move on by erbridge

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move on takes place in the same location over many, many years. You see it all: birth, life, love, death, in tiny fragments that you leaf through like a photo album. Some are sad. Some are short. Some are painful.
[Content Warning: suicide, violence, arson]
Made by
Kate Gray (words)
Felix Laurie von Massenbach (code)
Beck Michalak (art)
| Original URL | https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/38/move-on |
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| Given | 13🗳️ | 0🗨️ |
Take in consideration that there's an issue with sliding the scrollbar in some areas, as a single click, which is needed to move it up or down, advances the story thus increasing the number of fragments required to read at a single time. It can quickly become too cumbersome to navigate the screen, even though sentences stop appearing after their limit is out.
@eveningwayard: It's nearly 10k words that Kate wrote in half of Saturday (I still don't understand how). And thanks for the feedback about the scrolling. I changed the way it worked last minute and it could have done with a bit more rigour.