10 Second shooting by pikkufighter

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made by pikkufighter for LD27 (COMPO)
done, can you get the 2 achievement i added?

this is only my second ludum dare entry.

you play by clicking on the targets. And click in the middle for double points.

source is here now sorry for the lack of comments. Totally forgot about them.

Ratings

Coolness 89% 2
Overall 1.84 1192
Audio 1.25 976
Fun 2.02 1109
Graphics 1.34 1191
Humor 1.28 975
Innovation 1.43 1196
Mood 1.43 1078
Theme 1.98 1146

Feedback

JALgames
24. Aug 2013 · 15:58 UTC
Need more content. Although I like this game, I wouldn't rate it up because I could do this in 5 minutes (and you did most propery too)

PS: My Score is 1700.
Zephyr89
24. Aug 2013 · 18:51 UTC
Give me some feedback. It feels like it is disappearing under my mouse. It isn't, but that is what it feels like.
Zephyr89
24. Aug 2013 · 18:52 UTC
By me, I mean the average player.
loolpolo
26. Aug 2013 · 07:21 UTC
Liked the achievement system.
zerebruin
26. Aug 2013 · 07:22 UTC
The basic gameplay works, but it's a bit boring without music. Why are the targets hidden behind black bars? Something like trees/bushes would have been a lot nicer.
Zephyr89
26. Aug 2013 · 07:23 UTC
It still looks like it was made in two minutes.
Zephyr89
26. Aug 2013 · 07:25 UTC
By so yes, add more things ,like music ,sound effects and some art.
🎤 pikkufighter
26. Aug 2013 · 07:35 UTC
yes that would be an idea. maybe next time i got more time to do it. since i was not home very much this time.
Ludipe
26. Aug 2013 · 08:16 UTC
Hey, it's also my second Ludum Dare! :)

It's a nice little game, but it needs improvements. As other users said feedback is important, play a sound and animation once you destroy a target, or when another appears.
jay griffin
26. Aug 2013 · 09:44 UTC
Yeah, a little sound fx and extra feedback would add a lot. Not bad anyway.
archaeometrician
26. Aug 2013 · 09:49 UTC
Cool game ! You should add sound effect and more precision ( shooting on the extremities get you 10-20 points) Good work !
Red Mike
26. Aug 2013 · 09:50 UTC
Very basic idea. The game itself is sound, but there's no feedback, through sound or graphics. Graphics needs some more work as well.
Jimanzium
26. Aug 2013 · 09:50 UTC
Seems a little bland, you could have used something like trees or bushed not black bars. And more interesting backgrounds could have been used.
Impmaster
26. Aug 2013 · 10:11 UTC
Yeah, doesn't feel like something that had 48 hours spent on it.
🎤 pikkufighter
26. Aug 2013 · 10:58 UTC
what do you guys mean with feedback? and also i didn't spend 48 hours doing this i only spent about 8h.
LevelUpJordan
27. Aug 2013 · 07:36 UTC
Do x in 10 seconds seems like a pretty easy way to implement the theme. It also needs to communicate what is going on a bit better, overall though it's pretty solid.

If you could take a look at my game I'd really appreciate it, thanks!
🎤 pikkufighter
27. Aug 2013 · 11:23 UTC
i knew it was something i forgot thanks for the heads up and i will check out your game now.
AtomicVikings
27. Aug 2013 · 11:35 UTC
To less content. No music. Idea is nice and i can't see the 10 seconds theme.
Zap
28. Aug 2013 · 01:32 UTC
Nice and simple.
But the higher levels don't ask for anymore skill from the player-

The black bars don't add anything to the game, rather it feels to me like a fault of the game that the targets are generated behind them- because now I can't shoot the centre, but it's not my fault.

What if, the cursor can't pass through the black parts of the level, so you have to quickly calculate the most direct route to navigate around them, like a maze?
🎤 pikkufighter
28. Aug 2013 · 05:03 UTC
Zap: ye that would be an excellent idea.

AtomicVikings: sorry for that i forgot to give in game instructions, the theme part is that you only got 10 seconds on each try.
Crazi456
28. Aug 2013 · 05:23 UTC
They mean feedback as in a sound or visual effect when the target has been shot.
🎤 pikkufighter
28. Aug 2013 · 05:46 UTC
okay thanks mate
AnnaGavaldaKedavra
28. Aug 2013 · 11:31 UTC
Good idea. Too bad there is only 2 scores on the target. With a few improvements would be great.
BenWhi
29. Aug 2013 · 05:47 UTC
Simple game, but kinda catchy! Enjoyed it! Could use some sounds though!
ratalaika
29. Aug 2013 · 16:50 UTC
good job
Unept
30. Aug 2013 · 19:45 UTC
Gave me a minute or two of good, simple, fun. :) Add sound and maybe some moving obstacles, and an epic story of a brave warrior trying to bow & arrow his way to the evil castle over the lava horde, where Emperor Magma has stolen and hid away all of the icecream sandwiches from the Poultry Kingdom, then it would be a splendid little game. ;)
RARoadkill
31. Aug 2013 · 02:36 UTC
Fun simple little game. I think having them move on later stages would have been cool. Add some target breaking animation and you have yourself a mobile game
murilo
31. Aug 2013 · 02:50 UTC
It's actually more challenging than I thought since you supposedly would have great accuracy with the mouse! This could be pretty fun with some effort and polish!
Jupiter_Hadley
03. Sep 2013 · 03:21 UTC
Very simple fun game, very challenging at times as well. I featured it in my Ludum Dare 27 video compilation series, if you'd like to check it out :) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GcXHrH6VSV0
Gaspard_
03. Sep 2013 · 18:47 UTC
Little short,to easy, and striking the double points pretty much takes more time to achieve than to just shoot two targets...
Zap's idea sounds cool, do a post compo!
Dream Of Sleeping
09. Sep 2013 · 17:26 UTC
The simplest ideas are often the best, and I think this is a really good idea. There is so much you could have done with this to make it better.