Burden by wilcort
A short game about a traumatized man. Made with Game Maker 8.1 Standard.
Ratings
| Coolness | 26% | 1775 |
| Overall | 2.58 | 1120 |
| Audio | 2.35 | 761 |
| Fun | 2.12 | 1206 |
| Graphics | 3.05 | 540 |
| Innovation | 2.44 | 1014 |
| Mood | 3.39 | 190 |
| Theme | 2.11 | 1341 |
- as has been mentioned, collision problems ! i mean it's not hugely important as you seem to be trying more to tell a story through a game than make an really fun to play game but still.
- the art is pretty neat, but for some reason I felt like the car sprite was a little out of place. maybe make it smaller or change its palette a little ?
- not a huge fan of the way the dialogues are presented. not only could the font be smaller but perhaps more importantly it should be clearer who's talking.
- finally, I'm not sure I really understood what happened to the character. maybe that's just me, but I think you should work on storytelling a little.
at any rate, it's still a nice effort, but there are a lot of things you could work on to improve !