It's very cute, but a little buggy with room transitions and text overlapping. Animations would really bring this entry to life I think :)

Cute game, you should definitely add some animations, it would absolutely change the feeling of the game. A few bugs when I died, the text is glitching. Telling a story was a nice idea.

Thank you guys~ I'll add animations and fix the bug later. Your suggestion means so much to me :)

Love the music, graphics and handwriting text. They helped creating a great mood for the game. I think it's really a good start for your 1st jam. Hope to see more entries from you in the future!
I failed to get to the 10th seconds. My inside was around me, but the broken heart never appeared. I don't know if I was playing in the wrong way.

This story had a very sad mood, i liked it. Almost made me cry. The main character were so cute! I would like animations to this story to make it complete.

This was somewhat sad but I liked it, the main character design was cute.

Interesting idea. The game files are pretty big...

Quite buggy, so I'm having a hard time going to the end.

But I like the concept, even though the "10 seconds" are a bit extended :) the graphics and the sound are cute.