Dan the Newspaper by poingferret

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made by poingferret for LD28 (JAM)
My first game ever and created with Twine, this was based on a dream I had the other night after a meal of bad enchiladas.

Thus, I offer no good explanation and only my apologies, but to say that this is a text and decision-based game in which a good friend is transformed into a free weekly newspaper before your very eyes, Justin Bieber might be responsible and you may need to enlist the help of Carl Weathers and a polar bear to make things right.

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ParaPup
16. Dec 2013 · 04:16 UTC
Classical way of games I like what you did there.
MyGrandmother
16. Dec 2013 · 20:49 UTC
I love decision based narrative games. Great job, and I like the story too XD. Just a couple of feedback, make the decision as button, it fell more natural also if possible make the text happer one line at time, this give the idea that the game is moving forward
capnramses
16. Dec 2013 · 22:12 UTC
hehe i got diced by sith lords!
minibutmany
17. Dec 2013 · 23:09 UTC
Nice, very funny!
PaperBlurt
18. Dec 2013 · 11:23 UTC
So weird, beautiful and fun!
jacklehamster
29. Dec 2013 · 22:33 UTC
I'm glad I got a live reading of this game at the meetup. I don't know if I would able to handle so much reading, but listening to it sounded really fun!
emmelineprufrock
01. Jan 2014 · 01:08 UTC
very interesting. cool use of twine.
kristoffer zetterberg
01. Jan 2014 · 16:57 UTC
based on a dream you say?

what a great dream!
Cake&Code
02. Jan 2014 · 09:40 UTC
Very strange game lol. It was an enjoyable Choose Your Own Adventure type scenario, with a lot of really surreal things happening.