Excessive by moonlightbomber

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made by moonlightbomber for LD 40 (COMPO)

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A short story about a certain excess of feelings, written with Microsoft QBASIC (and thus can be ported to other systems that support BASIC with little to no modifications to the code).

To run on modern systems, you can run the file (LD40NTRY.BAS) in QBASIC via DOSBox or use any modern version of BASIC such as FreeBASIC.

Ratings

Overall 647th 2.579⭐ 40🧑‍⚖️
Fun 658th 2.276⭐ 40🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 537th 2.731⭐ 41🧑‍⚖️
Theme 621th 2.645⭐ 40🧑‍⚖️
Mood 403th 2.947⭐ 40🧑‍⚖️
Given 200🗳️ 18🗨️

Feedback

Simone
05. Dec 2017 · 08:51 UTC
Publishing on a more user-friendly platform would have been super usefull... I can't install DOSbox in the computer I use at my work :(
CaptainDreamcast
05. Dec 2017 · 09:37 UTC
After I was superproud that I had DosBox to play it, I failed to make Basic work with it and had to download QB64 anyway.

So yeah, it works. As for the story, it was an interesting introspective piece. The ending surprised me. I guess it's something a lot of people can relate to.
Raiponz
05. Dec 2017 · 09:59 UTC
I finaly succeed to run the game with QB64. The story is interesting but quite short.
WoooWooo
06. Dec 2017 · 00:33 UTC
Used QB64 as well. The story seems very heartfelt. Not really any gameplay though.
NicBallinger
06. Dec 2017 · 02:21 UTC
A well writen piece; though a link to a good qbasic compiler would have smoothed installation. It's innovative, but I would have like to have seen it packaged with something like js-dos.
botreats
06. Dec 2017 · 02:25 UTC
After some setup woes, I gave it a shot. It was interesting, but didn't really hold me. Cool choice on using QBASIC
Jimbly
06. Dec 2017 · 03:20 UTC
Though getting a .BAS file to run is fun for some of us, you might want to put up a download bundled with DOSBox so people can just download and run it (like I did for [my entry a few Jams ago](http://ludumdare.com/compo/ludum-dare-36/?action=preview&uid=55346) when the theme was... Ancient Technology ;). Grab that .zip and replace the .bat file and you can probably have something workable in a few moments.
red-fan-games
06. Dec 2017 · 03:29 UTC
More of a story than a game. I still found it enjoyable.
I reccomend using a tool like this to make your game more acessable:
https://www.codeproject.com/articles/25069/jsbasic-a-basic-to-javascript-compiler
Steve Johnson
06. Dec 2017 · 05:00 UTC
Hello fellow more-story-than-game maker! I also made some interactive fiction. Downloading your game now to see if I can get it running on my Mac.
Steve Johnson
06. Dec 2017 · 05:45 UTC
Unfortunately I couldn't get QB64 to run on my Mac.
cogcomp
06. Dec 2017 · 06:27 UTC
QB64 was a nice tip. Thanks @captaindreamcast ! I'll leave a link here: http://www.qb64.net/
Not much of an actual interactive game going on here. But your story telling skills are 10x better than mine!
06. Dec 2017 · 08:36 UTC
I recommend that you add additional download bundles that include any other programs necessary to run this.
erd0s
06. Dec 2017 · 12:19 UTC
Oh my god i finally got qbasic to run and got a wave of flashbacks! I'm curious what made you choose it? Interesting story but like the other guys said not much choice
lawzy93
07. Dec 2017 · 10:55 UTC
So after all the fiddling to get qbasic back up and running, it's just a story....

I could have just read the .BAS and been done with it :(
Grentacular
07. Dec 2017 · 13:47 UTC
I was a little disappointed to find that the time it took for me to actually get the thing running was shorter than the time it took to actually run through the story. I also had hoped for some interaction beyond pressing any key to continue. It was a pretty decent story, though, for its length.
kerneltt
07. Dec 2017 · 18:12 UTC
curious project, but the running requirements makes it difficult to start
Flaterectomy
10. Dec 2017 · 17:13 UTC
Having read @lawzy93's comment, I simply put the .BAS file in Notepad++ and read the story there. Is it a game? There wasn't much for me to *do* except read. The story is relatable, I think most people have had similar experiences. I wasn't a fan of the line "long observant glance" as a glance is by definition not long. The theme applies well enough though.
zaratustra
10. Dec 2017 · 23:15 UTC
A small game in more ways than one.
IllaBom
12. Dec 2017 · 01:51 UTC
Nice game you have here. SUPER WELL DONE!

Come check out my game if you like!
https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/40/virus-detected
Yetman
21. Dec 2017 · 06:21 UTC
I like the story, IMO the shorter the story, the better as long as it relays the message. I was excited to play a game written for retro devices. However, I was hoping for some interaction, I kept hoping for any kind of choice but... It just didn't happen :(

Anyway, nice story. I think a few branches in the story will make it more fun but it was good work though.