{"author_link":"\/author\/robotparking\/","author_name":"RobotParking","author_uid":"26005","comments":[{"author_name":"gikdew","author_uid":"18806","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 3:11pm","epoch":1377529560,"text":"really nice!"},{"author_name":"irl","author_uid":"8784","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 3:14pm","epoch":1377529740,"text":"Interesting but awful colour scheme that hurt my eyes. Couldn't get very far so not sure how well it fit with the theme. Good to see something that's not your typical game."},{"author_name":"RobotParking","author_uid":"26005","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 6:54pm","epoch":1377542940,"text":"Thanks!"},{"author_name":"chrisamaphone","author_uid":"2634","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 9:19pm","epoch":1377551640,"text":"i played this while hungry.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>welp."},{"author_name":"Fabien Por\u00e9e","author_uid":"20926","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 9:57pm","epoch":1377553920,"text":"The colours aren't awful they are beautiful."},{"author_name":"wally2069","author_uid":"5461","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 10:00pm","epoch":1377554100,"text":"Oh dear, these color choices are difficult to read text"},{"author_name":"Croze","author_uid":"24715","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 10:02pm","epoch":1377554220,"text":"Didn't really understand the game..."},{"author_name":"Feysoura","author_uid":"25882","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 10:09pm","epoch":1377554640,"text":"what am i playing?\r<br\/>awesome\/5"},{"author_name":"Latcarf","author_uid":"19457","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 10:10pm","epoch":1377554700,"text":"I have no idea what's going on with this game."},{"author_name":"Liz England","author_uid":"22429","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 5:39am","epoch":1377581640,"text":"I dig it.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>It took me a few minutes to kind of get into the swing of your writing style - it's sharp and abrasive and hyper. Pretty awesome."},{"author_name":"withoutpillow","author_uid":"27525","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 9:27am","epoch":1377595320,"text":"what a strange world you've created. i really had no idea what was happening in the beginning but as i continued playing i got into the whole atmosphere your writing has. the colours are distracting, and that fits very well with the rest of the game."},{"author_name":"Marcellus","author_uid":"26515","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 12:43pm","epoch":1377607080,"text":"I..."},{"author_name":"doonay21","author_uid":"18952","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 12:52pm","epoch":1377607620,"text":"Interesting idea. My eyes hurts a little bit (cause of colors), but I can handle it ;)"},{"author_name":"Pickens Inc.","author_uid":"25346","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 1:00pm","epoch":1377608100,"text":"Ah confused! :)"},{"author_name":"Tainted_Code","author_uid":"5752","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 1:05pm","epoch":1377608400,"text":"Haha that's awesome, but the colours, ouch D:"},{"author_name":"Laelien","author_uid":"25981","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 1:10pm","epoch":1377608700,"text":"That...was... WEIRD. Yet awesome. Yet weird. Yet awesome."},{"author_name":"Nizan","author_uid":"5374","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 1:19pm","epoch":1377609240,"text":"I don't know what-\r<br\/>It's just that-\r<br\/>What is this I don't even-\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Everything about this is wrong... but in such a right way. The colours are awful... but are a perfect choice for this piece of poetry.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Your writing is immense. Once you push through the first impressions it really, really grips you something fierce."},{"author_name":"Clodial","author_uid":"17897","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 1:22pm","epoch":1377609420,"text":"Omg, that hurt my eyes but, in a strikingly sensible way. Like, the story could only be displayed with painful colors. It was like I was seeing things. If the game was in other colors, I don't think I would have felt as weird out of it. Nice!"},{"author_name":"dumasflo","author_uid":"19626","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 1:27pm","epoch":1377609720,"text":"Nice but, why that pink color ? XD"},{"author_name":"elementz123","author_uid":"25641","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 1:30pm","epoch":1377609900,"text":"Some lines were kinda funny, but like others had said, I have no idea whats going on."},{"author_name":"autlos","author_uid":"17768","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 1:33pm","epoch":1377610080,"text":"That colors hurt my eyes. Interesting idea, I laughed ^^."},{"author_name":"RobotParking","author_uid":"26005","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 1:48pm","epoch":1377610980,"text":"Thanks for the kind words, everyone!"},{"author_name":"Subi","author_uid":"18679","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 1:49pm","epoch":1377611040,"text":"That pink meant I could only last about five minutes.  Nice writing though!"},{"author_name":"Dry Tree","author_uid":"5357","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 1:52pm","epoch":1377611220,"text":"Interesting :)"},{"author_name":"Aurel300","author_uid":"1645","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 1:54pm","epoch":1377611340,"text":"Well that was . . ."},{"author_name":"DoubleS","author_uid":"27170","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 3:55pm","epoch":1377618600,"text":"Hurt my eyes with the colours. Confused how this fits with the theme"},{"author_name":"Diogo Muller","author_uid":"23705","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 4:49pm","epoch":1377621840,"text":"Yeah, the colors made this lose some points, for me. Interessing, anyway."},{"author_name":"Sergey Mohov","author_uid":"9963","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 5:33pm","epoch":1377624480,"text":"Some really good writing, and I like the color scheme a lot, don't listen to them :P"},{"author_name":"Jimanzium","author_uid":"24428","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 5:34pm","epoch":1377624540,"text":"Why the bright pink, why?"},{"author_name":"esayitch","author_uid":"16000","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 5:40pm","epoch":1377624900,"text":"This thing is genius on a literary level... screw video game jam this is progressive fiction (is that a thing? it ought to be) jam... color scheme is brilliant, story is brilliant, interpretation of the theme (Time? What does time have to do with 10 seconds?) is... brilliant.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>I'm in love."},{"author_name":"angrygeometry","author_uid":"5579","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 6:44pm","epoch":1377628740,"text":"i'm a huge advocate and admirer of both piss and filth. great twine game."},{"author_name":"madk","author_uid":"1540","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 7:50pm","epoch":1377632700,"text":"chrisamaphone: That's fucking nothing. I was eating while I went into this thing.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>It's awful. RobotParking: YOU'RE awful. I kinda like it."},{"author_name":"dancingflame","author_uid":"24718","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 7:51pm","epoch":1377632760,"text":"Creative text adventure!! Nice use of the hyperlinks :)"},{"author_name":"Ritzblues783","author_uid":"10873","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 9:22pm","epoch":1377638220,"text":"I'm so confused... I don't even know where to start. Very... creative? It's lost on me though..."},{"author_name":"truiton","author_uid":"25030","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 9:24pm","epoch":1377638340,"text":"Nice idea, I love text adventure :)\r<br\/>But yeah, the colors hurt the eyes :D"},{"author_name":"panurge","author_uid":"21166","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 10:37pm","epoch":1377642720,"text":"Like an unholy mash-up of Burroughs and Jeff Noon, I really enjoyed reading this. The colour scheme lingers in the retina though... :)"},{"author_name":"namrog84","author_uid":"4313","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 11:17pm","epoch":1377645120,"text":"Ow my eyes.  the color was a bit much. interesting approach though.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>I enjoyed it though. Keep up the good work!"},{"author_name":"patrickgh3","author_uid":"14266","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 12:52am","epoch":1377650820,"text":"Any deeper meaning is lost on me, but it was a blast to play."},{"author_name":"OldPeculier","author_uid":"25979","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 1:03am","epoch":1377651480,"text":"Not my cup of tea. And boy that hot pink did a number on my eyes."},{"author_name":"Kragnir","author_uid":"26709","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 1:39am","epoch":1377653640,"text":"Interesting but a bit too extreme in some cases."},{"author_name":"Diptoman","author_uid":"25325","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 10:35am","epoch":1377685800,"text":"I have no idea what I played through, but it was AWESOME! XD\r<br\/>I didn't like the background color, it kinda burned my eyes. \r<br\/>\r<br\/>One of the more interesting and different entries in this LD. :D"},{"author_name":"Delca","author_uid":"24934","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 10:37am","epoch":1377685920,"text":"As a non-native English speaker, I sometimes struggled with some words, and couldn't exactly see how much the theme was involved in this. But that was nonetheless fun to read."},{"author_name":"MatrixBai","author_uid":"4067","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 12:50pm","epoch":1377693900,"text":"My eyes."},{"author_name":"Sebastian","author_uid":"20818","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 2:30pm","epoch":1377699900,"text":"Interesting interpretation of '10 seconds' and an even more interesting story!"},{"author_name":"TobiasW","author_uid":"2587","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 3:31pm","epoch":1377703560,"text":"Yo RobotParking. Your game feels like somebody just barged into my house, threw up on my floor and I LIKED IT. Word.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>I definitely see Porpentine influence there.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>\r<br\/>@madk: Your comment made me laugh."},{"author_name":"RobotParking","author_uid":"26005","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 6:17pm","epoch":1377713520,"text":"THANKS FOR PLAYING\/COMMENTING. COULD KISS YOU ALL ON THE DANG MOUTH."},{"author_name":"Crazi456","author_uid":"20961","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 9:24pm","epoch":1377724740,"text":"Nice change of paced compared to most entries I've been playing. Colors were kind of blinding. Nice work!"},{"author_name":"65C816","author_uid":"26342","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 9:44pm","epoch":1377725940,"text":"Great entry, and really good idea, but...the color burnt my eyes."},{"author_name":"Nerlin","author_uid":"26281","time":"Aug 29, 2013 @ 12:14am","epoch":1377734940,"text":"Background is terrible. =|"},{"author_name":"PaperBlurt","author_uid":"26530","time":"Aug 29, 2013 @ 3:16pm","epoch":1377789060,"text":"I like pink too."},{"author_name":"mboaj","author_uid":"12678","time":"Aug 29, 2013 @ 5:17pm","epoch":1377796320,"text":"Wow so much purple :)"},{"author_name":"cafeine","author_uid":"14795","time":"Aug 29, 2013 @ 6:50pm","epoch":1377801900,"text":"Amazing. Videogames often lack intelligent discourse, grindcore and pink backgrounds, thank you for providing all three of them."},{"author_name":"Pinktreeleaf","author_uid":"27800","time":"Aug 29, 2013 @ 8:39pm","epoch":1377808440,"text":"So i see different colors now. Also my brain does not compute. Is this an absurdest movement in games? I don't quite understand, but i respect."},{"author_name":"iiechapman","author_uid":"14399","time":"Aug 30, 2013 @ 3:38am","epoch":1377833580,"text":"Very different, and in your face ,much like the pink color!"},{"author_name":"MegaMasterX","author_uid":"20152","time":"Aug 30, 2013 @ 12:34pm","epoch":1377865740,"text":"I was ROLLING. Nicely done hahahaha."},{"author_name":"Christina Nordlander","author_uid":"20504","time":"Aug 30, 2013 @ 9:31pm","epoch":1377897960,"text":"Very, very Porpentinesque, this, almost enough so as to be a parody. (I have no idea whether I would have believed it was made by her if I hadn't seen the author's name.) Cool subversion of the theme, very good writing (again, if you like Porpentine's style), and very good Twine work. I always like to see Twine games that pose a bit of a challenge, and this one did.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>I could have lived without the more disgusting bits, but that's a taste thing (oh gods, Chris, don't think about &quot;taste&quot; in this context) and not related to the quality of your work. Very well written and coded."},{"author_name":"Christina Nordlander","author_uid":"20504","time":"Aug 30, 2013 @ 10:52pm","epoch":1377902820,"text":"Also, grammar nitpick: &quot;put pay to&quot; should be &quot;put paid to&quot;."},{"author_name":"drkrunk","author_uid":"20825","time":"Aug 30, 2013 @ 10:55pm","epoch":1377903000,"text":"Interesting. I also didn't really like the bright colored background, it was a little distracting."},{"author_name":"infernet89","author_uid":"14271","time":"Sep 1, 2013 @ 11:03am","epoch":1378033080,"text":"Pink background and white text? OMG, MY EYES!\r<br\/>Another problem with that is that there are so many slang-like expression.. Since English is not my native language, i ended with the translator opened in another tab to understand what's going on.. And the crazy and confusing storyline didn't help at all. Sorry to be so negative, this was my experience.\r<br\/>Oh, but a storygame kind of game is very original, that's a positive fact!"},{"author_name":"XaiZil","author_uid":"27796","time":"Sep 1, 2013 @ 4:27pm","epoch":1378052520,"text":"Ehhh not too much gameplay in it"},{"author_name":"Zap","author_uid":"27818","time":"Sep 2, 2013 @ 5:02am","epoch":1378097820,"text":"A Twine adventure! Awesome!\r<br\/>&lt;3 Porpentine (I admit, I was very dismissive of interactive fiction until I read Propentine)\r<br\/>\r<br\/>I love how coarse this is and how it forces you to be such an offensive character. Well written and a unique experience.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>The pink was a bit hurty after a while, and when I looked away everything looked green *o* \r<br\/>but it fit well with the abusiveness of the game itself.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Good length and sweet interpretation of the theme!"},{"author_name":"Martin_Monosys","author_uid":"20047","time":"Sep 2, 2013 @ 5:39pm","epoch":1378143240,"text":"Eh, my eyes hurt now, the white background looks kinda blue...\r<br\/>Cute game, one of the more enjoyable twine games I played. Thing is, twine games tend to tell a story , and the coices you make during that story are generally irrelevant for it's outcome. Once we find a way to fix this, it's perfect! ;)"},{"author_name":"Andrew Shouldice","author_uid":"22249","time":"Sep 2, 2013 @ 5:40pm","epoch":1378143300,"text":"Auuuuug guugh guugh 5\/5"},{"author_name":"Raiyumi","author_uid":"25829","time":"Sep 2, 2013 @ 9:23pm","epoch":1378156680,"text":"interesting game, but would've liked a different color scheme."},{"author_name":"DaanVanYperen","author_uid":"22396","time":"Sep 4, 2013 @ 1:06pm","epoch":1378299660,"text":"This hurts my brain. Fuchsia!"},{"author_name":"Antidote","author_uid":"27803","time":"Sep 5, 2013 @ 3:41pm","epoch":1378395360,"text":"Interesting story, but the background colour is too bright."},{"author_name":"foumart","author_uid":"14368","time":"Sep 5, 2013 @ 8:15pm","epoch":1378411800,"text":"EXTRAORDINARY! this was like Vogon story mixed with alot of sweet Gore-Grind passages that are certainly scourging one's brain enought with a pink\/viollet ribbon.. uh.:x the game was awesome, really!"},{"author_name":"Sascha","author_uid":"25135","time":"Sep 6, 2013 @ 1:01am","epoch":1378428960,"text":"+1 for the title\/interpretation of the theme :)"},{"author_name":"motty","author_uid":"25335","time":"Sep 10, 2013 @ 10:59pm","epoch":1378853640,"text":"Wow.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>I'm not sure what just happened. I'm not sure whether I liked it or not. I don't think I'll be going back for seconds this time around.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>But this was good. Thank you."},{"author_name":"garygreen","author_uid":"13914","time":"Sep 12, 2013 @ 7:13pm","epoch":1379012880,"text":"That was disturbing, but also fantastic in it's own warped way. I couldn't finish it though... too full. ;-) Seriously though, I just ended up going round in a loop not knowing which way to go. I think my brain was too frazzled from it."}],"images":["ld27\/26005-420a12796d5a5814bc1bed27649aaaf0.jpg","ld27\/26005-154c0b2e54b629bddabdf5965e95b156.jpg"],"links":[{"url":"https:\/\/dl.dropboxusercontent.com\/u\/8787701\/Back%20for%20Seconds%20(revised).html","text":"Windows"},{"url":"http:\/\/philome.la\/RobotParking\/back-for-seconds-v20-for-ludum-dare-27","text":"Web"},{"url":"https:\/\/www.dropbox.com\/s\/btstyh35slyjvmg\/Back%20for%20Seconds.tws","text":"Source"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"23720","g_author":"26005","g_event":"LD27","g_eventkey":"18","g_subevent":"COMPO","g_urlkey":"23750","g_title":"Back for Seconds","g_status":"UCHK1","g_place":"994","g_commentcount":"70","g_site2_node_id":"0","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":[],"node":null,"orig_images":["http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/273708\/26005-shot0.png-eq-900-500.jpg","http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/273708\/26005-shot1.png-eq-900-500.jpg"],"text":"Bizarro-punk Twine game. Heavily inspired by Porpentine, OH NO PROBLEMS and others. Borrowed liberally from Nicole Shukin's book Animal Capital. Specifically her assertion that the term \"rendering\" as both mimesis and the act of boiling animal remains to have another \"pass\" through the market is an apt rubric through which we can examine the ways capitalism extends itself. Players will need to \"go back for seconds\" 10 times before the game \"ends.\"\r\n\r\nThis is also my first time working with Twine. Hope you enjoy it, but if you don't, whatever. ","title":"Back for Seconds"}