The world of Marceline by Pitoum
** I'm french. Not an excuse but a fact. I will correct ALL THE MISTAKES after the vote. Sorry. **
** DO NOT USE "WEB (IMPROVED)" TO RATE THE GAME, THE ORIGINAL VERSION IS "WEB". **
Not really finished, but I had to submit something this time. For the 1000 :)
There isn't really an ending right now. Doesn't work :( Maybe after the vote ?
This story is inspired by the life of Marceline Loridan-Ivens. An awsome woman.
LEFT/RIGHT : Move
UP : Look at
LETTERS : Answer the questions
Hope you'll enjoy it a bit.
*****
Edit : I'd added the source, but it's an improved version (I forget to keep an old version of it.)
** DO NOT USE "WEB (IMPROVED)" TO RATE THE GAME, THE ORIGINAL VERSION IS "WEB". **
Not really finished, but I had to submit something this time. For the 1000 :)
There isn't really an ending right now. Doesn't work :( Maybe after the vote ?
This story is inspired by the life of Marceline Loridan-Ivens. An awsome woman.
LEFT/RIGHT : Move
UP : Look at
LETTERS : Answer the questions
Hope you'll enjoy it a bit.
*****
Edit : I'd added the source, but it's an improved version (I forget to keep an old version of it.)
Ratings
| Coolness | 47% | 670 |
| Overall | 3.08 | 373 |
| Audio | 2.00 | 599 |
| Fun | 2.00 | 797 |
| Graphics | 3.24 | 273 |
| Humor | 1.93 | 586 |
| Innovation | 3.53 | 153 |
| Mood | 3.89 | 19 |
| Theme | 3.05 | 428 |
The game is weird (in my mind, it means : good). You found a great way to tell a story. Of course, it lacks some polish but I was genuinely happy to play ot
Just a bit experimental like i love.
I'm working right now to improve it (and correct all the mistakes :$).
Unusual story for a game coupled with innovative story telling makes this game a very refreshing experience.
Thanks for that, good job there.
It was hard to see if I answered right or wrong (but is there right or wrong answer really here ?), but I tried again to test different answers: we strongly feel the mood of the character, that's very well done.
I'm currently working on an improved version of the game (I will release it on Kongregate I think).
It's WIP here : http://serv003.pitoum.net/worldofmarceline/
@ilo : Yeah no fun I give you that :)
@racarate : I didn't have the time to add music. Now there is but i'm not sure it's a good thing :)
@Jack : Hope you'll like the new stuff !
@Fred : Not really a good way right now. It'll be a few different endings though.
It didn't take long for that to pass. I'd love to see you do a little more with this. It's already a very deep and moving experience, a little polish would make it powerful indeed.
I like the approach to tell the story. I'm not sure whether you can wake up though.