It took me a couple levels to realize you had to collect two white squares to finish it. If they were more visually distinct or the level structure changed it might be more obvious.

Pretty good, could be a bit faster paced comfortably. Pretty unique though.

hm, when i click the Web-Link the game (i think) starts, no explaination, no controls given, no hints at all... and nothing happens when press the 'usual' mouse or keyboard buttons... except some flickering square and a water counter getting low

Doesn't work.

It took me a while to actually get things working -- when I pressed the "Web" link, nothing seemed to happen, but eventually the white square started responding.

Some instructions or description of the game would be very useful as, having played it, I'm still not sure how it works. The "breath" counter seemed to be stuck at 40 almost permanently, and I couldn't work out what the water figure was supposed to represent.

The controls were too sensitive, and I kept getting stuck at corners. In my opinion, tile-based movement would be better.