i had to cut down the history.. but, well.. i hope you understand the history

when the story got interesting: shocker! cool graphics

i like your drawings

I immediately killed myself jumping off a cliff, only to respawn and then kill myself once again after finding out i also killed some other people.
What a plot!

Really loved the twist ending! Interesting artstyle!
Cool game overall :)

Simplistic yet shockingly fun because of the humor. I like the simplistic graphics as well! Good job!

Twist ending! I liked this :)

Love the Doctor Who reference in the end :D. Really Nice Graphics, Pen is cool.

Wow, that took a sinister turn! Very nice art style

From the man who waited to the man who killed everybody?!

I love the art and the story. Kinda wish there was some more game play though! Good work.

The jumping was a little wonky, but I love the hand-drawn graphics. Would love to see this expanded to a full platform/puzzle game.

Like the drawing style and think it would have been a nice touch if the writing was hand done also. Interesting game and the story is a good twist.

Full game! Full game! Full game!

I like the game. It's a pitty you hadn't enough time for the story. Thank you for that game.

awesome style, no gameplay value however :)
could be made really fun!

Thanks everybody for the comments =)

I added a post-mortem post, http://www.ludumdare.com/compo/2014/05/02/the-crack-post-mortem/

I like the art style, clean and simple, but expressive. For the gameplay, I think it lacks some variety. Maybe you could add more stuff in the level design so that the great story can be told in a more interesting way :)

Nice mood here, ending was pretty brutal!

I really liked the hand drawn style

Try to match the font with the drawing next time, it'll be more powerful :)

I want to play it more. if there are more scenes, it would be fantastic.