{"author_link":"\/author\/bobo72a\/","author_name":"bobo72a","author_uid":"22834","comments":[{"author_name":"mikelovesrobots3","author_uid":"5908","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 3:45am","epoch":1367206800,"text":"Pretty cool story.  Serving the html as a google document seemed weird.  Maybe you could throw it up on dropbox instead?"},{"author_name":"paulopn","author_uid":"21622","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 4:03am","epoch":1367207880,"text":"Hey, nice story writing!\r<br\/>Got me really interested in the story."},{"author_name":"Jonapulse","author_uid":"20270","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 4:31am","epoch":1367209560,"text":"Yo, this sent me to a the html code rather than the game (I imagine you want it to send you to a game.)  Check out this article: https:\/\/www.scirra.com\/tutorials\/74\/publishing-and-promoting-your-construct-2-game.  I used it to get google drive to host my flash game (and actually play the game when you visited the link)."},{"author_name":"voxel","author_uid":"1789","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 5:05am","epoch":1367211600,"text":"Would like to see a longer version of this. Also see if you can figure out a way of hosting this so we dont have to download it :) you'll get a lot more plays that way"},{"author_name":"gabehollombe","author_uid":"12419","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 5:06am","epoch":1367211660,"text":"Well, I wasn't expecting to play a game with some violent descriptions, but yeah, hey, nice job on setting the mood.  Although I didn't feel compelled to keep playing after I got murdered down the hall."},{"author_name":"bobo72a","author_uid":"22834","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 5:09am","epoch":1367211840,"text":"Thanks for all the feedback everyone. I got my friend to upload the latest version to his web server, so now it's available to play immediately :)"},{"author_name":"baldwinthree","author_uid":"11948","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 5:10am","epoch":1367211900,"text":"Seemed to be written in a noir-esque style. This was actually my first Twine game, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. Shame it's incomplete!"},{"author_name":"namuol","author_uid":"12236","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 5:16am","epoch":1367212260,"text":"Nice potato cameo."},{"author_name":"namuol","author_uid":"12236","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 5:22am","epoch":1367212620,"text":"Lots of potential, here. Please finish it!"},{"author_name":"nseward","author_uid":"15218","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 6:05am","epoch":1367215200,"text":"Nice story.  I wish the rewind worked for me."},{"author_name":"sparkleswirl","author_uid":"22944","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 6:23am","epoch":1367216280,"text":"To be continued?!!!! Noooooo!"},{"author_name":"svenardo","author_uid":"19180","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 6:47am","epoch":1367217720,"text":"Nice. Always fun to play these fish out the water games. Should definitely flesh it out and make it longer!"},{"author_name":"Sestren","author_uid":"10343","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 12:13pm","epoch":1367237280,"text":"Reminds me a little bit of how Dark City starts out. I'm with everyone else here, it should be longer."},{"author_name":"DustyStylus","author_uid":"15902","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 5:41pm","epoch":1367256960,"text":"Hehehe, I had DOSBOX and even downloaded CWSDPMI to try this out. It is minimalist to the max! Well done. :D"},{"author_name":"DustyStylus","author_uid":"15902","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 5:43pm","epoch":1367257080,"text":"Argh, sorry, I posted in the wrong page!! Have fixed the score."},{"author_name":"Alex Camilleri","author_uid":"3732","time":"Apr 30, 2013 @ 8:34pm","epoch":1367353740,"text":"Kept me busy for a bit, but after a while I got a bit bored. I like how most of it is very concise. The intro was nice, but it didn't really manage to grab me."},{"author_name":"protensity","author_uid":"7949","time":"May 1, 2013 @ 9:59pm","epoch":1367445240,"text":"I liked it - wish it was longer and had a real ending."},{"author_name":"savethejets1","author_uid":"15315","time":"May 4, 2013 @ 4:42am","epoch":1367642220,"text":"To be continued?!!! NOOOO"},{"author_name":"Christina Nordlander","author_uid":"20504","time":"May 7, 2013 @ 10:30pm","epoch":1367965500,"text":"I enjoyed this. You've done a pretty good job on the film noir murder mystery ambience. Reminded me a bit of the old NES game &quot;D&eacute;j&agrave; Vu&quot;. The unusual writing style works pretty well. The story isn't hugely original, but you've created a good sense of horror. In game terms, this is solid Twine work.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Nice way to bring in potatoes, too.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>I must admit I was a bit disappointed to find that\r<br\/>\r<br\/>\r<br\/>SPOILERS\r<br\/>\r<br\/>... I got a &quot;to be continued&quot; message the moment the story seemed to be going somewhere.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>END SPOILERS\r<br\/>\r<br\/>\r<br\/>But that just testifies to the story sucking me in. Nice interactive story."},{"author_name":"Christina Nordlander","author_uid":"20504","time":"May 7, 2013 @ 10:31pm","epoch":1367965560,"text":"&quot;Deja Vu&quot;, even. Dang messageboard not allowing accents..."},{"author_name":"filtoid","author_uid":"17606","time":"May 17, 2013 @ 11:46am","epoch":1368790860,"text":"Nice - I died p quickly but went back to play again - I like it. :)"}],"images":["ld26\/22834-4f7d2c1536b324118ffb383ce7718d12.jpg"],"links":[{"url":"http:\/\/vgdevclub.org\/LD26\/KT\/ld26.html","text":"Web"},{"url":"https:\/\/docs.google.com\/file\/d\/0B5WeKfJt_EOwenMzVDZoZW80QWs\/edit?usp=sharing","text":"Source"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"27271","g_author":"22834","g_event":"LD26","g_eventkey":"16","g_subevent":"COMPO","g_urlkey":"27301","g_title":"Killing Time","g_status":"UCHK1","g_place":"967","g_commentcount":"21","g_site2_node_id":"0","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":[],"node":null,"orig_images":["http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/233892\/22834-shot0.jpg-eq-900-500.jpg"],"text":"Made in Twine, Killing Time is a minimalist story game about a series of murders plaguing El Paso Texas in 1957.\r\n\r\nNow available on a web server!<\/p>","title":"Killing Time"}