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Two Birds with One Stone by PunyOne

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made by PunyOne for LD28 (JAM)
An interactive story (more story, less interactive).

Sound is absolutely necessary (did not manage to put subtitles there in time).

The game may behave quirky if the focus is lost at some point.

Built in Haxe, exported to Flash.
Web http://www.justaconcept.org/Games/TBWOS/
Original URL https://ludumdare.com/compo/ludum-dare-28/?action=preview&uid=27123

Ratings

Coolness 49% 965
Overall(Jam) 2.13 531
Audio(Jam) 2.79 288
Fun(Jam) 1.71 535
Graphics(Jam) 2.54 437
Humor(Jam) 2.07 341
Innovation(Jam) 2.54 380
Mood(Jam) 2.68 349
Theme(Jam) 2.64 313

Feedback

the
17. Dec 2013 · 09:32 UTC
This game so slowly. Blurring is also not best decision.
harsanalif
17. Dec 2013 · 09:55 UTC
A bit... non-interactive as a game for my taste. But love the audio, few games have used it like this.
sprawl
17. Dec 2013 · 14:32 UTC
It's the first game i see that ludum dare that tells its story like that, love it.

However, It took a little too long for my taste.
Also, the audio keep going when the game is paused.

Good job !
drkrunk
17. Dec 2013 · 16:26 UTC
Good job, but I think the beginning drags on a little too long.
fullmontis
18. Dec 2013 · 14:04 UTC
You have a very sleep inducing voice :) The intro is really too long, I would have gotten to the point faster, and with slimmer dialogue. But the concept itself is interesting.
van noctar
18. Dec 2013 · 14:33 UTC
Too long for me... However good job for this work!
Dyn
19. Dec 2013 · 14:33 UTC
Like this art a lot and concept also.
More interaction in the game will make it much better.
MrTedders
20. Dec 2013 · 17:01 UTC
Lol only criticisms I have were already said, love the idea tho!
netmute
20. Dec 2013 · 17:51 UTC
Very moody. I wish you would have talked a little bit louder, it was hard to follow a times :) (I'm a non-native english speaker)
goerp
20. Dec 2013 · 18:27 UTC
I love the idea, quite original and it has the right mood. Good take on the theme. Here you really had only one.
It would have helped if you had a voice artist for this.
It was a bit too long for me, too long to try if I could do it differently.
But then again, playing it only once fits the theme.
🎤 PunyOne
24. Dec 2013 · 20:28 UTC
Thanks a lot for the kind comments :).

It was our first submission to LD in general, now we see that the length of the game is quite burdensome.

Next time we would exchange the run-time for more experimental approach.
Jan Marcano
03. Jan 2014 · 04:39 UTC
Its a good idea, nice one.