{"author_link":"\/author\/rxanadu\/","author_name":"Rxanadu","author_uid":"23105","comments":[{"author_name":"Snoother","author_uid":"33841","time":"Apr 27, 2014 @ 5:46pm","epoch":1398620460,"text":"That was fun. I see you couldn't resist the old cave-crawl IF trope either!\r<br\/>\r<br\/>The pacing (at least for the path I took) suited the dramatic events. Would have liked it to be a bit longer, but obviously that's difficult under the time restraints.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>And for some reason loads of these (&acirc;&euro;&tilde;) appear. e.g. &quot;At last, you&acirc;&euro;&tilde;re at the top of the tower. Yet, you&acirc;&euro;&trade;re still underground.&quot;"},{"author_name":"mandrake","author_uid":"34389","time":"Apr 27, 2014 @ 6:21pm","epoch":1398622560,"text":"Well written and fun. I, however, also had problems with these things; &Atilde;&cent;&acirc;\ufffd&not;&Euml;\ufffd, that popped up every now and then."},{"author_name":"Rxanadu","author_uid":"23105","time":"Apr 27, 2014 @ 10:54pm","epoch":1398638940,"text":"That seems to be an issue with how Twine lays out conjunctions. I'll remove all of the conjunctions and upload the result again."},{"author_name":"Rxanadu","author_uid":"23105","time":"Apr 28, 2014 @ 12:18am","epoch":1398643980,"text":"I removed all of the conjunctions, as that seems to be causing a lot of odd text showing in the .html pages. I also added some more plot to the story. Nothing major, but I think it adds to the overall story.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Hope you all enjoy!"},{"author_name":"PaperBlurt","author_uid":"26530","time":"Apr 28, 2014 @ 7:22am","epoch":1398669420,"text":"Is just me or is this game broken?\r<br\/>Can't click on anything..\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Nice style on the Twine anyways."},{"author_name":"Snoother","author_uid":"33841","time":"Apr 28, 2014 @ 2:54pm","epoch":1398696540,"text":"The prose is mostly solid, with a few &quot;meh&quot; sentences. As I said in the comments it was fun to play and had good pacing, even if at times scenes did move a bit too quickly. And I would have liked it to be a touch longer."},{"author_name":"joe40001","author_uid":"22192","time":"May 7, 2014 @ 8:04pm","epoch":1399492740,"text":"I liked it, I liked how you weren't randomly punished for behaving prudently."},{"author_name":"danidre14","author_uid":"32791","time":"May 8, 2014 @ 10:06pm","epoch":1399586460,"text":"played many like these"}],"images":["ld29\/23105-0c0206c03f0f5937d00a4d33b83ca35c.jpg"],"links":[{"url":"https:\/\/dl.dropboxusercontent.com\/u\/165884704\/Complete\/A%20Trip%20Underground.html","text":"Web"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"20143","g_author":"23105","g_event":"LD29","g_eventkey":"22","g_subevent":"COMPO","g_urlkey":"20172","g_title":"A Trip Underground","g_status":"UCHK1","g_place":"99999","g_commentcount":"8","g_site2_node_id":"0","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":[],"node":null,"orig_images":["http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/342546\/23105-shot0.PNG-eq-900-500.jpg"],"text":"A simple story I made in Twine. You're a hiker who find themselves in an underground cave after falling in a hole. Now you have to find your way out.","title":"A Trip Underground"}