Bombed Life by Toshiro

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made by Toshiro for LD27 (COMPO)
You found a bomb which will explode in 10 seconds. Choose among a lot of choice what to do, to try to sae you and thousand of people ! Quick !

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Enjoy and leave a comment, feedbacks are really important for me ! :)

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Version 1.1 :

- Correct lots of grammatical errors
- Rephrase some sentence and path
- Add the Majin Boo gif

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Ratings

Coolness 66% 3
Overall 2.66 926
Audio 1.93 829
Fun 2.51 887
Graphics 1.47 1182
Humor 3.18 157
Innovation 2.11 1084
Mood 2.43 800
Theme 3.31 420

Feedback

Oxydam
26. Aug 2013 路 07:26 UTC
Very funny game. But too many choices at the beginning. Each run is too short.
jammy12789
26. Aug 2013 路 07:28 UTC
I found the game very hard to complete. It was actually quite funny! But the Game was quite annoying(is this game even completable?).
Anyway It was a pretty funny game!
Brassawiking
26. Aug 2013 路 07:41 UTC
A nice little "Choose your own adventure" game =) The writing is quite good, so no worries about that.
馃帳 Toshiro
26. Aug 2013 路 07:57 UTC
@Owydam : Thanks :) I think after the ludum I'll make a v.2 of this interractive fiction to change some feature / passage / problems, I take note of this ! Thanks. :)

@jammy12789 : Yes, the difficulty is one of the main problem. I'll correct that in a future version I think. But you're lucky, at the beginning, there was only one way to win ! If you had fun, I'm happy :)

@Brassawiking : Thanks ! You reassure myself because it was my biggest fear.
zedutchgandalf
26. Aug 2013 路 10:22 UTC
Very fun game :D
Don't worry about the writing, it's perfectly clear what you want to say :)
I managed to survive in two different ways, not sure how many there are :P
CuberToy
26. Aug 2013 路 10:45 UTC
Really had fun, "completed" the game on my first run. I may have seen to much movies. So I try other things. Really liked it overall.
misson20000
26. Aug 2013 路 16:09 UTC
I like how you didn't write novels on each of the pages (unlike some other similar games...), and how I can just rip both the wires out of the stupid bomb.Good game.
misson20000
26. Aug 2013 路 16:10 UTC
I like how you didn't write novels on each of the pages (unlike some other similar games...), and how I can just rip both the wires out of the stupid bomb. Good game.
skarab
26. Aug 2013 路 16:11 UTC
Wow, I was lucky and win the first time ;) Nice experience between.
Frozen Fractal
26. Aug 2013 路 16:19 UTC
It's pretty obvious what the right choices are, but I still had fun exploring them all :)
GuillaumeGwi
26. Aug 2013 路 16:32 UTC
Cool I liked it even if i had already play tested it :D I love especially the Call emergency option ;)
馃帳 Toshiro
26. Aug 2013 路 17:02 UTC
When I play it now, I think that the solution is too obvious too. I'll make a v.2 in a future to make a better story :D

Thanks for feedbacks ! :)
Larzan
26. Aug 2013 路 17:33 UTC
Hehe, nice idea, took me a while to get it, i also couldn't read fast enough to survive, hehe.
Colapsydo
27. Aug 2013 路 14:41 UTC
I knew it, I always choose the worst moment to go to pee.
Nice little text adventure.
馃帳 Toshiro
27. Aug 2013 路 16:43 UTC
@Larzan Thanks, and congrats ! ;)

@Colapsydo Pee will be the reason of the end of the world, I'm sure of that !
xrm0
28. Aug 2013 路 11:51 UTC
It's fun.
I restart link didn't worked for me.
馃帳 Toshiro
28. Aug 2013 路 16:06 UTC
Oh sorry, I fixed this. :/
Pyrofoux
28. Aug 2013 路 19:45 UTC
You fixed this, but I fixed the bomb ! Hell yeah ! \脮/
馃帳 Toshiro
28. Aug 2013 路 23:27 UTC
Haha, I can't fix your power. B)
PaperBlurt
29. Aug 2013 路 17:23 UTC
A lot of choices are fun!
Nezzhil
30. Aug 2013 路 11:40 UTC
I love adventures game and it's very funny. :)
withoutpillow
30. Aug 2013 路 14:31 UTC
i like it! had to play and get all the endings, and one (you probably know which one) was fantastic! good fun.
farmergnome
01. Sep 2013 路 00:01 UTC
This one had me laughing, had fun exploring the choices, great entry!
Mlle Eole
01. Sep 2013 路 14:47 UTC
Agree with the 'fantastic ending' ! :D
Christina Nordlander
08. Sep 2013 路 20:12 UTC
Pretty good. I liked a lot of the humour (such as the silly things you could do while preparing to die, or the response to running away without warning people). The way the story defused (pun intended) some of the more typical action-hero responses felt pretty realistic, too.

The best ending was a bit too silly for me, but humour is always a matter of taste.

On the downside, it's not much of a game: getting a good ending seems a bit more dependent on trial-and-error than logic. Also, the writing itself isn't very impressive. This isn't about technical issues (I know you're not a native English speaker; neither am I, for that matter), but a bit more descriptiveness and mood could go a long way. On the other hand, the comedic bits work well.

In short: nothing outstanding, but very funny in places.