{"author_link":"\/author\/kewry\/","author_name":"kewry","author_uid":"12789","comments":[{"author_name":"Masadow","author_uid":"22572","time":"Dec 16, 2013 @ 1:12pm","epoch":1387199220,"text":"I would love to have an animation of what's going on at the bottom. I think you was planning to do that since there is the girl at the beginning ?\r\rI couldn't go to the end unfortunately, I don't like much reading and there is nothing more to keep my attention :( Not really your fault, I'm just not a big fan of the gender ;)"},{"author_name":"kewry","author_uid":"12789","time":"Dec 16, 2013 @ 1:21pm","epoch":1387199760,"text":"Thanks Masadow, I did intend to have some graphics behind the play, my arts are just really terrible :P"},{"author_name":"turnA","author_uid":"19248","time":"Dec 16, 2013 @ 1:33pm","epoch":1387200480,"text":"Interesting... the theme is not at all obvious (especially when you reach the ending quickly). At least I'm not dreaming right now..."},{"author_name":"PaperBlurt","author_uid":"26530","time":"Dec 16, 2013 @ 2:52pm","epoch":1387205220,"text":"Huh.. Why use both Unity and Twine?\rBut also.. why not?\r\rInteresting combo."},{"author_name":"chicknstu","author_uid":"29548","time":"Dec 16, 2013 @ 2:56pm","epoch":1387205460,"text":"I think I got the first two parts right, but I couldn't work out what to do wit the mole.\r\rNice work"},{"author_name":"kewry","author_uid":"12789","time":"Dec 16, 2013 @ 3:15pm","epoch":1387206600,"text":"@chicknstu step away and carry on ;)\r\r@PaperBlurt Twine allows for easy and quick decision based story making and although they have their awesome html export I wanted something where I could add 3D to the action (which I failed for multiple reasons :P)"},{"author_name":"bugninja","author_uid":"8142","time":"Dec 16, 2013 @ 4:26pm","epoch":1387210860,"text":"Nice way of implementing a choose your own adventure style game. I like it."},{"author_name":"loxo","author_uid":"23206","time":"Dec 16, 2013 @ 5:08pm","epoch":1387213380,"text":"Nice story with a somewhat short ending. But I needed some attempts to finish it, that's good ;) Some images or the already suggested animations would have been nice. Maybe you find some time to complete it."},{"author_name":"scriptorum","author_uid":"17811","time":"Dec 16, 2013 @ 5:38pm","epoch":1387215180,"text":"I like abstract application of the theme. Now I have to get some antiseptic for these claw marks on my face."},{"author_name":"emmelineprufrock","author_uid":"22454","time":"Dec 17, 2013 @ 1:41am","epoch":1387244160,"text":"Unity + Twine is interesting. I've been considering it myself. Very cool."},{"author_name":"Aaants","author_uid":"16061","time":"Dec 17, 2013 @ 6:19pm","epoch":1387304040,"text":"Nice work - not sure I ever got the 'right' ending though :)"},{"author_name":"almightysuit","author_uid":"31947","time":"Dec 18, 2013 @ 9:45pm","epoch":1387402800,"text":"Hey kewry! Nice entry :) Is it even possible to win? I tried like 10 times and couldn't do it. I did get the eagle to leave me alone though.. I might have to try again sometimes. You should do the jam next time, as others mentioned art would definitely complement well a Twine+Unity entry!"},{"author_name":"kewry","author_uid":"12789","time":"Dec 19, 2013 @ 1:24am","epoch":1387415940,"text":"Yes, it's possible to win, there's multiple paths but mainly you need to: \r- meet the mole and leave the flower alone afterward\r- "befriend" the eagle (she might scratch you a couple of times or not touch you at all!)\r- befriend the squirrel\r\rthe rest of the path should be easy :)"},{"author_name":"porglezomp","author_uid":"21051","time":"Dec 19, 2013 @ 2:29am","epoch":1387419840,"text":"Quite a nice story! It's a shame you didn't manage to add graphics to it."},{"author_name":"ehtd","author_uid":"11246","time":"Dec 19, 2013 @ 2:30am","epoch":1387419900,"text":"Interesting game, too bad it was short. Twine and unity, curious combination!"},{"author_name":"Switchbreak","author_uid":"2645","time":"Dec 19, 2013 @ 4:46am","epoch":1387428060,"text":"Interesting, I wasn't able to beat it but some of the puzzles seemed pretty cool."},{"author_name":"smash ball","author_uid":"27436","time":"Dec 19, 2013 @ 4:36pm","epoch":1387470660,"text":"Had you not said to leave the mole alone, I would have never reached the ending. Great game otherwise."},{"author_name":"mortus","author_uid":"20884","time":"Dec 19, 2013 @ 5:04pm","epoch":1387472340,"text":"It looks like I've finally found the good ending, but I still didn't understand the place. It was somewhat fun although."},{"author_name":"Christina Nordlander","author_uid":"20504","time":"Dec 20, 2013 @ 4:57pm","epoch":1387558320,"text":"Very interesting idea, this. The gameplay was... weird. It is definitely a game, insofar as there is a solution that leads to victory, as well as sub-optimal branches that lead to failure, but achieving success seems to be a lot more about trial and error than problem-solving. It's frustrating, but it also helps the dreamlike mood, and I felt motivated enough to play through until I got the happy ending.\r\rOn the downside, the writing is very simple and barebones, and there are quite a few typoes, especially early on.\r\rDifficult to rate, but an interesting idea."},{"author_name":"Husky","author_uid":"17464","time":"Dec 23, 2013 @ 10:08am","epoch":1387792980,"text":"Interesting!\rIt's a nice story :D"}],"images":["ld28\/12789-2ca822fb9a4de2ad89e0f7c822ac275a.jpg"],"links":[{"url":"https:\/\/dl.dropboxusercontent.com\/u\/28308554\/CYOC\/Linuxx86_64.rar","text":"Linux"},{"url":"http:\/\/bit.ly\/1cKRb3U","text":"Web"},{"url":"http:\/\/www.mediafire.com\/download\/5wbm0u60gumbueo\/CYOA%20v0.1.3.rar","text":"Source"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"22227","g_author":"12789","g_event":"LD28","g_eventkey":"20","g_subevent":"COMPO","g_urlkey":"22256","g_title":"The Lonely Girl","g_status":"UCHK1","g_place":"866","g_commentcount":"20","g_site2_node_id":"0","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":[],"node":null,"orig_images":["http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/308734\/12789-shot0.png-eq-900-500.jpg"],"text":"\"The Lonely Girl\" is a text adventure game about a lost little girl, find her way through this place and discover why she is there.\r\n\r\nIf you get confused about what is going on remember, it's a dream.\r\n\r\nThis game was made with Unity3D using Twine for faster story writing.","title":"The Lonely Girl"}