","author_uid":"1003052","time":"2018-04-27T16:15:55Z","epoch":1524845755,"modified":1524845755,"text":"Bit too easy nice game","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"nilstastic","author_uid":"1078774","time":"2018-04-27T18:14:22Z","epoch":1524852862,"modified":1524852862,"text":"A strategy game! love them, it's a bit hard to do strategic moves though, maybe if I would have seen the whole game area at once. Good job finishing the game!","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"riordan","author_uid":"1014364","time":"2018-04-27T21:22:37Z","epoch":1524864157,"modified":1524864157,"text":"The game showed that turn-based strategy games and battle royale could work, but it does need a little more tweaking. UI indicators and a sense of direction could help.\n\nThe concept is fine. If it'll receive more work, it's possible for this to turn out great.","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"JustinM","author_uid":"1009809","time":"2018-04-29T00:27:26Z","epoch":1524961646,"modified":1524961646,"text":"Fun game, biggest improvement I would like to see if you updated would be a larger camera view to help see whats going on overall. Other than that, it was fun :)","likes":1,"format":"md"}],"format":"md","images":["ld41\/76379-c604fa27e9ffd283a3764be7cf1c0ce6.jpg"],"links":[{"url":"https:\/\/gamejolt.com\/games\/myturnbr\/335363","text":"HTML5 (web)"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"44645","g_author":"1004954","g_event":"LD41","g_eventkey":"72","g_subevent":"COMPO","g_urlkey":"227186","g_title":"MyTurn BR","g_status":"USEAR3","g_place":"683","g_commentcount":"13","g_site2_node_id":"76379","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":{"n_key":"76379","n_urlkey":"227186","n_parent":"73256","n_path":"\/events\/ludum-dare\/41\/myturn-br","n_slug":"myturn-br","n_type":"item","n_subtype":"game","n_subsubtype":"compo","n_author":"4954","n_created":"1523352509","n_modified":"1524597413","n_version":"273136","n_status":"COMMIT"},"node":{"id":76379,"parent":73256,"superparent":9,"author":4954,"type":"item","subtype":"game","subsubtype":"compo","published":"2018-04-23T01:39:59Z","created":"2018-04-10T09:28:29Z","modified":"2018-04-24T19:16:53Z","version":273136,"slug":"myturn-br","name":"MyTurn BR","body":"![ldscreen2.jpg](\/\/\/raw\/a53\/1\/z\/12132.jpg)\n\nMy game is called MyTurn BR. \n\nIt is a 2D, Single Player, Turn-Base, Battle Royale game.\n\nIt was a bit of an ambitious project. but i had a blast making it. I really hope you all enjoy it! I Co-Streamed the whole thing with my buddy @Angelbait on mixer (mixer.com\/Outbreak). Please go check his game as well! \n\n![ldscreen4.jpg](\/\/\/raw\/a53\/1\/z\/12136.jpg)\n\n__--RANDOM THINGS--__\n\n-- Improvements That Can Be Made--\n- Indicator to show that you have you a med pack\n- Indicator that you need to reload\n- Have the shooting characters face their targets when shooting\n- Have the characters face the direction they are moving\n- Better Music! The Menu and In-Game music are both irritating (Sorry) :\/\n- Better Graphics! #NeedArtist\n\n--BUGS--\n- Walls are not showing up and you can go off map :(\n- When you use a med pack, you will get full health, however the health text doesn't update until you get hit :(\n\n--Features That I Want To Add--\n- A Zone that closes in on the map\n- When less than 5 players, increase the size of font of the alive players\n- When 1v1 have the music pick up a bit\n\n-- Things I have added since the jam ended (bugs and visual improvements for the player) --\n- Tutorial screen is now 8 seconds. Up from 2.\n- Pickup sounds for pistol and rifle are now working as they were not before\n- Health text added to show you your health\n- Added Text to let the player know it is the AI's turn\n- Increased the Camera field of view ever so slightly for both regular and scoped\n\n__--OBJECTIVE--__\n\nBe the last man standing! Get that Winner Winner Victory Royale!\n\n![ldscreen1.jpg](\/\/\/raw\/a53\/1\/z\/12131.jpg) \n\n__--CONTROLS--__\n\nControls are fairly simple!\nWhen it is your turn, you can click on one of the 4 options. Move, Shoot, Reload, Heal.\n\nMove - You will be able to move using WASD. (1 block)\n\nShoot -  You will shoot the closest target (if you have a gun). Accuracy is affected by distance. There is a diagram in the tutorial before the game starts.\n\nReload - You will need to reload your weapon before firing it again.\n\nHeal - Will heal you for full health. Only if you have a med pack.\n\n__--PICKUPS--__\n\nPistol - Short range. 2 Damage\n\nRifle - Longer range. 3 Damage\n\nMed Pack - Heal the player to full health.\n\nBinoculars - Increases the field of view.\n\n__--WEAPON DAMAGE AND ACCURACY--__\n\nAccuracy depends on how far you are from the target.\n\n![accuracy.jpg](\/\/\/raw\/a53\/1\/z\/13a7d.jpg)\n\n\n![ldscreen3.jpg](\/\/\/raw\/a53\/1\/z\/12134.jpg) \n\n","meta":{"author":[4954],"cover":"\/\/\/content\/a53\/1\/z\/1103b.jpg","link-02":"https:\/\/gamejolt.com\/games\/myturnbr\/335363","link-02-tag":"42336"},"path":"\/events\/ludum-dare\/41\/myturn-br","parents":[1,5,9,73256],"love":0,"notes":13,"notes-timestamp":"2018-04-29T00:27:26Z","grade":{"grade-01":22,"grade-02":22,"grade-03":22,"grade-04":22,"grade-05":22,"grade-06":22,"grade-07":19,"grade-08":18},"magic":{"cool":112.28844843604,"feedback":7,"given":25.375,"grade":21.125,"grade-01-average":2.475,"grade-01-result":683,"grade-02-average":2.15,"grade-02-result":688,"grade-03-average":2.85,"grade-03-result":583,"grade-04-average":3.425,"grade-04-result":422,"grade-05-average":2,"grade-05-result":682,"grade-06-average":1.725,"grade-06-result":511,"grade-07-average":1.559,"grade-07-result":564,"grade-08-average":1.844,"grade-08-result":642,"smart":16.912955027467}},"text":"![ldscreen2.jpg](\/\/\/raw\/a53\/1\/z\/12132.jpg)\n\nMy game is called MyTurn BR. \n\nIt is a 2D, Single Player, Turn-Base, Battle Royale game.\n\nIt was a bit of an ambitious project. but i had a blast making it. I really hope you all enjoy it! I Co-Streamed the whole thing with my buddy @Angelbait on mixer (mixer.com\/Outbreak). Please go check his game as well! \n\n![ldscreen4.jpg](\/\/\/raw\/a53\/1\/z\/12136.jpg)\n\n__--RANDOM THINGS--__\n\n-- Improvements That Can Be Made--\n- Indicator to show that you have you a med pack\n- Indicator that you need to reload\n- Have the shooting characters face their targets when shooting\n- Have the characters face the direction they are moving\n- Better Music! The Menu and In-Game music are both irritating (Sorry) :\/\n- Better Graphics! #NeedArtist\n\n--BUGS--\n- Walls are not showing up and you can go off map :(\n- When you use a med pack, you will get full health, however the health text doesn't update until you get hit :(\n\n--Features That I Want To Add--\n- A Zone that closes in on the map\n- When less than 5 players, increase the size of font of the alive players\n- When 1v1 have the music pick up a bit\n\n-- Things I have added since the jam ended (bugs and visual improvements for the player) --\n- Tutorial screen is now 8 seconds. Up from 2.\n- Pickup sounds for pistol and rifle are now working as they were not before\n- Health text added to show you your health\n- Added Text to let the player know it is the AI's turn\n- Increased the Camera field of view ever so slightly for both regular and scoped\n\n__--OBJECTIVE--__\n\nBe the last man standing! Get that Winner Winner Victory Royale!\n\n![ldscreen1.jpg](\/\/\/raw\/a53\/1\/z\/12131.jpg) \n\n__--CONTROLS--__\n\nControls are fairly simple!\nWhen it is your turn, you can click on one of the 4 options. Move, Shoot, Reload, Heal.\n\nMove - You will be able to move using WASD. (1 block)\n\nShoot -  You will shoot the closest target (if you have a gun). Accuracy is affected by distance. There is a diagram in the tutorial before the game starts.\n\nReload - You will need to reload your weapon before firing it again.\n\nHeal - Will heal you for full health. Only if you have a med pack.\n\n__--PICKUPS--__\n\nPistol - Short range. 2 Damage\n\nRifle - Longer range. 3 Damage\n\nMed Pack - Heal the player to full health.\n\nBinoculars - Increases the field of view.\n\n__--WEAPON DAMAGE AND ACCURACY--__\n\nAccuracy depends on how far you are from the target.\n\n![accuracy.jpg](\/\/\/raw\/a53\/1\/z\/13a7d.jpg)\n\n\n![ldscreen3.jpg](\/\/\/raw\/a53\/1\/z\/12134.jpg) \n\n","title":"MyTurn BR"}