Don't Walk by GrinningDolphin

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made by GrinningDolphin for LD27 (COMPO)
Made in Twine.

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L
26. Aug 2013 · 04:07 UTC
Public transport is the harshest adventure of all.

Good theme, good tension.
PaperBlurt
26. Aug 2013 · 12:41 UTC
Good implementation of the theme - real life type of game. Good job..
avh4
26. Aug 2013 · 19:43 UTC
Nice work with the theme. I played three or four times and didn't find a way to lose, though.
withoutpillow
27. Aug 2013 · 09:43 UTC
i like your writing style, and all the different choices made me play it over and over. nice work, and the theme is easy to relate to.
grayhaze
14. Sep 2013 · 14:01 UTC
I really liked this. The writing was fun and it made a nice change of pace from all the arcade games. Well done!
Christina Nordlander
14. Sep 2013 · 20:25 UTC
I feel inclined to love this game just because I had something similar happen to me recently (except without the shoes).

A well-written slice-of-life story with quite a lot of choice involved. I found two endings; I appreciate how, just like in real life, there's not a sense of clear "win" or "lose" conditions. Thanks for an enjoyable couple of minutes.