I tried a point and click of a GameJam once. The take a lot longer than you expect.

Nice attempt though and I loved the comic book style text boxes. Also dat pepper mmmmmmmmmm.

Quite humorous. On Windows 8 backgrounds and sound did not load, not sure why. I am rating graphics based on the screenshots. The game itself is very short and doesn't really seem to have much gameplay/choice points. I was also confused why the narrative jumped around at times. For instance, when calling the friend at the hotel the game seemed to jump ahead to the alley with the pepper. Still, like I said a humorous game which could have a lot of appear to children.

As said, the comic book style is nice, and being an onion with a fedora pleased me, too bad you couldn't do more.

very very short, if it actually was the end where it said to be continued... great storytelling and graphisc tho.

Could be fun if it were longer. Sometimes confusing to follow the dialogue and ends abruptly. Nice graphics and setting.

I would've liked it if there was an entire story. I really like the interactive story type of game

a bit short but still satisfying :D

This certainly had style. I didn't expect it, but it was good. Just much too much too short. Maybe with more practice a finished tale in the next LD?