Revelations by Vhillain

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made by Vhillain for MINI42 (-)
The world is falling apart... The gates of Heaven and hell are open. It feels like the end.

An experiment in "context" in three short acts.

Created in Twine.

P.S. There is a secret "alternate" ending.

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🎤 Vhillain
27. May 2013 · 16:36 UTC
God, this was really hard to write.

Hit way too close to home.

Didn't even realize it at the time, got caught up in the moment and it poured out. The entire thing crystallized in a veritable flash, birthed out of whole cloth.

Good or bad, it's out of me now. Feel tired.

I'll probably do something lighter in tone next.
Martin_Monosys
01. Jun 2013 · 16:25 UTC
Interestung story, good writing... It's enjoyable to play, but I understand why you want to do something lighter next.