{"author_link":"\/author\/ryanmurakami\/","author_name":"ryanmurakami","author_uid":"28945","comments":[{"author_name":"sudorossy","author_uid":"7905","time":"Dec 17, 2013 @ 2:09am","epoch":1387245840,"text":"Audio was really nice. Unique art style. I confessed, then got a game over"},{"author_name":"johnfn","author_uid":"3187","time":"Dec 17, 2013 @ 2:17am","epoch":1387246320,"text":"Pretty cool! Really nice mood thanks to the atmospheric music and creepy plot progression. I was kinda disappointed that I seemed to die in a park for no good reason though :P"},{"author_name":"Christopher Schulte","author_uid":"21249","time":"Dec 17, 2013 @ 2:21am","epoch":1387246560,"text":"Audio was good. The good end seemed to leave me hanging, maybe continue the story or give a sort of epiogue text?"},{"author_name":"OnlySlightly","author_uid":"1959","time":"Dec 17, 2013 @ 2:22am","epoch":1387246620,"text":"Very eerie and moody. I liked the aesthetic"},{"author_name":"Scipio Xaos","author_uid":"7742","time":"Dec 17, 2013 @ 2:23am","epoch":1387246680,"text":"I liked it.  Pretty interesting.  I played through and got the Good Ending on the first run.  I may have to play again and look for the others."},{"author_name":"SoundGuy","author_uid":"31394","time":"Dec 17, 2013 @ 2:26am","epoch":1387246860,"text":"very nice!"},{"author_name":"Unept","author_uid":"25813","time":"Dec 17, 2013 @ 2:28am","epoch":1387246980,"text":"Interesting, I confessed and ended up with the Good Ending. Woohoo! I win!"},{"author_name":"AtomicVikings","author_uid":"25123","time":"Dec 17, 2013 @ 3:04am","epoch":1387249140,"text":"Very nice game. :-)"},{"author_name":"ahnt","author_uid":"17704","time":"Dec 17, 2013 @ 3:12am","epoch":1387249620,"text":"Interesting choice in a game, I like the direction you took it. The in game audio was fine but was not a fan of the game over audio, it seemed to throw off the mood of the game."},{"author_name":"van noctar","author_uid":"21196","time":"Dec 17, 2013 @ 3:12am","epoch":1387249620,"text":"Funny game! Like the detective game!"},{"author_name":"bakpakin","author_uid":"29055","time":"Dec 17, 2013 @ 3:19am","epoch":1387250040,"text":"I liked the watercolor-esque art, good storyline too."},{"author_name":"JaymeeMak","author_uid":"30729","time":"Dec 17, 2013 @ 3:25am","epoch":1387250400,"text":"The text runs out of the box when you reach &quot;This guy is being really pushy.&quot; as well as when the cop says, &quot;Not carrying your ID is a felony&quot; aaaaand a bunch of other places (lazy to type out now :P)\r<br\/>\r<br\/>I feel like player interaction (other than clicking through narrative) would be welcome earlier in the game.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Audio in the menu would also be good."},{"author_name":"BitDemon","author_uid":"14783","time":"Dec 17, 2013 @ 11:46am","epoch":1387280460,"text":"Nice, I think the art style is really cool."},{"author_name":"floorman","author_uid":"10481","time":"Dec 17, 2013 @ 4:00pm","epoch":1387295700,"text":"Good game, although the seemingly random dying for doing some of the things feels a bit wrong.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>But other than that I like the game, unique art style, good graphics and I love the soundtack. Very fitting."},{"author_name":"30dogs","author_uid":"12480","time":"Dec 17, 2013 @ 8:46pm","epoch":1387312860,"text":"Took me a few tries, but I'm glad I got to the good ending. The story was interesting and I am left wanting to know more about MegaCorp and the experiment, and what became of the protagonist's wife. Nice work!"},{"author_name":"olafsworld98","author_uid":"30819","time":"Dec 18, 2013 @ 3:49am","epoch":1387338240,"text":"i got it strait to the end the second time."},{"author_name":"udinjelek","author_uid":"29365","time":"Dec 18, 2013 @ 3:54am","epoch":1387338540,"text":"wogh tempting, unfortunately I got bad ending :(\r<br\/>I think I will try again :D (hope have a good ending for this one)"},{"author_name":"Several","author_uid":"11903","time":"Dec 19, 2013 @ 1:08am","epoch":1387414980,"text":"You made the engine and the game in 72 hours? Nice work!\r<br\/>\r<br\/>It doesn't seem to run in Firefox in OSX, though. The y-position of the initial buttons (+ text) seems to be outside of the container (and thus hidden), and if I hack around that,to press the button, the screen fades to black, but everything within the svg element that should fade in just stays hidden.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Otherwise, if you plan on continuing on the engine: I'd like it if I could click to make all of the text appear at once (since it appears so slowly), instead of always skipping to the next block. I think the usual click-'skip'-to-skip, click-anywhere-else-to-show-all approach is a rather considerate way of handling things."},{"author_name":"ryanmurakami","author_uid":"28945","time":"Dec 19, 2013 @ 3:54am","epoch":1387424940,"text":"@Several\r<br\/>Thanks for the feedback!!! Yes, I'm going to keep it going. I think clicking to complete the text is a great idea. You can keep track on the engine here:\r<br\/>https:\/\/github.com\/ryanmurakami\/VizNov.js\r<br\/>Thanks!"},{"author_name":"occash","author_uid":"31683","time":"Dec 20, 2013 @ 5:58pm","epoch":1387561980,"text":"I think that dialogs was veery long and at the end I was boring. But idea is good)"},{"author_name":"drkrunk","author_uid":"20825","time":"Dec 20, 2013 @ 6:03pm","epoch":1387562280,"text":"Very interesting! I admit I made nothing but wrong choices and kept going back to get a better ending. I finally got the good end :) This was really great, art style was unique and the music added to the mood."},{"author_name":"Daveloper","author_uid":"29237","time":"Dec 23, 2013 @ 7:54pm","epoch":1387828140,"text":"Nice attempt at a graphic novel game, funtionally working which is something I can't say about a lot of submissions, well done."},{"author_name":"Tanser","author_uid":"27381","time":"Jan 3, 2014 @ 12:49pm","epoch":1388753040,"text":"Really nice concept, good job!"}],"images":["ld28\/28945-98495888382bef98a7f350c7a391a2ce.jpg","ld28\/28945-6ac051d79de1eb4c8519af690b652d33.jpg","ld28\/28945-389939cc26da3c07a43aef10e06bb2c2.jpg","ld28\/28945-623a55f672c3e44b24f4850c60ab6922.jpg"],"links":[{"url":"https:\/\/dl.dropboxusercontent.com\/u\/24981817\/LD28\/Breathe.zip","text":"Download"},{"url":"https:\/\/dl.dropboxusercontent.com\/u\/24981817\/LD28\/index.html","text":"Web (Chrome Only)"},{"url":"https:\/\/soundcloud.com\/ryan-lewis-5\/sets\/ludum-dare-28-game-soundtrack","text":"Soundtrack"},{"url":"https:\/\/github.com\/ryanmurakami\/VizNov.js","text":"VizNov.js Source"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"21730","g_author":"28945","g_event":"LD28","g_eventkey":"20","g_subevent":"JAM","g_urlkey":"21759","g_title":"Breathe","g_status":"UCHK1","g_place":"312","g_commentcount":"23","g_site2_node_id":"0","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":[],"node":null,"orig_images":["http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/308734\/28945-shot0.jpg-eq-900-500.jpg","http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/308734\/28945-shot1.jpg-eq-900-500.jpg","http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/308734\/28945-shot2.jpg-eq-900-500.jpg","http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/308734\/28945-shot3.jpg-eq-900-500.jpg"],"text":"What does [You Only Get One] mean?\r\n\r\nBreathe is a Visual Novel with 5 endings (1 Good, 4 Bad).\r\n\r\nInstructions:\r\nClick the text box & choices to proceed.\r\nPlay online or download, unzip, and open index.html\r\n\r\nBuilt using VizNov.js, also completely written during LD28!\r\n\r\nTested in Google Chrome with 1680 x 988 resolution.\r\n\r\nKNOWN BUGS:\r\nScreens smaller than 1680 wide will have text running off the screen.\r\nDoesn't work on Firefox in OSX","title":"Breathe"}