One Chance at Success by TheLemonKing

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made by TheLemonKing for LD28 (COMPO)
One Chance at Success is a story-driven game. You are a lone person who moved to Starry City. You want to be successful but you only have one chance.

Note:

A & D to move. SPACE BAR to jump. If by a door or a person press J to trigger that event.

Feedback

TheOneWhoKnocks
15. Dec 2013 · 12:05 UTC
It's kinda fun. The terrible art kinda adds to the charm of the game. I sort of enjoyed it, but I wouldn't want to play it again.
spike_xp
15. Dec 2013 · 19:51 UTC
Aaaaaand... I happened to restart because I don't know that I should press J :V

It looks really good and smooth all over, but I haven't feel the YOGO. It's rather slow and I'm more cut out for games that pushes my reflexes and brain.
arkeus
16. Dec 2013 · 03:53 UTC
"If by a door or a person press J to trigger that event."

Oh.

I just kept jumping into him until I pushed that poor child off the cliff. YOLO.
DaanVanYperen
17. Dec 2013 · 21:26 UTC
Am I special? I can't find the super pencil! :C
WhoaConstrictor
19. Dec 2013 · 02:51 UTC
one of the first jumps in level 2 is hard if you don't wait until your character is almost completely over the edge. The rest of the game feels pretty trivial and the story doesn't seem to have a whole lot of depth. Failing once resulting in restarting the game was a tad frustrating.
Zuige
22. Dec 2013 · 16:13 UTC
So… there's a boy who needs help finding his pencil. You can push him off the screen and he gets annihilated. I'm probably missing something here. :)
Gamelabbers
22. Dec 2013 · 16:20 UTC
I do think there should be a lot more games where you can actually see the collision box of your character. This way you can make a very calculated choice, when to jump. And yes, not being able to find the SUPERPENCIL (lol) is kinda special :P ah, yes putting 'J' in your tutorial is probably a good idea, as are checkpoints for respawning, as is adding awesome music and sfx and an MMO world... ooooh featurecreap, sorry. Nice effort for a game made in one weekend!
01rafael
28. Dec 2013 · 12:45 UTC
Well, it's not so excited to search for pencil ))
But this is a nice entry! good job!